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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Life Changing Decisions/Events
- Published: 11/11/2012
The Crush
Born 1999, F, from Brownsville,texas, United StatesIt all started on September 4. It was a very hot and sunny day. It was also the first day of high school and there was a rumor of a not so pretty new girl that would attend that semester. When they rumors started to spread all around the school all you heard in the hall and in the classes was “we finally have someone to bully!” As every other high school all the kids already has a group of friends or people that they can talk to but for Krystal that was going to be one of her biggest problems. When Krystal walked into her first class the first guy she saw was the guy that would destroy her life forever without her knowing. His name was Jovan. He was a very popular guy. He joined every sport he could every year. All the girls wanted to be his girlfriend but he had a girlfriend. Jovan and Dianey have been a couple for already two years now but Krystal has no clues what so ever. That day everyone made fun of Krystal because she wasn’t pretty or just because of the simple fact that she was the “new girl”. All through the day Krystal couldn’t stop thinking about Jovan yet she didn’t know what was about to hit her. On her way to lunch she bumped into Dianey. What a big mistake had she made? All the school was laughing but Krystal tried to explain to Dianey but she didn’t what to listen. When Dianey went back to her friends to clean up herself she said, “ I swear I am going to kill her!! She will regret ever being born. I’ll make sure of that, even if it is the last thing I DO!!!!!!” On the other side of the cafeteria Jovan comes in and asks Krystal “ What happened!? I heard loud screams” Krystal responded “ I bumped all of my lunch into this girl named “Dianey” and she got all upset and went to clean up herself with her stupid friends.” Jovan played along until he ended the conversation but when he got to his table his friends had a little surprise for Jovan. When Jovan sat down his friends asked him, “ Hey where were you last night? We were waiting for you at Victor’s house after practice but you never showed up even after we all send you like 20 messages.” Jovan stayed quiet for a moment trying to look for a story to tell his friends but failed so he said the first thing that came up to his head. He said, “ I was at my grandma’s house.” Although he answered with a lot of confidence that his friends would by his story his best friend answered “ Really because we called your grandma and she said that you were not there!” Jovan with a pale look on his face went silent for a moment. He didn’t know what to say but then is when the bell rang and he went running as fast as he could to his class and for the rest of the day he was silent and finding from everyone. It was the end of the day when his best friend Victor decided to follow his until he was far from school but not to close to his house. When the perfect moment came he took Jovan from behind and then tried to bet him up for a while then he said, “You are going to pay for going out with my girlfriend!! I swear if you don’t do what I say you and that new girl plus your girlfriend will pay the consequences!!!!” A few days passed by and Victor send Jovan a text message it read, “ Meet me at the back of the school or they will pay!!!!” Jovan followed Victor’s message and at the end of the day went to go meet Victor at the back of the school. When he got there Victor was gone but there was a note left behind that said, “You have to get the new girl Krystal to have sex with you or else!!!!” when Jovan finish reading the letter he knew he had to do it but if he didn’t many people would have to pay for his mistake. All day and for the rest of the week Jovan thought of that very same note until he realized he couldn’t do it, he didn’t like the new girl but he understood that he couldn’t do that to that poor girl. After thinking and thinking about what he had to do he decided he had to do it, all of his friends and himself depended on his decision. A week had passed since he had made his decision, he had planned out everything but the hardest part was that Krystal really liked him and in his mind Krystal was just going to be another girl in his bead. Everyday he had the same thought until one day he went to school, when he walked in to school he notice everyone was looking and laughing at him. He really didn’t know what was happening until Dianey came and slapped him while she said, “I can’t believe that you and the new girl…” Jovan felt so mad that he felt in that very same moment and promised to himself, “I am going to make that new girl pay for everything that has happened to me!!!” A month later that new girl (Krystal) was on the news, they had had found her raped, dead, and with a note that said “I shouldn’t have to pay for what has happened to you, the only thing I have done is like you with all my heart but I guess your reputation is more important then the life of others!!! Hope one day you stand up for what you did and regret all the mistakes you have made. Hope some day you learn your lesson and you find your peace in some place” Later Jovan went to jail for the sexual harassment and for the cause of suicide of Krystal. The judge order him life in prison and later he understood what Krystal had told him the other day,” People shouldn’t pay for the mistakes of others, you only get one life so live it the right way because if you don’t you will regret it for the rest of your life!” In jail Jovan learned that just because you are the new girl/boy you shouldn’t bully anyone and for no reason should you rape or kill anyone!!!
The Crush(Samantha A. Davila) It all started on September 4. It was a very hot and sunny day. It was also the first day of high school and there was a rumor of a not so pretty new girl that would attend that semester. When they rumors started to spread all around the school all you heard in the hall and in the classes was “we finally have someone to bully!” As every other high school all the kids already has a group of friends or people that they can talk to but for Krystal that was going to be one of her biggest problems. When Krystal walked into her first class the first guy she saw was the guy that would destroy her life forever without her knowing. His name was Jovan. He was a very popular guy. He joined every sport he could every year. All the girls wanted to be his girlfriend but he had a girlfriend. Jovan and Dianey have been a couple for already two years now but Krystal has no clues what so ever. That day everyone made fun of Krystal because she wasn’t pretty or just because of the simple fact that she was the “new girl”. All through the day Krystal couldn’t stop thinking about Jovan yet she didn’t know what was about to hit her. On her way to lunch she bumped into Dianey. What a big mistake had she made? All the school was laughing but Krystal tried to explain to Dianey but she didn’t what to listen. When Dianey went back to her friends to clean up herself she said, “ I swear I am going to kill her!! She will regret ever being born. I’ll make sure of that, even if it is the last thing I DO!!!!!!” On the other side of the cafeteria Jovan comes in and asks Krystal “ What happened!? I heard loud screams” Krystal responded “ I bumped all of my lunch into this girl named “Dianey” and she got all upset and went to clean up herself with her stupid friends.” Jovan played along until he ended the conversation but when he got to his table his friends had a little surprise for Jovan. When Jovan sat down his friends asked him, “ Hey where were you last night? We were waiting for you at Victor’s house after practice but you never showed up even after we all send you like 20 messages.” Jovan stayed quiet for a moment trying to look for a story to tell his friends but failed so he said the first thing that came up to his head. He said, “ I was at my grandma’s house.” Although he answered with a lot of confidence that his friends would by his story his best friend answered “ Really because we called your grandma and she said that you were not there!” Jovan with a pale look on his face went silent for a moment. He didn’t know what to say but then is when the bell rang and he went running as fast as he could to his class and for the rest of the day he was silent and finding from everyone. It was the end of the day when his best friend Victor decided to follow his until he was far from school but not to close to his house. When the perfect moment came he took Jovan from behind and then tried to bet him up for a while then he said, “You are going to pay for going out with my girlfriend!! I swear if you don’t do what I say you and that new girl plus your girlfriend will pay the consequences!!!!” A few days passed by and Victor send Jovan a text message it read, “ Meet me at the back of the school or they will pay!!!!” Jovan followed Victor’s message and at the end of the day went to go meet Victor at the back of the school. When he got there Victor was gone but there was a note left behind that said, “You have to get the new girl Krystal to have sex with you or else!!!!” when Jovan finish reading the letter he knew he had to do it but if he didn’t many people would have to pay for his mistake. All day and for the rest of the week Jovan thought of that very same note until he realized he couldn’t do it, he didn’t like the new girl but he understood that he couldn’t do that to that poor girl. After thinking and thinking about what he had to do he decided he had to do it, all of his friends and himself depended on his decision. A week had passed since he had made his decision, he had planned out everything but the hardest part was that Krystal really liked him and in his mind Krystal was just going to be another girl in his bead. Everyday he had the same thought until one day he went to school, when he walked in to school he notice everyone was looking and laughing at him. He really didn’t know what was happening until Dianey came and slapped him while she said, “I can’t believe that you and the new girl…” Jovan felt so mad that he felt in that very same moment and promised to himself, “I am going to make that new girl pay for everything that has happened to me!!!” A month later that new girl (Krystal) was on the news, they had had found her raped, dead, and with a note that said “I shouldn’t have to pay for what has happened to you, the only thing I have done is like you with all my heart but I guess your reputation is more important then the life of others!!! Hope one day you stand up for what you did and regret all the mistakes you have made. Hope some day you learn your lesson and you find your peace in some place” Later Jovan went to jail for the sexual harassment and for the cause of suicide of Krystal. The judge order him life in prison and later he understood what Krystal had told him the other day,” People shouldn’t pay for the mistakes of others, you only get one life so live it the right way because if you don’t you will regret it for the rest of your life!” In jail Jovan learned that just because you are the new girl/boy you shouldn’t bully anyone and for no reason should you rape or kill anyone!!!
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