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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 08/22/2023
I Brought You Flowers
Born 2009, M, from Kerala, IndiaI brought you flowers, my love so bright,
In the gentle glow of the moon's soft light.
A proposal whispered on this quiet night,
Our hearts entwined, our future in sight.
But as the days passed, darkness did creep,
Our love grew twisted, secrets we'd keep.
A crime of passion, a secret so deep,
In shadows we'd linger, our souls not at peace.
And now at your grave, I stand here alone,
With roses in hand, my heart turned to stone.
In this silent place, your presence has flown,
I brought you flowers, with regret I atone.
I Brought You Flowers(Achu biju)
I brought you flowers, my love so bright,
In the gentle glow of the moon's soft light.
A proposal whispered on this quiet night,
Our hearts entwined, our future in sight.
But as the days passed, darkness did creep,
Our love grew twisted, secrets we'd keep.
A crime of passion, a secret so deep,
In shadows we'd linger, our souls not at peace.
And now at your grave, I stand here alone,
With roses in hand, my heart turned to stone.
In this silent place, your presence has flown,
I brought you flowers, with regret I atone.
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Shirley Smothers
11/15/2023A beautiful but sad love story. Flowers for celebrating love and flowers celebrating the end of life. Congratulations on Short story star of the day.
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Mike
11/15/2023Sad and tough time of course. But the way you described thy love was beautiful.
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Lillian Kazmierczak
11/15/2023Masterfully crafted! I love the contrast of the bright and dark love! You amaze me with your versatility as a writer! A well-deserved short story star of the day!
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