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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 07/18/2024
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Born 1959, F, from Buenos Aires, ArgentinaLooking at old buildings,
I hopelessly wonder,
about all the love stories
trapped in their stone walls.
Lookng at our blue river,
I hopefully wonder
if its mysterious waters
remember us as we were,
as we used to be long ago,
before the hourglass shattered
grieving the end of our story.
Elizabeth Aldam July 18 ,2024
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Looking at old buildings,
I hopelessly wonder,
about all the love stories
trapped in their stone walls.
Lookng at our blue river,
I hopefully wonder
if its mysterious waters
remember us as we were,
as we used to be long ago,
before the hourglass shattered
grieving the end of our story.
Elizabeth Aldam July 18 ,2024
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Shelly Garrod
07/19/2024Short, but a very deep thought provoking poem. Nice work Elizabeth.
Blessings, Shelly
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Cheryl Ryan
07/19/2024Great poem. Too short but long enough to sufficiently tease me.
Thank you for sharing!
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Joel Kiula
07/18/2024A wonderful poem, sometimes i wonder of how many things that have happened and no one was there to tell a tale.
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