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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Action
- Published: 12/19/2022
Fallen apart
Beep, Beep, Beep, Kai woke up to the sound of his irritating alarm he stood up to the sound of his wooden floor creaking he would be late to his hang-out with his best friend Jack he got changed as he was going downstairs as his mother gave him breakfast he held the toast in his mouth while pulling his pants up as he got ready to leave the house his mom asked “ Kai are you leaving without a hug” as Kai went in to hug her and then said “ sorry mom but I gotta blast” “No powers outside the house Kai,” yelled his mom as he closed the door
Kai grabbed the keys and then put the keys into his motorcycle as he sped towards the Caffe his hair running in the wind while passing cars when, he arrived at the coffee shop he met his friend Jack as he sat down next to him at a table and Jack said, “what took you so long?” and Kai caught his breath he said “sorry I overslept” “its a Saturday and you wake up at 4 sounds like you” Responded Jack as they sat down and had coffee
they started talking about their families and how they are great friends “so how have you been doing” said Jack
“Well I've been doing well” Responded Kai they sat down to talk for a while and as Jack paid the bill they walked outside onto the street strolling it as they were walking Jack realized a Kid from their school walking down the street in the lane beside them it was there that Jack got the idea and whispered to Kai “ hey you see Blake over there I'm going to trip his with my power’s” “Dude don't that's-,” Kai was interrupted as Jack tripped Blake, Blake yelled in pain he had broken his arm in the fall as people ran to help him “Dude that's messed up” Kai said “cmon let's get out of here,” Jack said as he pulled Kai by the arm Jack felt a rush of adrenaline he had never felt before he felt bad and rebellious he decided he wanted more as he ran he stopped and then Kai asked “what's wrong with you,” “I dont know but i love it” Jack said as he bent a lamp post with his telekinesis it was then Kai pulled Jacks' arm and told him to stop Jack by reflex pushed Kai away“I've had enough Jack I don't think we can be friends if you use your powers like this ill see you tommorow I guess,” Kai said as we walked away to his home the winds pushing leaves in the air Jack loved how been bad felt but was it really worth leaving Kai he told to himself it was then Jack for no reason felt a rush of anger he didint know why but he always got angry all of the sudden for the most subtle things it was then Jack came to the realazition “what if I have anger issues,” Jack thought to himself
Jack angrily walked towards his house infuriated he was watching all the people so happy on the sidewalk with their kids family or friends Jack was thinking what did he do wrong he was only having fun not knowing the difference between good and bad as he arrived at his house he opened the door and he saw his father laying on the couch Jack could tell by the distance that his father was overly sad a sadness he had never seen before on his fathers face “What's wrong?” Jack asked his dad. His dad stood up and then said “I didn't want to tell you over the phone but Jack you're a mom so - she’s gone” Jack's face filled up with sadness and he started storming towards the door “ where are you going?” asked his dad “ I need a moment alone,” Jack responded as he shut the door Jack started walking back through the street he saw all the mothers with there children and his sadness turned to anger still with a sad spot his anger issues had kicked in he was devastated and angry
Jack started to Make people scared as he flew over them making all the things on the street like rubble rocks and trashcans levitate because of his spite he started to get madder as time went by. He was harming but not killing people as he remembered the intrusive thought of Kai, Jack started rushing towards the cafe where he knew Kai would be Jack broke the cafe's front doors and yelled “WHERES Kai!” Kai stood up and said, “ Jack what are you doing?” “ IM here to destroy you!” Jack responded as he threw himself at Kai
Kai held Jack and said you don't need to do this “yes I do,” Jack responded as he hit Kai in the stomach Jack has anger running through his veins not only because of his mothers incident but because of his issues Kai didn't know what was wrong 3 hours ago they had just had a little argument and now Jack was trying to kill him Kai had to figure out what was wrong but in the meantime, he had to fight back In the air they started throwing punch after punch Jack always having the upper hand as he threw
Kai to the ground Jack said to Kai “ you will never feel the pain that I feel my mother she- she is dead,” Kai was shocked “ i - am - I'm so sorry,” “NO YOU'RE NOT,” Jack responded “Fine hurt me all you want ill take it,” Kai said “No no kick or punch ill hurt you like I am but now you will feel the pain I feel I'm going to hurt you worse than ever I'm not going to attack you physically I'm going to attack your heart you” re mother will be gone!” exclaimed Jack as he flew out of the cafe
Jack started flying towards Kai's house Kai was left worthless and hurt and on the floor of the cafe all the other people staring he gathered all his strength to stand with a bloody nose and a fractured arm he got up and start flying towards his house knowing what Jack had in mind once Jack arrived at the house “Hello sweetie oh wait hi Jack is Kai with you?” “No, but my dagger is,” Jack said as he stabbed the mom in the heart and twisted the blade It was at that moment Kai arrived but he was too late his mom was dead on the ground there was nothing to do anymore
it was at that moment Kai had had enough he was mad infuriated it was anger he didn't know he had inside of him Jack was laughing a laugh of a maniac he had lost it Kai needed to realize this wasn't the friend he knew before, this was a new person filled with anger no happiness he was only psychotic and angry. Kai with all his strength punched Jack in the face “Nice punch Kai,” Jack said as he threw a kick Kai blocked they started flying and they busted through the roof into the floor above them nobody was inside luckily they kept fighting both angry for the loss of a mother fighting and fighting punch after punch kick after kick and then Jack got the upper hand as he pinned Kai down with his leg Jack grabbed Kai by the neck and flew up and broke into the roof then he fell to the ground as Jack came back and tried pinning Kai again but Kai got out of it and Kai had had enough he grabbed a brick and threw it at Jacks's head and Jack got knocked out cold Kai climbed on top of Jack and realized this had to be it the end of Jack, Kai picked up the brick and smashed Jacks head. It was over Kai realized he had done what had to be done as the police arrived somebody had filed a noise complaint Kai flew away he ran away from home terrified but satisfied and then he felt the same rush of adrenaline Jack felt before he had felt it by what he had done he had to go visit somebody.
Kai flew and flew until he got to Canada what would have been a one-hour drive turned into a 20-minute flight Kai went to an address he went to visit his divorced father he knocked on the door and his dad answered “Kai,”? Said his dad as he let Kai in with open arms Kai not being the same man he wasn't good anymore he was More rebellious and eviler.
Fallen Apart(Eugenio Lobo)
Fallen apart
Beep, Beep, Beep, Kai woke up to the sound of his irritating alarm he stood up to the sound of his wooden floor creaking he would be late to his hang-out with his best friend Jack he got changed as he was going downstairs as his mother gave him breakfast he held the toast in his mouth while pulling his pants up as he got ready to leave the house his mom asked “ Kai are you leaving without a hug” as Kai went in to hug her and then said “ sorry mom but I gotta blast” “No powers outside the house Kai,” yelled his mom as he closed the door
Kai grabbed the keys and then put the keys into his motorcycle as he sped towards the Caffe his hair running in the wind while passing cars when, he arrived at the coffee shop he met his friend Jack as he sat down next to him at a table and Jack said, “what took you so long?” and Kai caught his breath he said “sorry I overslept” “its a Saturday and you wake up at 4 sounds like you” Responded Jack as they sat down and had coffee
they started talking about their families and how they are great friends “so how have you been doing” said Jack
“Well I've been doing well” Responded Kai they sat down to talk for a while and as Jack paid the bill they walked outside onto the street strolling it as they were walking Jack realized a Kid from their school walking down the street in the lane beside them it was there that Jack got the idea and whispered to Kai “ hey you see Blake over there I'm going to trip his with my power’s” “Dude don't that's-,” Kai was interrupted as Jack tripped Blake, Blake yelled in pain he had broken his arm in the fall as people ran to help him “Dude that's messed up” Kai said “cmon let's get out of here,” Jack said as he pulled Kai by the arm Jack felt a rush of adrenaline he had never felt before he felt bad and rebellious he decided he wanted more as he ran he stopped and then Kai asked “what's wrong with you,” “I dont know but i love it” Jack said as he bent a lamp post with his telekinesis it was then Kai pulled Jacks' arm and told him to stop Jack by reflex pushed Kai away“I've had enough Jack I don't think we can be friends if you use your powers like this ill see you tommorow I guess,” Kai said as we walked away to his home the winds pushing leaves in the air Jack loved how been bad felt but was it really worth leaving Kai he told to himself it was then Jack for no reason felt a rush of anger he didint know why but he always got angry all of the sudden for the most subtle things it was then Jack came to the realazition “what if I have anger issues,” Jack thought to himself
Jack angrily walked towards his house infuriated he was watching all the people so happy on the sidewalk with their kids family or friends Jack was thinking what did he do wrong he was only having fun not knowing the difference between good and bad as he arrived at his house he opened the door and he saw his father laying on the couch Jack could tell by the distance that his father was overly sad a sadness he had never seen before on his fathers face “What's wrong?” Jack asked his dad. His dad stood up and then said “I didn't want to tell you over the phone but Jack you're a mom so - she’s gone” Jack's face filled up with sadness and he started storming towards the door “ where are you going?” asked his dad “ I need a moment alone,” Jack responded as he shut the door Jack started walking back through the street he saw all the mothers with there children and his sadness turned to anger still with a sad spot his anger issues had kicked in he was devastated and angry
Jack started to Make people scared as he flew over them making all the things on the street like rubble rocks and trashcans levitate because of his spite he started to get madder as time went by. He was harming but not killing people as he remembered the intrusive thought of Kai, Jack started rushing towards the cafe where he knew Kai would be Jack broke the cafe's front doors and yelled “WHERES Kai!” Kai stood up and said, “ Jack what are you doing?” “ IM here to destroy you!” Jack responded as he threw himself at Kai
Kai held Jack and said you don't need to do this “yes I do,” Jack responded as he hit Kai in the stomach Jack has anger running through his veins not only because of his mothers incident but because of his issues Kai didn't know what was wrong 3 hours ago they had just had a little argument and now Jack was trying to kill him Kai had to figure out what was wrong but in the meantime, he had to fight back In the air they started throwing punch after punch Jack always having the upper hand as he threw
Kai to the ground Jack said to Kai “ you will never feel the pain that I feel my mother she- she is dead,” Kai was shocked “ i - am - I'm so sorry,” “NO YOU'RE NOT,” Jack responded “Fine hurt me all you want ill take it,” Kai said “No no kick or punch ill hurt you like I am but now you will feel the pain I feel I'm going to hurt you worse than ever I'm not going to attack you physically I'm going to attack your heart you” re mother will be gone!” exclaimed Jack as he flew out of the cafe
Jack started flying towards Kai's house Kai was left worthless and hurt and on the floor of the cafe all the other people staring he gathered all his strength to stand with a bloody nose and a fractured arm he got up and start flying towards his house knowing what Jack had in mind once Jack arrived at the house “Hello sweetie oh wait hi Jack is Kai with you?” “No, but my dagger is,” Jack said as he stabbed the mom in the heart and twisted the blade It was at that moment Kai arrived but he was too late his mom was dead on the ground there was nothing to do anymore
it was at that moment Kai had had enough he was mad infuriated it was anger he didn't know he had inside of him Jack was laughing a laugh of a maniac he had lost it Kai needed to realize this wasn't the friend he knew before, this was a new person filled with anger no happiness he was only psychotic and angry. Kai with all his strength punched Jack in the face “Nice punch Kai,” Jack said as he threw a kick Kai blocked they started flying and they busted through the roof into the floor above them nobody was inside luckily they kept fighting both angry for the loss of a mother fighting and fighting punch after punch kick after kick and then Jack got the upper hand as he pinned Kai down with his leg Jack grabbed Kai by the neck and flew up and broke into the roof then he fell to the ground as Jack came back and tried pinning Kai again but Kai got out of it and Kai had had enough he grabbed a brick and threw it at Jacks's head and Jack got knocked out cold Kai climbed on top of Jack and realized this had to be it the end of Jack, Kai picked up the brick and smashed Jacks head. It was over Kai realized he had done what had to be done as the police arrived somebody had filed a noise complaint Kai flew away he ran away from home terrified but satisfied and then he felt the same rush of adrenaline Jack felt before he had felt it by what he had done he had to go visit somebody.
Kai flew and flew until he got to Canada what would have been a one-hour drive turned into a 20-minute flight Kai went to an address he went to visit his divorced father he knocked on the door and his dad answered “Kai,”? Said his dad as he let Kai in with open arms Kai not being the same man he wasn't good anymore he was More rebellious and eviler.
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