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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Action
- Published: 05/25/2022
Bramble’s Journey
Born 2009, M, from Mi, United StatesBramble’s Journey
A short story By: Diontes Maguire
Prologue
The robot king wanted a human from the planet Earth so he sent three of his best robots to get one. “And remember: don’t come back until you have one.”
“Yes sire.” The robots said as they bowed and left for their spaceship to go and get a human from the planet Earth.
Chapter 1
One day, in the land of wisdom on Earth, a young boy named Bramble lived in a house in a small neighborhood. Today it was his birthday. Bramble was happy because he was turning 9 and that was all he could think about.
“ When can I open my presents?” Bramble asked.
“After school and after homework,” his mom said.
“Because if you don’t do your homework you won’t get a good grade,” his sister Abby remarked, looking up from the book she was reading for school. “It means that you can work harder so you can open them sooner.”
“Awwww, but I want to open them now!” he said. “It will take forever to finish my homework!” he complained
“Well, you can open presents after school then you have to do your homework, understand?” his mom said.
“All right.” Bramble said reluctantly. “I guess it is better than opening them after,” he grumbled as he walked to school. As he was walking home from school his mom ran up to him and told him that his sister was taken by robots.
“Here, have this present, and only open it in your darkest hour.”
“Thank you mom,” Bramble said, “I will open it when it is most needed,” he promised and ran off to save his sister.
Chapter 2
When he got home he found footprints in the ground. After grabbing a pocket knife, a pair of binoculars, some rope, his slingshot, and some money, he hopped on his electric dirt bike, and began to follow the footprints. After 10 minutes of following he saw the robots with his sister. They got into a spaceship and flew off. As he got to the spot he saw that one of the robots had dropped something.
“What is this?” he asked himself. It looked like some keys with a red button in the middle. Bramble picked up the keys and pressed the button. At that moment a smaller spaceship emerged out of thin air startling Bramble. The cockpit opened and he got in; it even had a place for his dirt bike. He started the engine and it took off after the other ship. It seemed like only moments when he felt the bump as the spaceship landed.
“Where am I?” he said in wonder. He climbed on top of the ship and used his binoculars to scan for his sister. He saw them about 5 miles away, and they were moving fast. He got out his dirt bike and gunned it after them. They seemed to get farther away the closer he got.
“How is that possible!?” he gasped. He went as fast as his dirt bike would let him and still he seemed at the same place. He saw a vending machine selling hoverboards. He bought one with the money in his pocket and quickly resumed the chase.
Chapter 3
He then saw them take her into a palace and then he lost sight of them.
“Dang it, I can't see them!” After considering what he should do next he got low and crept into the palace. It was like a labyrinth. Bramble had to follow his sister’s voice to find his way. Finally Bramble found his sister in a big room. He peeked around the door and to his horror he found that the robots had taken her to a king robot.
“Good, you got me one,” he smiled an evil smile.
“Put her in the dungeon!” he yelled and the robots walked toward the door. Bramble ran from the hallway to hide in another room but he was too slow. One of the robots saw his foot disappearing into the room!
“What do we have here?” it said reaching into the room that Bramble was hiding in and pulled him out.
“Bramble, is that you?” Abby said in shock
“Yes, it is me, Abby.” Bramble said as the robots took them to the dungeon and locked them in the cell; escape seemed impossible.
Chapter 4
The next day they were taken to a stadium with a huge door. “Let the game begin!!” the king robot called. Everyone cheered. The huge door opened and out came an enormous creature with 5 eyes, 4 legs, and 3 heads. It let out a blood curdling screech like iron nails on a chalkboard. Bramble and Abby screamed. Bramble shot it with his expert slingshot skills but the rock just bounced off the body of the beast as the monster advanced. Then Bramble remembered what his mom had told him.
“Only open the present in your darkest hour.” Bramble grabbed the present out of his bag and opened it. Out came an rc cheetah that can expand to a life-size cheetah. He pressed the on button and gave it to his sister. She distracted the beast while he got the door open with his pocket knife.
“Abby, come on!” Bramble shouted. She charged out on the cheetah and together they raced back to the spaceship followed by the robots the king had sent to capture a human.
“Stop,” the robots cried.
“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!!” Bramble and Abby stopped and turned around and they saw the beast attacking the robots.
“That is terrifying!” Abby said as they ran away and stopped to pick up Bramble’s dirt bike. Bramble attached the hoverboard to his dirt bike with the rope from his bag and they were on their way again.
“I will take the big ship and you take the small one, ok?” Bramble asked Abby.
“Ok.” Abby said
“Let's go!” Bramble called, and so they got to the ships and headed back to earth.
Chapter 5
When they got home their mother was so happy to see them that she cried and was so proud of Bramble that she said that he could open his presents right now.
“You were gone for a whole hour,” their mom said.
“An hour!” they gasped
“Yes, an hour,” their mom said.
“But we were locked in a dungeon for a day!” Bramble exclaimed.
“Time must move faster on that planet then it does here,” his mom said thoughtfully. After they told their mom about their journey, Bramble had his cake and opened his presents. After playing with them, Bramble went to bed with his journey still fresh in his mind.
Epilogue
“How did you let them escape?!!!” howled the robot king.
“We were attacked by the beast.” they said.
“That is no excuse, Guards!” the robot king yelled. His guards grabbed the three and dragged them to the dungeon. The next day the guards put them in the arena where they were happily eaten by the beast.
The end for now…
Bramble’s Journey(Diontes)
Bramble’s Journey
A short story By: Diontes Maguire
Prologue
The robot king wanted a human from the planet Earth so he sent three of his best robots to get one. “And remember: don’t come back until you have one.”
“Yes sire.” The robots said as they bowed and left for their spaceship to go and get a human from the planet Earth.
Chapter 1
One day, in the land of wisdom on Earth, a young boy named Bramble lived in a house in a small neighborhood. Today it was his birthday. Bramble was happy because he was turning 9 and that was all he could think about.
“ When can I open my presents?” Bramble asked.
“After school and after homework,” his mom said.
“Because if you don’t do your homework you won’t get a good grade,” his sister Abby remarked, looking up from the book she was reading for school. “It means that you can work harder so you can open them sooner.”
“Awwww, but I want to open them now!” he said. “It will take forever to finish my homework!” he complained
“Well, you can open presents after school then you have to do your homework, understand?” his mom said.
“All right.” Bramble said reluctantly. “I guess it is better than opening them after,” he grumbled as he walked to school. As he was walking home from school his mom ran up to him and told him that his sister was taken by robots.
“Here, have this present, and only open it in your darkest hour.”
“Thank you mom,” Bramble said, “I will open it when it is most needed,” he promised and ran off to save his sister.
Chapter 2
When he got home he found footprints in the ground. After grabbing a pocket knife, a pair of binoculars, some rope, his slingshot, and some money, he hopped on his electric dirt bike, and began to follow the footprints. After 10 minutes of following he saw the robots with his sister. They got into a spaceship and flew off. As he got to the spot he saw that one of the robots had dropped something.
“What is this?” he asked himself. It looked like some keys with a red button in the middle. Bramble picked up the keys and pressed the button. At that moment a smaller spaceship emerged out of thin air startling Bramble. The cockpit opened and he got in; it even had a place for his dirt bike. He started the engine and it took off after the other ship. It seemed like only moments when he felt the bump as the spaceship landed.
“Where am I?” he said in wonder. He climbed on top of the ship and used his binoculars to scan for his sister. He saw them about 5 miles away, and they were moving fast. He got out his dirt bike and gunned it after them. They seemed to get farther away the closer he got.
“How is that possible!?” he gasped. He went as fast as his dirt bike would let him and still he seemed at the same place. He saw a vending machine selling hoverboards. He bought one with the money in his pocket and quickly resumed the chase.
Chapter 3
He then saw them take her into a palace and then he lost sight of them.
“Dang it, I can't see them!” After considering what he should do next he got low and crept into the palace. It was like a labyrinth. Bramble had to follow his sister’s voice to find his way. Finally Bramble found his sister in a big room. He peeked around the door and to his horror he found that the robots had taken her to a king robot.
“Good, you got me one,” he smiled an evil smile.
“Put her in the dungeon!” he yelled and the robots walked toward the door. Bramble ran from the hallway to hide in another room but he was too slow. One of the robots saw his foot disappearing into the room!
“What do we have here?” it said reaching into the room that Bramble was hiding in and pulled him out.
“Bramble, is that you?” Abby said in shock
“Yes, it is me, Abby.” Bramble said as the robots took them to the dungeon and locked them in the cell; escape seemed impossible.
Chapter 4
The next day they were taken to a stadium with a huge door. “Let the game begin!!” the king robot called. Everyone cheered. The huge door opened and out came an enormous creature with 5 eyes, 4 legs, and 3 heads. It let out a blood curdling screech like iron nails on a chalkboard. Bramble and Abby screamed. Bramble shot it with his expert slingshot skills but the rock just bounced off the body of the beast as the monster advanced. Then Bramble remembered what his mom had told him.
“Only open the present in your darkest hour.” Bramble grabbed the present out of his bag and opened it. Out came an rc cheetah that can expand to a life-size cheetah. He pressed the on button and gave it to his sister. She distracted the beast while he got the door open with his pocket knife.
“Abby, come on!” Bramble shouted. She charged out on the cheetah and together they raced back to the spaceship followed by the robots the king had sent to capture a human.
“Stop,” the robots cried.
“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!!” Bramble and Abby stopped and turned around and they saw the beast attacking the robots.
“That is terrifying!” Abby said as they ran away and stopped to pick up Bramble’s dirt bike. Bramble attached the hoverboard to his dirt bike with the rope from his bag and they were on their way again.
“I will take the big ship and you take the small one, ok?” Bramble asked Abby.
“Ok.” Abby said
“Let's go!” Bramble called, and so they got to the ships and headed back to earth.
Chapter 5
When they got home their mother was so happy to see them that she cried and was so proud of Bramble that she said that he could open his presents right now.
“You were gone for a whole hour,” their mom said.
“An hour!” they gasped
“Yes, an hour,” their mom said.
“But we were locked in a dungeon for a day!” Bramble exclaimed.
“Time must move faster on that planet then it does here,” his mom said thoughtfully. After they told their mom about their journey, Bramble had his cake and opened his presents. After playing with them, Bramble went to bed with his journey still fresh in his mind.
Epilogue
“How did you let them escape?!!!” howled the robot king.
“We were attacked by the beast.” they said.
“That is no excuse, Guards!” the robot king yelled. His guards grabbed the three and dragged them to the dungeon. The next day the guards put them in the arena where they were happily eaten by the beast.
The end for now…
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