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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 07/08/2021
life without cake
Born 2009, F, from O, CanadaLife without cake is a test .
Sometimes you have to wait for the cake to be baked.
Sometimes you have to make it.
Or buy it.
or you have to be patient for the cake.
Or wait for the cake in the mail.
Or not eat the batter before you bake it.
Sometimes you have to keep the last piece of a very good cake for your siblings, but you can still make more patient.
Or sometimes you don't have the ingredients for the cake.
life without cake(Yusik)
Life without cake is a test .
Sometimes you have to wait for the cake to be baked.
Sometimes you have to make it.
Or buy it.
or you have to be patient for the cake.
Or wait for the cake in the mail.
Or not eat the batter before you bake it.
Sometimes you have to keep the last piece of a very good cake for your siblings, but you can still make more patient.
Or sometimes you don't have the ingredients for the cake.
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Archisha Srivastava
08/08/2021Really great story. It tells you everything that can happen wrong when you are in the making of a cake. Making a cake is truly a test! Well done!
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Kevin A. Kimball
07/09/2021This made me smile throughout.
With every line I thought, "sometimes you eat the batter. I'm impatient!" But then you said about the batter, and I was content.
The last line was my favorite, though. "Or sometimes you don't have the ingredients for the cake," and that just sums up life.
Whether it was intentional or not, really strong metaphor usage. Simple. I appreciate simplicity and wish I could hone it, but I always seem to convolute things, almost compulsively. I admire your ability to simply "make a cake."
Happy writing, Yusik.
Respectfully,
Kevin
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