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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 01/13/2023
For Whom Her Heart Was Waiting
F, from Mianwali, PakistanOn one chilly evening, a very young and beautiful woman came to Robin's sweet shop. She had long, tangled hair falling over her face. She was wearing a beautiful wedding dress, and there was a beautiful necklace around her neck. A name, "Scarlett," was written on the necklace. As soon as she entered the shop, she wordlessly started picking up the sweets. She seemed to be very happy; perhaps she was going to celebrate her wedding.
After gathering almost all the items from the sweet shop, she went out without even paying a penny.Â
"Miss, wait, please!" Robin shouted. But the young lady didn't pay heed to him. Robin followed her; she went straight to a cemetery where a funeral was being held.Â
"What's going on? Did you see a young bride wearing a necklace with the name Scarlett on it?" Robin asked an old man who was attending the funeral.
"What are you talking about? It is the funeral of my son-in-law, whose wife, my young, beautiful daughter, Scarlett, died in a car accident right after her wedding a couple of days ago."
For Whom Her Heart Was Waiting(Aleena Nawaz)
On one chilly evening, a very young and beautiful woman came to Robin's sweet shop. She had long, tangled hair falling over her face. She was wearing a beautiful wedding dress, and there was a beautiful necklace around her neck. A name, "Scarlett," was written on the necklace. As soon as she entered the shop, she wordlessly started picking up the sweets. She seemed to be very happy; perhaps she was going to celebrate her wedding.
After gathering almost all the items from the sweet shop, she went out without even paying a penny.Â
"Miss, wait, please!" Robin shouted. But the young lady didn't pay heed to him. Robin followed her; she went straight to a cemetery where a funeral was being held.Â
"What's going on? Did you see a young bride wearing a necklace with the name Scarlett on it?" Robin asked an old man who was attending the funeral.
"What are you talking about? It is the funeral of my son-in-law, whose wife, my young, beautiful daughter, Scarlett, died in a car accident right after her wedding a couple of days ago."
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JD
05/31/2023Happy short story writer of the month, Aleena. It is well deserved. Your stories are among the most liked, rated, shared, and commented on stories on Storystar. Thank you for sharing them with us.
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Aleena Nawaz
05/31/2023Wow! Thank you for selecting me as the short story writer of the month. I am humbled and honoured to have been chosen for this prestigious title. I am grateful for the support and encouragement I have received from the readers. Thanks a million!
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Kevin Hughes
01/26/2023Congrats on short story of the day! Aleena.
Lillian and Shirely left the kind of comments I would have made...so the thread says it all!
Smiles, Kevin
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Shirley Smothers
01/26/2023Sweet and chilling story. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations!
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Lillian Kazmierczak
01/26/2023That gave me chills! When you see dead people, it usually means your next! Congratulations on short story star of the day!
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Mahnoor Mani
01/26/2023Congratulations, Aleena, on being selected as short story star of the day.
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Charles Walter
01/26/2023Congratulations on being chosen as the short story star of the day.
Well-deserved
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Freddie Thomas
01/26/2023A well-deserved recognition!
Many congratulations on becoming short story star of the day.
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Dr. Albert Hunter
01/26/2023Awesome story.
Very well-written.
Congratulations on being chosen as the short story star of the day.
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Shelly Garrod
01/17/2023Wow Aleena, you did it again. Awesome flash fiction.
Blessings Shelly
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Freddie Thomas
01/13/2023Awesome story. It is a remarkable work. What a perfect story! Brilliant story, Aleena!
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Charles Walter
01/13/2023I love flash fictions. They are excellent and good to read. I want to say that you have done a very brilliant job. This story is amazing. The choice of words is apt and appropriate. Thanks for creating such a wonderful and outstanding story.
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Aleena Nawaz
01/14/2023I am glad to know that you enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for such sort of sublime appreciation and admiration.
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Dr. Albert Hunter
01/13/2023Excellent work! You have created a masterpiece. It is a beautiful tale which is perfectly mixed with horror. You are a very talented and amazing author.
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