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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Drama
- Published: 05/28/2014
hell
Born 1970, M, from Punta gorda/F.L., United StatesTommy thought that things were not going to stay the same. There was a feeling that he had. That there was something bad was going to happen. It was the same feeling that his father had when he was shot the next day. It was a feeling that his family had and when they did some thing happened to that person that had that feeling. It was as if they could feel that their life was about to end. Tommy knew that this just might be the end he did not want.
He went on a walk as he thought of all the people that were killed. There was the feeling and it was very strong, like whatever was going to happen was going to happen soon. It was true, for a van came out of nowhere. A man came out of it and knocked out Tommy and put him in the van. Tommy woke up to being tied to a chair. There he saw the one man that he hated the most. "I see you are awake. I wanted you see my face before I killed you." What the guy did not know was that Tommy always kept a knife in his back pocket. It was that knife that helped him cut the ropes then cut the mans neck.
The others did not do anything for they saw the one they called boss dead. It was a shock to them and as they were like that Tommy got out of there. He knew then that he would have to be more careful what he did from now on or he might end up dead.
hell(Leo Laclair)
Tommy thought that things were not going to stay the same. There was a feeling that he had. That there was something bad was going to happen. It was the same feeling that his father had when he was shot the next day. It was a feeling that his family had and when they did some thing happened to that person that had that feeling. It was as if they could feel that their life was about to end. Tommy knew that this just might be the end he did not want.
He went on a walk as he thought of all the people that were killed. There was the feeling and it was very strong, like whatever was going to happen was going to happen soon. It was true, for a van came out of nowhere. A man came out of it and knocked out Tommy and put him in the van. Tommy woke up to being tied to a chair. There he saw the one man that he hated the most. "I see you are awake. I wanted you see my face before I killed you." What the guy did not know was that Tommy always kept a knife in his back pocket. It was that knife that helped him cut the ropes then cut the mans neck.
The others did not do anything for they saw the one they called boss dead. It was a shock to them and as they were like that Tommy got out of there. He knew then that he would have to be more careful what he did from now on or he might end up dead.
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