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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 10/30/2022
What's Wrong With The Rear Room?
Adult, F, from Mianwali, PakistanOn a dark, gloomy and dusky night, a man was caught out in a storm. The wind was icy and withering. He was soaked to the bone.
The man passed by a desolated house. It was surrounded by dead trees and plants. The windows were dark and most of them were broken. A white coloured curtain blew from one of the windows. The lights of the house were flickering. The house was as dark as a starless night.
The rusty door of the house opened viciously. A very kind old woman came out of the house and invited him inside, welcoming him with food and a warm fire. While eating, the man noticed that there was an acrid smell in the house. He looked at the wall. He saw only his shadow on the wall. The shadow of the old woman did not exist. He looked at the feet of the old woman and they were bent. A shiver of fear ran up his spine.
The old woman told him to wait there while she went to the creepy rear room.
The man peeped through a crack in the door and saw that the old woman transformed into a sinister spirit, and she was standing beside her own corpse.
The man became breathless and fled from the house as fast as he could and never looked back.
What's Wrong With The Rear Room?(Aleena Nawaz)
On a dark, gloomy and dusky night, a man was caught out in a storm. The wind was icy and withering. He was soaked to the bone.
The man passed by a desolated house. It was surrounded by dead trees and plants. The windows were dark and most of them were broken. A white coloured curtain blew from one of the windows. The lights of the house were flickering. The house was as dark as a starless night.
The rusty door of the house opened viciously. A very kind old woman came out of the house and invited him inside, welcoming him with food and a warm fire. While eating, the man noticed that there was an acrid smell in the house. He looked at the wall. He saw only his shadow on the wall. The shadow of the old woman did not exist. He looked at the feet of the old woman and they were bent. A shiver of fear ran up his spine.
The old woman told him to wait there while she went to the creepy rear room.
The man peeped through a crack in the door and saw that the old woman transformed into a sinister spirit, and she was standing beside her own corpse.
The man became breathless and fled from the house as fast as he could and never looked back.
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Aleena Nawaz
11/01/2022I am glad to know that you like the story!
Thank you so much for the appreciation:)
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