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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 02/10/2012
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Aelya Mohsin
February 10, 2012
Extra Terrestrial
Dear Senseless Diary,
Hello, my stupid Diary. I don’t even know why I’m writing in you. Anyway, my name is Charlie Anderson. I’m writing this because every time something new, outrageous, enormous, or adventurous happens, I will quickly report it to you. I’m doing this because first, boredom has taken over me, and second, so that I can distribute my marvelous adventures with my grandkids (if I live until then). Before I move on, I need to tell you about my family background. I have a breathtaking and stunning family that everyone just wishes they had. I have a wife, her name is Ashley Anderson, and she is gorgeous, and has an amazing personality! I have a daughter named Sarah who is seven years old, and my son Jack who is nine. I work for NASA, and for some odd reason, I’m obsessed with Aliens! I just want to touch an Alien’s head one day. Aliens will take over Earth someday, IT’S TRUE! That’s why people always spot UFOs in the sky… it’s a sign! And someday, just someday, I’ll go on a magical trip that will make history.
December 21st 2012:
Today was the day Earth was completely destroyed. There were tremendous fires everywhere, with sizzling ashes polluting the air that lasted for hours. Crackling flames were everywhere. Mad mobs of people were running from left to right, then right to left, and everything was out of order. I could not keep up with all of it. The ground was shaking beneath my 12 ½ -sized feet. People who were in buildings above me were falling like meteoroids crashing from the sky. The sky was a terrifying, dark shade of grey. All I could hear was crashing, and all I could see with my bare eyes was that everything was burning. Not to forget about ambulance sirens whistling through my terrified mind, which eventually became a familiar tune to me.
Something touched my hand, and I wondered what it was – so I turned around, and I spotted my wife. She had a frightened expression, and Sarah and Jack were wrapped around her with fear, tears on their pale cheeks that had lost their color from terror. I looked behind my shoulder and saw a mother and her little baby burning, burning until they turned into ashes. My family and I were choking from the contaminated air. Slowly, the air was turning black, and at some point, it turned completely pitch black.
I quickly picked up Sarah with my left arm and Jack with my right. Ashley put her arm through my arm so we wouldn’t lose each other in the destruction. People were pulling on each other and then pushing. My family and I sadly had to elbow people to get through.
People were all over the place in America. We were heading towards NASA. Seeing as everything was all over the place, it was truly a tough time figuring out which way to go, but we managed. I couldn’t see life anywhere! We then spotted NASA, and were only a couple of steps away.
Finally, we reached NASA. My family and I just walked straight in, and I noticed no one was there. I observed the rocket and it was absolutely fine. I then dashed to the closet and dragged out all of the J-Wear and Astronaut spacesuits. I hand over three to Ashley, and she put them on herself, Sarah and Jack. My heart suddenly sank. How I could do such a thing? I thought to myself. I’m stupid, stupid, stupid, and lastly more stupid! I thought, while hitting my head.
“Stay here Ashley, don’t move a muscle!” I yelled as I ran to the exit.
I ran towards home, and didn’t have a chance to hear Ashley’s reply. On the way, while I was running, I knew in my mind there were only a couple of minutes left until the final explosion, but I had to try, I couldn’t give up just yet. And on the way home, I couldn’t be careful. People’s body parts were everywhere. I then saw our home… well, parts of it. I ran to it like a child runs in when they smell chocolate chip cookies, but sadly there weren’t any. Those days were gone, weren’t they? The roof was on the ground, it was all a big wreck. Shattered mirrors were everywhere. I remembered my cat, Mrs. Hops. Her tail was cut off and one eye wasn’t where it was supposed to be, and her red-colored blood covered her white and brown fluffy fur. I felt like crying, it was terrible. I looked under everywhere for him, but there was no sign of him.
“Dad” I said while looking under the chair that was still, oddly, in good condition.
“Franklin?” I said while paying attention to everything.
“Oulu, gulp” something said mysteriously.
I got scared for a second, and thought, what was that? I then noticed the upside-down toilet moving. Oh god, what the…? I thought in my confused mind. I took little steps towards the toilet and saw hair. I quickly flipped the toilet, and noticed it was dad who was under the toilet. He was drinking toilet water! EW, EW, EW!
“Dad, what were you doing there?” I said, puzzled with a shocked expression.
“Oh Charlie, I couldn’t find you guys and so I just mysteriously ended here. The water is yummy.” Franklin explained to me.
“Well, hurry up! Do you want to die here?” I said while helping the big man up.
Since dad couldn’t walk without his walking stick, I decided to put him up on my shoulders and run towards NASA. I ran like the speed of light. We finally got there, and I put on the J-Wear and Astronaut Spacesuits and a diaper on (I have a small bladder) and so did dad. I saw that Ashley had started the rocket, and thought to myself, man, I taught her well. I entered the rocket and made sure everyone was in there.
“Check, check, check, check, and check”. I said while counting everyone.
Five, four, three, two, one, blast off! We all held each other’s hands, and successfully took off. I sat on the chair, controlling which way the rocket would go. Hmm, I thought, the bordering planet to Earth is Mars, and apparently there’s existence over there! Five hours passed, ten hours passed, and I felt hungry. I looked in the fridge and found some yummy space food. I just ate it bit by bit, so it would last a long time. The kids, Ashley and dad already ate something and were taking a nap. I even watched Katy Perry and Kanye West dancing to their music video for E.T. I enjoyed it for as long as I could.
After thirty-five hours, we finally reached Mars. I landed the rocket as cautiously as I could and opened the doors. I felt like such a boss. Everyone got out of the rocket and then I locked it. As I walked out, I saw green slimy trails. We all followed them and it led us to a bunch of Aliens sitting down for a conference. Everything was quiet until we walked in.
“Hi…” I said to all of the Aliens.
Suddenly, they all turned around and looked at my family and me from top to bottom, and had surprised expressions on their faces.
“GRAB THEM,” said the Alien with a golden dot on both of his tentacles.
They took hold of us and took us to a gloomy, daunting, unattractive room. They asked us private questions independently. I told them we were innocent, and surprisingly they believed us, and yes we were innocent. They let us go and told us to follow them. We followed them and they led us back to the Alien conference. They spoke English to the rest of the Aliens and conferred about us, and guess what! We could now spend the rest of our lives here!
“Thank you so much for letting us stay here! Oh, and you are?” I asked blissfully.
“Aha, yeah I’m Mr. Stinky Sock, but you can call me Stinky. Also, I rule Mars, so don’t mess with me, or else.” said Mr. Stinky Sock, the arrogant Alien that I would sadly have to listen to.
Oh okay, I thought. Did that green thing just give me a threat? Ashley saw the anger on my face and came over to help me let it all out. Before I could continue, I remembered I had to relax or there would be a problem. I sucked it up, put a smile on my face and just walked away.
The Aliens were really nice, and I guess they were welcoming. They asked me where I worked, and I told them I worked for NASA. They were so surprised they gave me a job in Alien NUSA (It’s NUSA because Aliens don’t have rockets, they have UFOs).
The first day of work was alright. I came home, and ate lunch. But then didn’t know what to do. We couldn’t really buy anything yet; we only had a house, beds, and food. We were going to get a TV real soon.
December 23, 2011:
Today was my second day at work. I was doing well, we were supposed to spy on Earth, but since there was no more Earth, we were spying on other planets such as Uranus. Until, that ugly green thing came sliming towards me.
“Listen Charles, you want to live here, you got to do us all a favor. That favor is, turn into one of us. Turn into a nice green Alien,” said the bossy named Stinky.
“No, no one from my family will. I don’t want to leave green trails like you guys. You guys look disgusting and I’m happy the way I’m created. Back off you hideous modified fungus-goo. Oh, and I don’t care about what you said will happen,” I said proudly, standing up for myself. “You’re a wart on a gigantic monkey’s butt. GO AWAY!”
He looked at me, shocked. All three of his legs started moving and he walked away just as I walked away. To let my anger all out, I went out for a long drive. As I reached home, no one was peeking through the windows. Sarah normally did. When I went inside no one was there except dad. I asked him where everyone went but he had no clue. I got worried and tried to call Sarah’s cell but it was switched off. Have they have been abducted? I thought. I quickly called Stinky’s phone and he answered. I told him that whatever he did or said, I deserved it and that I was sorry. He didn’t forgive me, so I got angry and insulted him by calling him a hippo, and then hung up. I looked all around Mars – but still no sign. I then returned home. My wife and kids meant the whole world to me; I would give up my whole life for them, without them I was nothing. I was looking for dad, but couldn’t seem to find him.
“DAD!” I yelled as loud as I could.
I ran around the house, but I immediately noticed that half of my house was vandalized: the bathroom, living room, family room, Sarah’s bedroom, Jack’s bedroom. Only my bedroom and dad’s was left alone. As I went into dad’s room, on the wall read “Told you so.” I freaked out – I went pale, it was like Mars was spinning. I got a massive headache. I grabbed a knife, locked my bedroom door, and thought, “We all say ‘I would kill for my family, or I would die for my family’ but would you really? I mean, when you’re put in that situation, would you? I started cutting my hands. They became bloody all over. I started cutting my legs too. I couldn’t handle it.
…So good-bye, dear Diary; today is the day I’m finally throwing you out. Stinky is here, and I must go deal with him now. Wish me luck.
Extra - Terrestrial(Aelya)
Aelya Mohsin
February 10, 2012
Extra Terrestrial
Dear Senseless Diary,
Hello, my stupid Diary. I don’t even know why I’m writing in you. Anyway, my name is Charlie Anderson. I’m writing this because every time something new, outrageous, enormous, or adventurous happens, I will quickly report it to you. I’m doing this because first, boredom has taken over me, and second, so that I can distribute my marvelous adventures with my grandkids (if I live until then). Before I move on, I need to tell you about my family background. I have a breathtaking and stunning family that everyone just wishes they had. I have a wife, her name is Ashley Anderson, and she is gorgeous, and has an amazing personality! I have a daughter named Sarah who is seven years old, and my son Jack who is nine. I work for NASA, and for some odd reason, I’m obsessed with Aliens! I just want to touch an Alien’s head one day. Aliens will take over Earth someday, IT’S TRUE! That’s why people always spot UFOs in the sky… it’s a sign! And someday, just someday, I’ll go on a magical trip that will make history.
December 21st 2012:
Today was the day Earth was completely destroyed. There were tremendous fires everywhere, with sizzling ashes polluting the air that lasted for hours. Crackling flames were everywhere. Mad mobs of people were running from left to right, then right to left, and everything was out of order. I could not keep up with all of it. The ground was shaking beneath my 12 ½ -sized feet. People who were in buildings above me were falling like meteoroids crashing from the sky. The sky was a terrifying, dark shade of grey. All I could hear was crashing, and all I could see with my bare eyes was that everything was burning. Not to forget about ambulance sirens whistling through my terrified mind, which eventually became a familiar tune to me.
Something touched my hand, and I wondered what it was – so I turned around, and I spotted my wife. She had a frightened expression, and Sarah and Jack were wrapped around her with fear, tears on their pale cheeks that had lost their color from terror. I looked behind my shoulder and saw a mother and her little baby burning, burning until they turned into ashes. My family and I were choking from the contaminated air. Slowly, the air was turning black, and at some point, it turned completely pitch black.
I quickly picked up Sarah with my left arm and Jack with my right. Ashley put her arm through my arm so we wouldn’t lose each other in the destruction. People were pulling on each other and then pushing. My family and I sadly had to elbow people to get through.
People were all over the place in America. We were heading towards NASA. Seeing as everything was all over the place, it was truly a tough time figuring out which way to go, but we managed. I couldn’t see life anywhere! We then spotted NASA, and were only a couple of steps away.
Finally, we reached NASA. My family and I just walked straight in, and I noticed no one was there. I observed the rocket and it was absolutely fine. I then dashed to the closet and dragged out all of the J-Wear and Astronaut spacesuits. I hand over three to Ashley, and she put them on herself, Sarah and Jack. My heart suddenly sank. How I could do such a thing? I thought to myself. I’m stupid, stupid, stupid, and lastly more stupid! I thought, while hitting my head.
“Stay here Ashley, don’t move a muscle!” I yelled as I ran to the exit.
I ran towards home, and didn’t have a chance to hear Ashley’s reply. On the way, while I was running, I knew in my mind there were only a couple of minutes left until the final explosion, but I had to try, I couldn’t give up just yet. And on the way home, I couldn’t be careful. People’s body parts were everywhere. I then saw our home… well, parts of it. I ran to it like a child runs in when they smell chocolate chip cookies, but sadly there weren’t any. Those days were gone, weren’t they? The roof was on the ground, it was all a big wreck. Shattered mirrors were everywhere. I remembered my cat, Mrs. Hops. Her tail was cut off and one eye wasn’t where it was supposed to be, and her red-colored blood covered her white and brown fluffy fur. I felt like crying, it was terrible. I looked under everywhere for him, but there was no sign of him.
“Dad” I said while looking under the chair that was still, oddly, in good condition.
“Franklin?” I said while paying attention to everything.
“Oulu, gulp” something said mysteriously.
I got scared for a second, and thought, what was that? I then noticed the upside-down toilet moving. Oh god, what the…? I thought in my confused mind. I took little steps towards the toilet and saw hair. I quickly flipped the toilet, and noticed it was dad who was under the toilet. He was drinking toilet water! EW, EW, EW!
“Dad, what were you doing there?” I said, puzzled with a shocked expression.
“Oh Charlie, I couldn’t find you guys and so I just mysteriously ended here. The water is yummy.” Franklin explained to me.
“Well, hurry up! Do you want to die here?” I said while helping the big man up.
Since dad couldn’t walk without his walking stick, I decided to put him up on my shoulders and run towards NASA. I ran like the speed of light. We finally got there, and I put on the J-Wear and Astronaut Spacesuits and a diaper on (I have a small bladder) and so did dad. I saw that Ashley had started the rocket, and thought to myself, man, I taught her well. I entered the rocket and made sure everyone was in there.
“Check, check, check, check, and check”. I said while counting everyone.
Five, four, three, two, one, blast off! We all held each other’s hands, and successfully took off. I sat on the chair, controlling which way the rocket would go. Hmm, I thought, the bordering planet to Earth is Mars, and apparently there’s existence over there! Five hours passed, ten hours passed, and I felt hungry. I looked in the fridge and found some yummy space food. I just ate it bit by bit, so it would last a long time. The kids, Ashley and dad already ate something and were taking a nap. I even watched Katy Perry and Kanye West dancing to their music video for E.T. I enjoyed it for as long as I could.
After thirty-five hours, we finally reached Mars. I landed the rocket as cautiously as I could and opened the doors. I felt like such a boss. Everyone got out of the rocket and then I locked it. As I walked out, I saw green slimy trails. We all followed them and it led us to a bunch of Aliens sitting down for a conference. Everything was quiet until we walked in.
“Hi…” I said to all of the Aliens.
Suddenly, they all turned around and looked at my family and me from top to bottom, and had surprised expressions on their faces.
“GRAB THEM,” said the Alien with a golden dot on both of his tentacles.
They took hold of us and took us to a gloomy, daunting, unattractive room. They asked us private questions independently. I told them we were innocent, and surprisingly they believed us, and yes we were innocent. They let us go and told us to follow them. We followed them and they led us back to the Alien conference. They spoke English to the rest of the Aliens and conferred about us, and guess what! We could now spend the rest of our lives here!
“Thank you so much for letting us stay here! Oh, and you are?” I asked blissfully.
“Aha, yeah I’m Mr. Stinky Sock, but you can call me Stinky. Also, I rule Mars, so don’t mess with me, or else.” said Mr. Stinky Sock, the arrogant Alien that I would sadly have to listen to.
Oh okay, I thought. Did that green thing just give me a threat? Ashley saw the anger on my face and came over to help me let it all out. Before I could continue, I remembered I had to relax or there would be a problem. I sucked it up, put a smile on my face and just walked away.
The Aliens were really nice, and I guess they were welcoming. They asked me where I worked, and I told them I worked for NASA. They were so surprised they gave me a job in Alien NUSA (It’s NUSA because Aliens don’t have rockets, they have UFOs).
The first day of work was alright. I came home, and ate lunch. But then didn’t know what to do. We couldn’t really buy anything yet; we only had a house, beds, and food. We were going to get a TV real soon.
December 23, 2011:
Today was my second day at work. I was doing well, we were supposed to spy on Earth, but since there was no more Earth, we were spying on other planets such as Uranus. Until, that ugly green thing came sliming towards me.
“Listen Charles, you want to live here, you got to do us all a favor. That favor is, turn into one of us. Turn into a nice green Alien,” said the bossy named Stinky.
“No, no one from my family will. I don’t want to leave green trails like you guys. You guys look disgusting and I’m happy the way I’m created. Back off you hideous modified fungus-goo. Oh, and I don’t care about what you said will happen,” I said proudly, standing up for myself. “You’re a wart on a gigantic monkey’s butt. GO AWAY!”
He looked at me, shocked. All three of his legs started moving and he walked away just as I walked away. To let my anger all out, I went out for a long drive. As I reached home, no one was peeking through the windows. Sarah normally did. When I went inside no one was there except dad. I asked him where everyone went but he had no clue. I got worried and tried to call Sarah’s cell but it was switched off. Have they have been abducted? I thought. I quickly called Stinky’s phone and he answered. I told him that whatever he did or said, I deserved it and that I was sorry. He didn’t forgive me, so I got angry and insulted him by calling him a hippo, and then hung up. I looked all around Mars – but still no sign. I then returned home. My wife and kids meant the whole world to me; I would give up my whole life for them, without them I was nothing. I was looking for dad, but couldn’t seem to find him.
“DAD!” I yelled as loud as I could.
I ran around the house, but I immediately noticed that half of my house was vandalized: the bathroom, living room, family room, Sarah’s bedroom, Jack’s bedroom. Only my bedroom and dad’s was left alone. As I went into dad’s room, on the wall read “Told you so.” I freaked out – I went pale, it was like Mars was spinning. I got a massive headache. I grabbed a knife, locked my bedroom door, and thought, “We all say ‘I would kill for my family, or I would die for my family’ but would you really? I mean, when you’re put in that situation, would you? I started cutting my hands. They became bloody all over. I started cutting my legs too. I couldn’t handle it.
…So good-bye, dear Diary; today is the day I’m finally throwing you out. Stinky is here, and I must go deal with him now. Wish me luck.
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