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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
- Published: 08/01/2012
The Magic Tunnel
Born 2000, M, from Peterlee, United KingdomThe Magic Tunnel!
One fine summer morning, two boys, Luke and tom were playing in their garden. Luke had brown hair and green eyes. He was wearing a pair of ripped denim jeans and a white England rugby shirt. Tom had blond hair and blue eyes. He had on a pair of denim jeans as well, but not ripped, and a green t-shirt. Back to the garden, the two boys were playing with a yellow round ball. Tom was not very good because he threw the ball into the trees at the back of Luke’s garden. So, they went behind the trees and to their amazement, found a hole with a purple thing inside it. For a moment, there was no sound from the boys the only sound was the summer morning sounds like the birds and the light breeze. Tom said to Luke, "what do you think it is?" Luke suddenly jumped. He slowly ducked and weaved himself through the sticks and leaves and said "I don’t know, but we will find out in a bit"
They both went through and when they came out on the other side were astonished to find lots of different people half men/women and half animals. The most fancy looking was half rhino who was the king of that place. He said calmly "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? THIS IS FOR THE WOMBAT PEOPLE ONLY." The boys asked, "where is here?" He said "here is womblton land" then he shouted "CALM DOWN EVERYONE, THEY ARE NICE PEOPLE." They were there for a few hours before they heard Luke’s mum shout, "TIME FOR TEA BOYS." They ran back to the entrance said good bye, went through, ran inside the house and were telling Luke’s mum what they did all day.
THE END!!!!!!!
The Magic Tunnel(luke greg)
The Magic Tunnel!
One fine summer morning, two boys, Luke and tom were playing in their garden. Luke had brown hair and green eyes. He was wearing a pair of ripped denim jeans and a white England rugby shirt. Tom had blond hair and blue eyes. He had on a pair of denim jeans as well, but not ripped, and a green t-shirt. Back to the garden, the two boys were playing with a yellow round ball. Tom was not very good because he threw the ball into the trees at the back of Luke’s garden. So, they went behind the trees and to their amazement, found a hole with a purple thing inside it. For a moment, there was no sound from the boys the only sound was the summer morning sounds like the birds and the light breeze. Tom said to Luke, "what do you think it is?" Luke suddenly jumped. He slowly ducked and weaved himself through the sticks and leaves and said "I don’t know, but we will find out in a bit"
They both went through and when they came out on the other side were astonished to find lots of different people half men/women and half animals. The most fancy looking was half rhino who was the king of that place. He said calmly "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? THIS IS FOR THE WOMBAT PEOPLE ONLY." The boys asked, "where is here?" He said "here is womblton land" then he shouted "CALM DOWN EVERYONE, THEY ARE NICE PEOPLE." They were there for a few hours before they heard Luke’s mum shout, "TIME FOR TEA BOYS." They ran back to the entrance said good bye, went through, ran inside the house and were telling Luke’s mum what they did all day.
THE END!!!!!!!
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