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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 03/29/2024
Kally Mahzoo and The Hobo Incident
Born 1951, M, from Elliot Lake, Ontario., Canada![Kally Mahzoo and The Hobo Incident](/storage/story/A95CF65B-5DF2-D1E0-6B19-DF20CEA5099E_1711719573-image(285x285-crop).jpeg)
A Boy Named Kally Mahzoo
The Hobo Incident
In the quaint town of Riverbridge, nestled between the rolling hills and the meandering river, life was simple. The townsfolk knew each other, and the most exciting event was the weekly column in the Riverbridge Gazette by a 15-year-old boy named Kally Mahzoo.
One day, a stranger arrived in town. He was a hobo, with a scruffy beard and clothes that had seen better days. He set up camp under the bridge at the edge of town. Not long after his arrival, local stores began reporting thefts. The townsfolk were quick to point fingers at the stranger.
Kally, however, was not convinced. He had seen the stranger, talked to him, and found a certain honesty in his eyes. He decided to investigate.
Kally began his investigation by visiting the stores that reported thefts. He noted the items stolen - mostly food and necessities. He then visited the stranger’s camp under the bridge. The hobo welcomed him, offering him a seat on an old, worn-out rug.
Kally asked the stranger about the thefts. The stranger denied any involvement, his eyes reflecting sincerity. Kally believed him but needed evidence to convince the townsfolk.
Over the next few days, Kally kept a close eye on the stores. He noticed a pattern - the thefts occurred on the days when the stores were busiest. He also realized that the stolen items were always from the lower shelves, easily accessible to a child.
Kally decided to stake out the busiest store. Hiding behind a barrel, he watched as a group of children entered the store. They were from the neighboring town, known for their unruly behavior. As the store owner was busy attending to customers, one of the children slipped a loaf of bread into his bag.
Kally had found his culprits. He confronted the children, who, caught red-handed, confessed to the thefts. They had been stealing out of dare and necessity, their families too poor to afford even the basics.
Kally wrote about his findings in his column, clearing the stranger’s name. The townsfolk, ashamed of their quick judgment, apologized to the stranger. The store owners, realizing the children’s plight, decided to help their families.
The stranger, grateful to Kally, decided to move on, leaving behind a town that had learned a valuable lesson. And Kally, the boy named Kally Mahzoo, became a local hero, his column more popular than ever.
In Riverbridge, life returned to its simple rhythm, but with a newfound respect for the young boy who wrote for the Riverbridge Gazette. And under the bridge at the edge of town, where the hobo once camped, a sign was erected that read, “Judge not a book by its cover, for the truth lies within.”
Kally Mahzoo and The Hobo Incident(Donald Harry Roberts)
A Boy Named Kally Mahzoo
The Hobo Incident
In the quaint town of Riverbridge, nestled between the rolling hills and the meandering river, life was simple. The townsfolk knew each other, and the most exciting event was the weekly column in the Riverbridge Gazette by a 15-year-old boy named Kally Mahzoo.
One day, a stranger arrived in town. He was a hobo, with a scruffy beard and clothes that had seen better days. He set up camp under the bridge at the edge of town. Not long after his arrival, local stores began reporting thefts. The townsfolk were quick to point fingers at the stranger.
Kally, however, was not convinced. He had seen the stranger, talked to him, and found a certain honesty in his eyes. He decided to investigate.
Kally began his investigation by visiting the stores that reported thefts. He noted the items stolen - mostly food and necessities. He then visited the stranger’s camp under the bridge. The hobo welcomed him, offering him a seat on an old, worn-out rug.
Kally asked the stranger about the thefts. The stranger denied any involvement, his eyes reflecting sincerity. Kally believed him but needed evidence to convince the townsfolk.
Over the next few days, Kally kept a close eye on the stores. He noticed a pattern - the thefts occurred on the days when the stores were busiest. He also realized that the stolen items were always from the lower shelves, easily accessible to a child.
Kally decided to stake out the busiest store. Hiding behind a barrel, he watched as a group of children entered the store. They were from the neighboring town, known for their unruly behavior. As the store owner was busy attending to customers, one of the children slipped a loaf of bread into his bag.
Kally had found his culprits. He confronted the children, who, caught red-handed, confessed to the thefts. They had been stealing out of dare and necessity, their families too poor to afford even the basics.
Kally wrote about his findings in his column, clearing the stranger’s name. The townsfolk, ashamed of their quick judgment, apologized to the stranger. The store owners, realizing the children’s plight, decided to help their families.
The stranger, grateful to Kally, decided to move on, leaving behind a town that had learned a valuable lesson. And Kally, the boy named Kally Mahzoo, became a local hero, his column more popular than ever.
In Riverbridge, life returned to its simple rhythm, but with a newfound respect for the young boy who wrote for the Riverbridge Gazette. And under the bridge at the edge of town, where the hobo once camped, a sign was erected that read, “Judge not a book by its cover, for the truth lies within.”
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Lillian Kazmierczak
04/08/2024What a great young super slueth story. Young Kally was much smarter and kinder than most townfolk! Best to get to know someone before passing judgement! An inspirational short story star of the Day!
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Donald Harry Roberts
04/08/2024Thank you Lee. It was a test piece and I plan something longer for the character
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Joel Kiula
04/08/2024A great lesson for all and i am happy to hear that those children got the help they needed.
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Shirley Smothers
04/08/2024A heart warming story. I often wish we could help the homeless more than we do. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Donald Harry Roberts
04/08/2024Thanks Shirley...we all do our best. Sometimes it is hard to know where to go or start.
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BEN BROWN
04/08/2024A great story. Has the makings of a Sherlock Holmes case. Well done for being todays star.
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