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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Childhood / Youth
- Published: 03/06/2021
the lonely boy
Born 2007, M, from Bangladesh, BangladeshHello my name is John Alexander.I know my name is cool but I am not. Everybody hates me in my school. Oh sorry I am 13 years.I am not good at studies.I was also not good at sports.Everybody things I am not good boy or a student.No body took me in the sports.I was feeling very bad.I wish I could die.But I started talk to myself in mirror.I was feeling good.But somebody thing me I am mad, but I am not.I am a lonely boy who wants some friends. I completed my school with a very low result.I am now in college. I could not make any friends in college also. Now I am a doctor. Now I have many friends. many friends.I understand nothing cant be achieve without a good result.Nobody does not talk with me when I have bad grades.But my true friend is my mirror whom do I talk everyday
the lonely boy(kazi utsob anwar neil) Hello my name is John Alexander.I know my name is cool but I am not. Everybody hates me in my school. Oh sorry I am 13 years.I am not good at studies.I was also not good at sports.Everybody things I am not good boy or a student.No body took me in the sports.I was feeling very bad.I wish I could die.But I started talk to myself in mirror.I was feeling good.But somebody thing me I am mad, but I am not.I am a lonely boy who wants some friends. I completed my school with a very low result.I am now in college. I could not make any friends in college also. Now I am a doctor. Now I have many friends. many friends.I understand nothing cant be achieve without a good result.Nobody does not talk with me when I have bad grades.But my true friend is my mirror whom do I talk everyday
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Ramasubbulakshmi.R.
03/18/2021You have tried to express the inner feelings of a lonely boy. I liked the story very much. Even though the boy was alone, he had the greatest support from himself, that is how he became a doctor and had friends.
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Nidhi Kumari
03/18/2021I liked your story and I know you had a little difficulty in expressing your views but you can improve...
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Gail Moore
03/08/2021Your story is good. I hope it does not reflect some truth in it.
I'm not really one to tell you as my punctuation isn't fantastic but you could do with some improvements.
The more you write the better you will become. :-)
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Kazi utsob anwar neil
03/14/2021Thanks.I am trying to write the story more carefully. I am bad in English because I am from Bangladesh and Bangla is my mother tongue.
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