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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 11/03/2022
Where's The Way Out?
Adult, F, from Mianwali, PakistanThe night was dark and dusky.
It was raining and the water pounded furiously outside.
Suddenly, Crystal heard a crackling sound and her house went pitch black.
The lights had gone off.
She heard eldritch and eerie screams followed by howling of dogs.
She screeched and stood frozen with fear.
She came out of her room and saw that cockroaches were crawling on the walls of her house.
Her body shivered and she bit her nails.
She tried to open the main door but it was locked from outside.
She noticed that the only way out was through the window.
When she was about to jump from the window, the chilly gust of wind hit her face. She awoke and realized that she was sleepwalking and had been dreaming.
Where's The Way Out?(Aleena Nawaz)
The night was dark and dusky.
It was raining and the water pounded furiously outside.
Suddenly, Crystal heard a crackling sound and her house went pitch black.
The lights had gone off.
She heard eldritch and eerie screams followed by howling of dogs.
She screeched and stood frozen with fear.
She came out of her room and saw that cockroaches were crawling on the walls of her house.
Her body shivered and she bit her nails.
She tried to open the main door but it was locked from outside.
She noticed that the only way out was through the window.
When she was about to jump from the window, the chilly gust of wind hit her face. She awoke and realized that she was sleepwalking and had been dreaming.
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Aziz
11/06/2022Maybe the flow of illusions we live and prevent us from seeing the truth. Or the waves of pessimism that blackens our vision. Many interpretations are possible Aleena. Thank you for this beautiful story. Well done.
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Shelly Garrod
11/04/2022Nicely done Aleena. Just spooky enough! Perfect flow to a perfect ending.
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Charles Walter
11/03/2022Excellent story, I must say that the story is flawless and best one.
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Dr. Albert Hunter
11/03/2022Very well-written and well-sketched.
From start till end, the story has a perfect flow.
Great work, author!
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