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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Other / Not Listed
- Published: 08/20/2011
Funky Fairy Tales
Born 1998, F, from Walpole/Massachusetts, United StatesGoldilocks sat in the little rocking chair that was just right for her. She was getting rather bored sitting in the big house all alone. She went upstairs to take a nap but it seemed that she just couldn't fall asleep in the hard bed or the soft bed, so she just decided not to try the other bed. She picked up the telephone and called her friend Gretel's cell phone. An old lady picked up the phone and said that Gretel and her brother were busy right now. Goldilocks then called her friend Red. "Hey girl," Goldie said when Red picked up. "Oh my gosh, girl you would not believe what just happened to me! So this wolf guy totally dressed up as my grandma and tried to eat me and everything!" Red told her the whole story. "No way that's crazy! So you had to be cut out by a hunter? Oh my gosh!" "I know right! Girl it was crazy!", said Red. "So you want to go shopping? You totally need a new outfit after that!" "Okay girl let's go to the Crystal Ball Mall."
When the two girls got there they went right into their favorite store, The Poison Apple. "Oh no! Look who it is" said Goldie, pointing to Cinderella and Brier-Rose in the ball gown section. "No doubt Cindy's getting a new dress. I heard that she got pumpkin all over her last one!" Red said, right before Brier-Rose spotted them. "Well well well, if it isn't Red and Goldie! What big man-hands you have!" "Hi Brier-Rose" Goldilocks mumbled. "Hey girls," Cinderella smiled, "what brings you here?" "Hello Cindy," Red sneared, looking at the ball gown in her hands, "what's the matter with your other dress? Did your rat friends mess it up?" "Hahaha oh you've always been so funny Red! No, I donated it to CWBG, Children Without Ball Gowns." "That's right. Cinderella always helps out those in need!" Brier-Rose said. "Well we best be going, we have a wicked witch to deal with," said Goldilocks. "I do believe we just dealt with two a moment ago," Red whispered when they left.
As they walked throughout the mall they stopped to sit down on a bench and saw Little Bo Peep. "Hey look it's Bo! Hey Bo why are you crying?" asked Red. "Hi Red, hi Goldie. I'm just upset because I lost my sheep again." "Again?" said Goldilocks, That's like the fifth time this week!" "I know!" said Bo starting to cry even harder. "Okay, I love Bo and all but this girl is turning into a charity case!" whispered Red. "Look it's Miss Muffet! Let's get her to help Bo, it will take her mind off of that spider she saw earlier." "Hey Miss Muffet!" yelled Red, "Want to help Bo Peep find her sheep?" "Of course Bo!" she said. "Let's get out of here before they ask us to help!" Goldilocks whisperer.
They went into three more stores and at the end of the day Goldie got a new curler and Red got a new red cape and a new basket. "Well I have to go check on my Grandma. You can come over tonight for a sleepover if you want to." "Yeah sure! Thanks Red, I don't want to go back and get in trouble with those bears again!" The two girls laughed and walked home.
Funky Fairy Tales(Bridget)
Goldilocks sat in the little rocking chair that was just right for her. She was getting rather bored sitting in the big house all alone. She went upstairs to take a nap but it seemed that she just couldn't fall asleep in the hard bed or the soft bed, so she just decided not to try the other bed. She picked up the telephone and called her friend Gretel's cell phone. An old lady picked up the phone and said that Gretel and her brother were busy right now. Goldilocks then called her friend Red. "Hey girl," Goldie said when Red picked up. "Oh my gosh, girl you would not believe what just happened to me! So this wolf guy totally dressed up as my grandma and tried to eat me and everything!" Red told her the whole story. "No way that's crazy! So you had to be cut out by a hunter? Oh my gosh!" "I know right! Girl it was crazy!", said Red. "So you want to go shopping? You totally need a new outfit after that!" "Okay girl let's go to the Crystal Ball Mall."
When the two girls got there they went right into their favorite store, The Poison Apple. "Oh no! Look who it is" said Goldie, pointing to Cinderella and Brier-Rose in the ball gown section. "No doubt Cindy's getting a new dress. I heard that she got pumpkin all over her last one!" Red said, right before Brier-Rose spotted them. "Well well well, if it isn't Red and Goldie! What big man-hands you have!" "Hi Brier-Rose" Goldilocks mumbled. "Hey girls," Cinderella smiled, "what brings you here?" "Hello Cindy," Red sneared, looking at the ball gown in her hands, "what's the matter with your other dress? Did your rat friends mess it up?" "Hahaha oh you've always been so funny Red! No, I donated it to CWBG, Children Without Ball Gowns." "That's right. Cinderella always helps out those in need!" Brier-Rose said. "Well we best be going, we have a wicked witch to deal with," said Goldilocks. "I do believe we just dealt with two a moment ago," Red whispered when they left.
As they walked throughout the mall they stopped to sit down on a bench and saw Little Bo Peep. "Hey look it's Bo! Hey Bo why are you crying?" asked Red. "Hi Red, hi Goldie. I'm just upset because I lost my sheep again." "Again?" said Goldilocks, That's like the fifth time this week!" "I know!" said Bo starting to cry even harder. "Okay, I love Bo and all but this girl is turning into a charity case!" whispered Red. "Look it's Miss Muffet! Let's get her to help Bo, it will take her mind off of that spider she saw earlier." "Hey Miss Muffet!" yelled Red, "Want to help Bo Peep find her sheep?" "Of course Bo!" she said. "Let's get out of here before they ask us to help!" Goldilocks whisperer.
They went into three more stores and at the end of the day Goldie got a new curler and Red got a new red cape and a new basket. "Well I have to go check on my Grandma. You can come over tonight for a sleepover if you want to." "Yeah sure! Thanks Red, I don't want to go back and get in trouble with those bears again!" The two girls laughed and walked home.
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