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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Fairy Tale / Folk Tale
- Published: 10/30/2021
There is a flower she is very different from others,when the other flowers the saw her they laughed ,she was confused she said why are you laughing they said, because you the worst flower that someone can see,she cried they Said don’t even try joining the flower contest you will probably lose, but she thought i will join i will try. Next day, it was the day of the contest all flowers were there they looked very pretty! So the people voted all the flowers were confident but, molly was nervous, because she thought she will lose. Then the results came back and they shouted molly won she was so happy and confused at the same time the other flowers said what! how can thing win the judge said we don’t all have to be the same it’s okay to be different maybe next time don’t judge a book by it’s cover. The flowers said sorry to molly they forgave them
The flower contest(Marlin) There is a flower she is very different from others,when the other flowers the saw her they laughed ,she was confused she said why are you laughing they said, because you the worst flower that someone can see,she cried they Said don’t even try joining the flower contest you will probably lose, but she thought i will join i will try. Next day, it was the day of the contest all flowers were there they looked very pretty! So the people voted all the flowers were confident but, molly was nervous, because she thought she will lose. Then the results came back and they shouted molly won she was so happy and confused at the same time the other flowers said what! how can thing win the judge said we don’t all have to be the same it’s okay to be different maybe next time don’t judge a book by it’s cover. The flowers said sorry to molly they forgave them
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Lillian Kazmierczak
10/30/2021That was a nice story with a great message. Punctuation is important, one wrong comma can change a whole sentence. You have a great writing foundation, improved punctation will make it a much better!
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JD
10/30/2021That's one really freaky looking flower. You created a good short story for someone so young who is just learning to write. If you would like readers to better appreciate your stories it would be a good idea to learn where to put periods and make sentences, so that your readers don't get lost and confused when they are reading your story. But with practice you will improve, so keep writing.
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Marlin
10/30/2021Thank you for the advice
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