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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 11/09/2022
What's Strange?
Adult, F, from Mianwali, PakistanTwo friends named Jack and James went to meet their old friend, John, after a very long time.
John was living in his farm house. It was a very creepy farm house. It was grimy and foul-smelling. Moreover, it was dank and dark. There were cobwebs everywhere. The windows were also very dark.
At night, they were playing games. The neighbour heard an eerie laughter coming from the farm house. He peered through the wall and saw something strange. The next day, Jack and James bid farewell to John. When they came out of the farm house, the door of the farm house shut by itself.
The old neighbour approached and told them that he had seen them laughing and playing games with a black-coloured skeleton. That skeleton looked very happy. He further told them that their friend, John, died five years ago, and the farm house had been locked since then.
Jack and James looked at the door of the farm house; it had a big rusty lock on it.
What's Strange?(Aleena Nawaz)
Two friends named Jack and James went to meet their old friend, John, after a very long time.
John was living in his farm house. It was a very creepy farm house. It was grimy and foul-smelling. Moreover, it was dank and dark. There were cobwebs everywhere. The windows were also very dark.
At night, they were playing games. The neighbour heard an eerie laughter coming from the farm house. He peered through the wall and saw something strange. The next day, Jack and James bid farewell to John. When they came out of the farm house, the door of the farm house shut by itself.
The old neighbour approached and told them that he had seen them laughing and playing games with a black-coloured skeleton. That skeleton looked very happy. He further told them that their friend, John, died five years ago, and the farm house had been locked since then.
Jack and James looked at the door of the farm house; it had a big rusty lock on it.
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Zuhaib Ali
11/12/2022A heart-touching story despite the horror elements; well done Aleena. Could you send me your email address?
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Dr. Albert Hunter
11/09/2022Very well-written and well narrated.
I really liked the story!
Well done, author!
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