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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 11/15/2022
Phantasmagoria
F, from Mianwali, PakistanMathilda grabbed the paper and started taking notes on her recent lecture. Suddenly, she felt as if something had been crawling on her skin. She heard bizarre sounds such as footsteps and banging of doors and windows. It added to her fear. Moreover, she heard nightmarish voices whispering her name. She shivered because she was living alone. Suddenly, strange letters started appearing on the paper. The handwriting was extremely awful and illegible. The words continued to appear, although Mathilda had written nothing on the paper.
 She noticed a nearly headless, frightening old woman who was sitting next to her. The lady was in white clothes and had super-long black hair which were disheveled and tangled.
All of a sudden, she felt that the walls of the house were squeezing, and she was about to be compressed against the walls.
Giving out a loud screech, she shook herself back to reality and realised that she was suffering from prolonged sleep deprivation and was hallucinating.
Phantasmagoria(Aleena Nawaz)
Mathilda grabbed the paper and started taking notes on her recent lecture. Suddenly, she felt as if something had been crawling on her skin. She heard bizarre sounds such as footsteps and banging of doors and windows. It added to her fear. Moreover, she heard nightmarish voices whispering her name. She shivered because she was living alone. Suddenly, strange letters started appearing on the paper. The handwriting was extremely awful and illegible. The words continued to appear, although Mathilda had written nothing on the paper.
 She noticed a nearly headless, frightening old woman who was sitting next to her. The lady was in white clothes and had super-long black hair which were disheveled and tangled.
All of a sudden, she felt that the walls of the house were squeezing, and she was about to be compressed against the walls.
Giving out a loud screech, she shook herself back to reality and realised that she was suffering from prolonged sleep deprivation and was hallucinating.
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Juliet Buckholdt
11/16/2022Wow! Twist ending! What a surprise! The handwriting being awful and illegible really added to the terror, especially since she was not writing the words! Great stuff, my love. Love you
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Aleena Nawaz
11/16/2022Thank you so much for your kind and beautiful words. I am very happy to know that you like it:)
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Aleena Nawaz
11/16/2022Thank you so much. I really appreciate your precious feedback on my flash fiction.
Stay happy and blessed:)
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