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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Family
- Published: 10/07/2012
Polly
Born 2000, F, from Bristol, United StatesPolly shone in the light like no other, and the sunlight brang out her golden highlights which just reached her hips. Her rosey cheeks illuminated her face, and her dark red lips were forever sealed.
The man looked her up from head to toe and knew instantly that she was just right. He was sure that she would last longer than most of the others. He had already bout four this year. His wife always frowned apon him when he brought yet another one home and insisted that he was wasting his money. He didn't know what drew him to this one but when his eyes fell on her long golden curls, and her tight revealing dress he was sure this was the one.
He got into the car with her opposite him, in the passenger seat. He thought that he should treat her like a real person, or a real woman anyway. The journey home was not long but the rain made the ride seem longer than normal, but eventually he pulled up at his drive. He owned quite a large house with many rooms that were cheaply decorated. He believed that money should be spent on other things except from wallpapers, carpets and curtains. His wife strongly disagreed but she begged to differ. A few flowers outlined the basic border of the plain coloured house which had been planted by the wife reluctantly; she hated mud and spent most of her time sorting out the twins.
As the man entered the door, he called out for his wife but he assumed that she hadn't arrived from work yet so he started to climb the stairs. The hallway was cluttered with coats and umbrellas and shoes and a lot of other random items. He reached the top of the stairs, and remembered that he had left Polly in the car. She hadn't caught his attention in the car at all so he had forgotten that she was there. So he went and got her out the car and entered his daughters room. He held her around the chest, and he placed her on his daughters bed. He refixed her precious curls, and made sure her dress had no creases in it. She looked perfect.
He was reading the newspaper when he heard the door open and the chaos start. Maddie ran in in her grubby school uniform, "Daddy! Daddy, did you get her Daddy?" she squealed with excitment. She jumped on her Daddy's lap and smiled sweetly.
"She's upstairs, on your bed darling!" he replied in a kind voice. Immediatly she ran up the winding stairs and into her bedroom. fixed lips. Her eyes fell upon a beautiful doll with red rosy cheeks, golden hair and pink lips...
Polly(Charis)
Polly shone in the light like no other, and the sunlight brang out her golden highlights which just reached her hips. Her rosey cheeks illuminated her face, and her dark red lips were forever sealed.
The man looked her up from head to toe and knew instantly that she was just right. He was sure that she would last longer than most of the others. He had already bout four this year. His wife always frowned apon him when he brought yet another one home and insisted that he was wasting his money. He didn't know what drew him to this one but when his eyes fell on her long golden curls, and her tight revealing dress he was sure this was the one.
He got into the car with her opposite him, in the passenger seat. He thought that he should treat her like a real person, or a real woman anyway. The journey home was not long but the rain made the ride seem longer than normal, but eventually he pulled up at his drive. He owned quite a large house with many rooms that were cheaply decorated. He believed that money should be spent on other things except from wallpapers, carpets and curtains. His wife strongly disagreed but she begged to differ. A few flowers outlined the basic border of the plain coloured house which had been planted by the wife reluctantly; she hated mud and spent most of her time sorting out the twins.
As the man entered the door, he called out for his wife but he assumed that she hadn't arrived from work yet so he started to climb the stairs. The hallway was cluttered with coats and umbrellas and shoes and a lot of other random items. He reached the top of the stairs, and remembered that he had left Polly in the car. She hadn't caught his attention in the car at all so he had forgotten that she was there. So he went and got her out the car and entered his daughters room. He held her around the chest, and he placed her on his daughters bed. He refixed her precious curls, and made sure her dress had no creases in it. She looked perfect.
He was reading the newspaper when he heard the door open and the chaos start. Maddie ran in in her grubby school uniform, "Daddy! Daddy, did you get her Daddy?" she squealed with excitment. She jumped on her Daddy's lap and smiled sweetly.
"She's upstairs, on your bed darling!" he replied in a kind voice. Immediatly she ran up the winding stairs and into her bedroom. fixed lips. Her eyes fell upon a beautiful doll with red rosy cheeks, golden hair and pink lips...
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