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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 03/18/2021
Adventures of Rishin
Born 1995, F, from Karnataka, IndiaAdventures of Rishin
Once upon a time ,a young boy named Rishin, lived in a village. He was such a adorable boy who always wanted an adventurous life ,he was bright for his age,he used to go out with his grandfather who was the head of the village, they both used to visit the temple everyday above the hill.
One day his grandfather was out of town for few days,so he decides to go to the temple alone, that day it was a stormy day and while going to the temple he fell from the hill and he falls near by a lake, he was full of wounds, and couldn't walk properly because his leg was injured, he felt thirsty and he went to drink the water, as soon as he drank the water his wounds were gone .
He gets to know it's a magical lake, then sees a cave near by lake and goes inside, he finds a box with full of dust on it, he cleans the dust and he tries to open it but couldn't open it because he didn't had the key.
He then comes back to home, but couldn't sleep that night thinking about what would be in the box. He was thinking about treasure, untold riches which could change everyone's life and he could help the villagers.Because the village was underdeveloped.
Next day, again he goes to cave he goes inside the cave to his surprise he finds a door at the right side of the box, he opens the door and finds 2 keys, and he has to choose the right key for the box or else the door gets locked, he keeps on thinking and remembers the line on written on the box the key is in your heart's side.
He takes the key in the left side and it was the right key,he then opens the box he gets shocked to see what's in it,it's not treasure, it's a book named Amura.
The book is made of gold and on the front page there is a star symbol.
He opens the book, and reads the first page - There's a prediction that the only person who can read the book must be generous (selfless).
He turns the next page and words start to appear magically .He starts reading the story, it's about a great king suprata .
King suprata was a generous king , he always thought about the welfare of the people in his kingdom, he used to look after all the needs of his people, the people were happy with the king.
The kingdom was filled with riches & happiness .
Once Suprata went to forest for hunting, and sees a beautiful deer and tries to kill it by arrow , the deer escapes into deep forest and he follows the deer and tries to hit it and by mistake a village girl who was passing by gets hit by the arrow and she dies, her mother sees this from far away and comes running near her and cries by hugging the daughter's dead body and she sees the king and says you have killed my daughter and she curses him by saying your kingdom will become barren , all your riches will vanish , and all the people will suffer. After saying this she took her daughter with her and went.
Suprata leaves the forest and goes back to his palace ,he regrets for his mistakes, because of him all the people in the kingdom will be suffered.
Next day , everything happens as per her curse and the king is worried, at the same time a saint comes to the palace and he says all the problems can be solved if you do a pooja for Goddess .
As per the instructions given by the saint ,the king does pooja and Goddess appears there and gives him a wish, the king asks that his kingdom would be back to normal, she gives him a stone with power in it , and asks him to put the stone in the place, where the girl was killed because the power in the stone can make all the bad things into good things, he does it and everything becomes normal in his kingdom. In order to hide the stone from falling into wrong hands with the help of that saint he constructs few obstacles in the path so that no one can misuse it.
After reading this story , Rishin thinks if he can find the stone and bring it to his village all the problems would be solved.
He sees the instructions in the map to reach the stone , he felt this is the adventurous life he always wanted to go. He comes back home with the book and he tells the entire story to his grandfather and takes his permission to go there to get the stone then he packed some clothes, food, a knife, a net,few marbles in his bag and started to go in search of treasure.The forest was far away from his village.It would take many days to reach there.
Next day, while he was walking, many thoughts were going in his mind , but he was ready to face the risk .He walked and walked few miles and at last he came near the forest and was tired so he thought of taking rest.
Second day, he started to walk Inside the forest , he saw a jaguar coming towards him, and it attacks him then a girl comes near the jaguar and tries to distract it , then Rishin goes near the jaguar and fights with it and uses his net to capture the jaguar .
The girl was beautiful with long hair wearing a beautiful gown, she introduces herself as Trinetri one of the tribal who lives in the forest she had come in search of food when she saw him in trouble she came to save him, then she gives him some fruits and leave.
His journey continues, he keeps on walking and there he saw a big river and there was no other way but to cross the river he looks here and there he sees a boat nearby the rock and he takes the boat to cross the river, but he falls from the boat and is injured and unconscious.
When he wakes up he finds himself inside a hut , an old woman gave him treatment, he tells her about his journey the old lady helps him ,she gives some instructions to him, she tells him to follow the path which has oak trees, she also warns him that the journey is dangerous his life may be at risk ,but Rishin did not give up he took rest in that hut for that night next day he went in the oak tree path.
Next day , he continued his journey it was a stormy night ,it was raining heavily it was very difficult to go further but still he didn't stop walking , the forest was dark he couldn't see anything properly and going a big snake tries to attack him he searches and finds a wooden stick and he takes the snake and throws it away.
After walking for sometime he sees a giant , who comes in front of him and says he will allow him to go further only if he gives him something in return.
Rishin gives his marbles to the giant and goes further after walking for sometime he has reached his destination he finds the stone he feels happy that he has found the stone when he tries to pick up the stone someone from behind hits him with a rod, he turns to see who it was, its Trinetri the girl who had helped him before, he asks her why did you try to kill me?
She replies she is the queen of evil ,she had wasted many years in search of the stone but couldn't find it because it can only be seen by a generous person i.e who doesn't want to use the stone for himself but for the benefit of others. When she saw Rishin , was in search of the stone she followed him inside the forest and tried to help him in reaching the stone,so that she can kill him after finding it ,also she was the one who disguised herself as the old woman who helped him in the hut.
She turns into a beast with horns, and she tries to get the stone but couldn't touch it ,she then tries to kill Rishin, but he tries to escape then she attacks him with her horns he quickly pickups the stone and it starts glowing the beast eyes couldn't handle the power of light, she loses her eyes.
He takes his knife from the bag and cuts her horns, she loses all the power and she falls down.
Finally, he took the stone to his village and solved all the problems in his village.
The end
Dedicated to,
Rishin.M.D
Written by,
Poojitha.P
1/8/2020
Adventures of Rishin(Poojitha)
Adventures of Rishin
Once upon a time ,a young boy named Rishin, lived in a village. He was such a adorable boy who always wanted an adventurous life ,he was bright for his age,he used to go out with his grandfather who was the head of the village, they both used to visit the temple everyday above the hill.
One day his grandfather was out of town for few days,so he decides to go to the temple alone, that day it was a stormy day and while going to the temple he fell from the hill and he falls near by a lake, he was full of wounds, and couldn't walk properly because his leg was injured, he felt thirsty and he went to drink the water, as soon as he drank the water his wounds were gone .
He gets to know it's a magical lake, then sees a cave near by lake and goes inside, he finds a box with full of dust on it, he cleans the dust and he tries to open it but couldn't open it because he didn't had the key.
He then comes back to home, but couldn't sleep that night thinking about what would be in the box. He was thinking about treasure, untold riches which could change everyone's life and he could help the villagers.Because the village was underdeveloped.
Next day, again he goes to cave he goes inside the cave to his surprise he finds a door at the right side of the box, he opens the door and finds 2 keys, and he has to choose the right key for the box or else the door gets locked, he keeps on thinking and remembers the line on written on the box the key is in your heart's side.
He takes the key in the left side and it was the right key,he then opens the box he gets shocked to see what's in it,it's not treasure, it's a book named Amura.
The book is made of gold and on the front page there is a star symbol.
He opens the book, and reads the first page - There's a prediction that the only person who can read the book must be generous (selfless).
He turns the next page and words start to appear magically .He starts reading the story, it's about a great king suprata .
King suprata was a generous king , he always thought about the welfare of the people in his kingdom, he used to look after all the needs of his people, the people were happy with the king.
The kingdom was filled with riches & happiness .
Once Suprata went to forest for hunting, and sees a beautiful deer and tries to kill it by arrow , the deer escapes into deep forest and he follows the deer and tries to hit it and by mistake a village girl who was passing by gets hit by the arrow and she dies, her mother sees this from far away and comes running near her and cries by hugging the daughter's dead body and she sees the king and says you have killed my daughter and she curses him by saying your kingdom will become barren , all your riches will vanish , and all the people will suffer. After saying this she took her daughter with her and went.
Suprata leaves the forest and goes back to his palace ,he regrets for his mistakes, because of him all the people in the kingdom will be suffered.
Next day , everything happens as per her curse and the king is worried, at the same time a saint comes to the palace and he says all the problems can be solved if you do a pooja for Goddess .
As per the instructions given by the saint ,the king does pooja and Goddess appears there and gives him a wish, the king asks that his kingdom would be back to normal, she gives him a stone with power in it , and asks him to put the stone in the place, where the girl was killed because the power in the stone can make all the bad things into good things, he does it and everything becomes normal in his kingdom. In order to hide the stone from falling into wrong hands with the help of that saint he constructs few obstacles in the path so that no one can misuse it.
After reading this story , Rishin thinks if he can find the stone and bring it to his village all the problems would be solved.
He sees the instructions in the map to reach the stone , he felt this is the adventurous life he always wanted to go. He comes back home with the book and he tells the entire story to his grandfather and takes his permission to go there to get the stone then he packed some clothes, food, a knife, a net,few marbles in his bag and started to go in search of treasure.The forest was far away from his village.It would take many days to reach there.
Next day, while he was walking, many thoughts were going in his mind , but he was ready to face the risk .He walked and walked few miles and at last he came near the forest and was tired so he thought of taking rest.
Second day, he started to walk Inside the forest , he saw a jaguar coming towards him, and it attacks him then a girl comes near the jaguar and tries to distract it , then Rishin goes near the jaguar and fights with it and uses his net to capture the jaguar .
The girl was beautiful with long hair wearing a beautiful gown, she introduces herself as Trinetri one of the tribal who lives in the forest she had come in search of food when she saw him in trouble she came to save him, then she gives him some fruits and leave.
His journey continues, he keeps on walking and there he saw a big river and there was no other way but to cross the river he looks here and there he sees a boat nearby the rock and he takes the boat to cross the river, but he falls from the boat and is injured and unconscious.
When he wakes up he finds himself inside a hut , an old woman gave him treatment, he tells her about his journey the old lady helps him ,she gives some instructions to him, she tells him to follow the path which has oak trees, she also warns him that the journey is dangerous his life may be at risk ,but Rishin did not give up he took rest in that hut for that night next day he went in the oak tree path.
Next day , he continued his journey it was a stormy night ,it was raining heavily it was very difficult to go further but still he didn't stop walking , the forest was dark he couldn't see anything properly and going a big snake tries to attack him he searches and finds a wooden stick and he takes the snake and throws it away.
After walking for sometime he sees a giant , who comes in front of him and says he will allow him to go further only if he gives him something in return.
Rishin gives his marbles to the giant and goes further after walking for sometime he has reached his destination he finds the stone he feels happy that he has found the stone when he tries to pick up the stone someone from behind hits him with a rod, he turns to see who it was, its Trinetri the girl who had helped him before, he asks her why did you try to kill me?
She replies she is the queen of evil ,she had wasted many years in search of the stone but couldn't find it because it can only be seen by a generous person i.e who doesn't want to use the stone for himself but for the benefit of others. When she saw Rishin , was in search of the stone she followed him inside the forest and tried to help him in reaching the stone,so that she can kill him after finding it ,also she was the one who disguised herself as the old woman who helped him in the hut.
She turns into a beast with horns, and she tries to get the stone but couldn't touch it ,she then tries to kill Rishin, but he tries to escape then she attacks him with her horns he quickly pickups the stone and it starts glowing the beast eyes couldn't handle the power of light, she loses her eyes.
He takes his knife from the bag and cuts her horns, she loses all the power and she falls down.
Finally, he took the stone to his village and solved all the problems in his village.
The end
Dedicated to,
Rishin.M.D
Written by,
Poojitha.P
1/8/2020
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