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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 06/03/2022
Brambleheart's quest
Born 2009, M, from Mi, United StatesBrambleheart’s Quest
By Diontes Maguire
Chapter 1:
Bramblepaw raced out of the apprentice’s den when he heard his leader calling a clan meeting. This was it! He was going to be the first apprentice to become a warrior in Hurricane Clan! He sat next to his mentor as he waited to be called for his naming ceremony to begin. Hurricanestar called bramblepaw up to the cloud rock and the ceremony began.
“ Star clan look upon this apprentice before you as I commend him as a warrior of hurricane clan. For his bravery and skill I give him his warrior name. Bramblepaw you will now be known as brambleheart.”
Hurricanestar said as she placed her muzzle on his head. Brambleheart licked her shoulder.
“ Brambleheart, Brambleheart!” the clan coursed. “You must stand vigil and guard the camp” Hurricanestar said.
The next night As Brambleheart lay down he heard rustling in the bushes and smelled windclan. Suddenly a windclan cat rushed toward the camp. He was badly injured and her flank was bleeding. She limped into the camp. “ I need Hurricanestar, quickly,” she panted.
“What is it?” Hurricanestar mewed rapidly, slowly padding out of her den.
“We are under attack from shadowclan.” the windclan tortoiseshell she-cat said.
Yes! My first battle as a warrior! This is gonna be so cool! Brambleheart thought excitedly. He jumped to his paws.
“Brambleheart! You're still on vigil, you know!” Hurricanestar snapped, jerking her head around to glare at Brambleheart. Brambleheart opened his mouth to protest, but then he caught himself. He would not argue with his leader, nor break his silent vigil.
Brambleheart heard the treading of many paws approaching as a group of dark warriors rushed into the camp. Brambleheart tasted the air. Shadowclan! But he also smelled something else among the group of warriors. Sunclan?
Shadowclan and Sunclan were working together!
Brambleheart looked at his leader with a pleading expression to let him fight beside his clan, but Hurricanestar didn't take notice. Instead, she sent the Windclan warrior to Oceanheart, the medicine cat, to warn her about the battle and to get some rest.
“Brambleheart, go and wake the other warriors, then get some apprentices. Make sure that some cat is protecting the nursery. We mustn't let them reach the kits. Go!” Hurricanestar hissed rapidly to Brambleheart.
Brambleheart stood there a moment, wondering what to do. Should he break his silent vigil, and warn his clan of the awakening battle, or stay at his seat, and keep watch.
“Go!” Brambleheart heard his leader say once more.
Chapter 2:
“Shadowclan and Sunclan are attacking!” Brambleheart yowled.
Suddenly, the peaceful den was full of stirring warriors. Suncatcher, a younger warrior and Bloodclaw, a senior warrior, were the firsts to get up. Suncatcher raced up to Brambleheart, burying him in questions, as Bloodclaw rushed out of the den without any more instructions.
Bramblehearts mind was blurred with possibilities of what could possibly happen. He was just barely listening to Suncatcher.
“Mousebrain! Are you even listening to me?” Suncatcher hissed.
“Sorry! Sorry! What did you say?” Brambleheart stammered.
“What do you want me to do??” Suncatcher snapped, obviously annoyed.
“Uh.. Protect the nursery. Get some other cat to help.” Brambleheart ordered.
Suncatcher nodded and raced out of the nursery.
Tallstep padded up to Brambleheart.
hi
“Not bad, you’d make a fine deputy someday, Brambleheart.” Tallstep called, resting his tail on Bramblehearts shoulder as he started racing out to join the battle.
Brambleheart decided it was about time to help out his clanmates in the battle. He charged out with more than 5 warriors behind him.
When they reached the battle, there was blood splattered everywhere. Brambleheart heard the yowling of terror. Horror struck him as Brambleheart noticed Hurricanestar laying motionless on the stone floor of the camp. Shadowstar started walking towards her. Hurricanestar wasn't dead, but she had just lost a life. She began to get up when Shadowstar pushed her back down. Holding her head to the ground, Shadowstar whispered something into Hurricanestars ear that Brambleheart could just barely make out.
“I told you, only 4 clans should remain here.There's no room for extras like you. You didnt listen when we offered you peace, an alliance. You brought this on yourself..”
As Shadowstar was about to rake her claws down Hurricanestar’s throat, taking another one of Hurricanestar’s lives, Brambleheart leaped in, slashing Shadowstars throat and leaving her choking on the cold, stoney ground.
“Thank you.. Brambleheart. I knew that you’d make a great warrior.” Hurricanestar praised before leaping back into battle.
Brambleheart watched as she approached the Sunclan leader, Punchstar. He gathered ______ and Bloodclaw to help incase Hurricanestar needed them.
Punchstar had killed Sunstar, the former leader of Sunclan and Hurricanestar’s sister. Brambleheart knew that she didn't just want to chase him out, Hurricanestar wanted Punchstar dead. With a yowl of fury Hurricanestar launched herself at Punchstar, pinning him to the ground. Punchstar leaped up, leaving deep scars in Hurricanestar’s exposed under belly. The two leaders fought fiercely against each other. Hurricanestar was about to win when Shadowstar leaped in, knocking Hurricanestar aside.
“Attack!” Brambleheart yowled, leading his group of warriors towards the battling leaders. Brambleheart watched as Bloodclaw leaped onto Shadowstars back. Shadowstar tried to throw him off but Hurricanestar bit down hard on her leg and she tripped. Brambleheart launched himself on punchstar’s shoulders and raking his claws down his flank.
“No he’s mine to fight!” Hurricanestar yowled at brambleheart.
“Sorry Hurricanestar” Brambleheart as he jumped off of punchstar’s shoulders.
“Go crawling back to the hole from with you came punchstar!”
Hurricanestar yowled as she lunged at punchstar and bowled him over into the fighting mass of cats.
“Brambleheart help me”Goldentail called she was trapped by 10 cats. Brambleheart lunged at one of the sunclan warriors slashing his claws down the sunclan warriors flank
Brambleheart's quest(Diontes)
Brambleheart’s Quest
By Diontes Maguire
Chapter 1:
Bramblepaw raced out of the apprentice’s den when he heard his leader calling a clan meeting. This was it! He was going to be the first apprentice to become a warrior in Hurricane Clan! He sat next to his mentor as he waited to be called for his naming ceremony to begin. Hurricanestar called bramblepaw up to the cloud rock and the ceremony began.
“ Star clan look upon this apprentice before you as I commend him as a warrior of hurricane clan. For his bravery and skill I give him his warrior name. Bramblepaw you will now be known as brambleheart.”
Hurricanestar said as she placed her muzzle on his head. Brambleheart licked her shoulder.
“ Brambleheart, Brambleheart!” the clan coursed. “You must stand vigil and guard the camp” Hurricanestar said.
The next night As Brambleheart lay down he heard rustling in the bushes and smelled windclan. Suddenly a windclan cat rushed toward the camp. He was badly injured and her flank was bleeding. She limped into the camp. “ I need Hurricanestar, quickly,” she panted.
“What is it?” Hurricanestar mewed rapidly, slowly padding out of her den.
“We are under attack from shadowclan.” the windclan tortoiseshell she-cat said.
Yes! My first battle as a warrior! This is gonna be so cool! Brambleheart thought excitedly. He jumped to his paws.
“Brambleheart! You're still on vigil, you know!” Hurricanestar snapped, jerking her head around to glare at Brambleheart. Brambleheart opened his mouth to protest, but then he caught himself. He would not argue with his leader, nor break his silent vigil.
Brambleheart heard the treading of many paws approaching as a group of dark warriors rushed into the camp. Brambleheart tasted the air. Shadowclan! But he also smelled something else among the group of warriors. Sunclan?
Shadowclan and Sunclan were working together!
Brambleheart looked at his leader with a pleading expression to let him fight beside his clan, but Hurricanestar didn't take notice. Instead, she sent the Windclan warrior to Oceanheart, the medicine cat, to warn her about the battle and to get some rest.
“Brambleheart, go and wake the other warriors, then get some apprentices. Make sure that some cat is protecting the nursery. We mustn't let them reach the kits. Go!” Hurricanestar hissed rapidly to Brambleheart.
Brambleheart stood there a moment, wondering what to do. Should he break his silent vigil, and warn his clan of the awakening battle, or stay at his seat, and keep watch.
“Go!” Brambleheart heard his leader say once more.
Chapter 2:
“Shadowclan and Sunclan are attacking!” Brambleheart yowled.
Suddenly, the peaceful den was full of stirring warriors. Suncatcher, a younger warrior and Bloodclaw, a senior warrior, were the firsts to get up. Suncatcher raced up to Brambleheart, burying him in questions, as Bloodclaw rushed out of the den without any more instructions.
Bramblehearts mind was blurred with possibilities of what could possibly happen. He was just barely listening to Suncatcher.
“Mousebrain! Are you even listening to me?” Suncatcher hissed.
“Sorry! Sorry! What did you say?” Brambleheart stammered.
“What do you want me to do??” Suncatcher snapped, obviously annoyed.
“Uh.. Protect the nursery. Get some other cat to help.” Brambleheart ordered.
Suncatcher nodded and raced out of the nursery.
Tallstep padded up to Brambleheart.
hi
“Not bad, you’d make a fine deputy someday, Brambleheart.” Tallstep called, resting his tail on Bramblehearts shoulder as he started racing out to join the battle.
Brambleheart decided it was about time to help out his clanmates in the battle. He charged out with more than 5 warriors behind him.
When they reached the battle, there was blood splattered everywhere. Brambleheart heard the yowling of terror. Horror struck him as Brambleheart noticed Hurricanestar laying motionless on the stone floor of the camp. Shadowstar started walking towards her. Hurricanestar wasn't dead, but she had just lost a life. She began to get up when Shadowstar pushed her back down. Holding her head to the ground, Shadowstar whispered something into Hurricanestars ear that Brambleheart could just barely make out.
“I told you, only 4 clans should remain here.There's no room for extras like you. You didnt listen when we offered you peace, an alliance. You brought this on yourself..”
As Shadowstar was about to rake her claws down Hurricanestar’s throat, taking another one of Hurricanestar’s lives, Brambleheart leaped in, slashing Shadowstars throat and leaving her choking on the cold, stoney ground.
“Thank you.. Brambleheart. I knew that you’d make a great warrior.” Hurricanestar praised before leaping back into battle.
Brambleheart watched as she approached the Sunclan leader, Punchstar. He gathered ______ and Bloodclaw to help incase Hurricanestar needed them.
Punchstar had killed Sunstar, the former leader of Sunclan and Hurricanestar’s sister. Brambleheart knew that she didn't just want to chase him out, Hurricanestar wanted Punchstar dead. With a yowl of fury Hurricanestar launched herself at Punchstar, pinning him to the ground. Punchstar leaped up, leaving deep scars in Hurricanestar’s exposed under belly. The two leaders fought fiercely against each other. Hurricanestar was about to win when Shadowstar leaped in, knocking Hurricanestar aside.
“Attack!” Brambleheart yowled, leading his group of warriors towards the battling leaders. Brambleheart watched as Bloodclaw leaped onto Shadowstars back. Shadowstar tried to throw him off but Hurricanestar bit down hard on her leg and she tripped. Brambleheart launched himself on punchstar’s shoulders and raking his claws down his flank.
“No he’s mine to fight!” Hurricanestar yowled at brambleheart.
“Sorry Hurricanestar” Brambleheart as he jumped off of punchstar’s shoulders.
“Go crawling back to the hole from with you came punchstar!”
Hurricanestar yowled as she lunged at punchstar and bowled him over into the fighting mass of cats.
“Brambleheart help me”Goldentail called she was trapped by 10 cats. Brambleheart lunged at one of the sunclan warriors slashing his claws down the sunclan warriors flank
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