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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
- Published: 09/02/2020
The door of dreams
Born 2009, M, from Beaverton OR, United StatesThat one door. The door to the right of the janitor room. The door was never opened. Not one single time. No one ever goes in there. I don’t even know how the night janitor spends his time next to that room. My friend, Paul, and I were walking down the hallway chatting with some other kids. When all of us stopped we saw the door open. None of us actually believed the door was open. But yep it was. “Should we go in?” asked Kevin, one of my friends. “Maybe?” replied Winston, another one of my friends. “Should we let one of the teachers know?” asked Paul. “Nah. Then they will just close the door.” replied Kevin. “Let’s just peek in there for like a minute then we’ll head home,” said Winston. All four of us walked into the room. Suddenly the door slammed shut. “Whoa!” shouted Paul. “Hey let us out!” exclaimed Kevin. We pounded on the door for like a minute. Then I spoke up. “Why don’t we go the other way down the stairs to see if there is an exit.” “Sure!” everyone said at once. We started walking down a set of stairs. “I feel weird...” said Paul. Then everyone gasped as he disappeared in a bright flash. “Paul!” I shouted. Then the stairs started spiraling, then we were lifted into the air. “Whoa!” shouted Winston. He disappeared with a bright flash. Then Kevin disappeared. Then finally I saw a bright flash of light, then it went dark.
When I woke up I was falling. “Yaaahhh!” I screamed as I landed in a soft pile of black leaves. I stood up and looked around. I was in some sort of jungle. But all the plants were different. There were some huge ferns that had thorns. I stepped over a log and saw Kevin lying in a pile of leaves. He opened his eyes. “AHHH! Some huge aliens!!” he shouted as he kicked at me. “It’s me!” I said. “Oh.” Kevin sighed with relief. I helped him up and we started looking around for Winston and Paul. “Winston, Paul!” we both shouted. Suddenly something burst from the bushes and sprang in front of us. “Winston!” we shouted as he did some karate poses. Winston was really good at Karate and martial arts. “Oh. Hey guys.” he said as he lifted his glasses. “Where’s Paul?” I asked. “Haven’t seen him.” said Winston. We started calling his name when we heard a loud buzz behind us. We turned around and saw a huge wasp with long legs speeding at us. We all screamed. We ran toward a small cave and ducked in. The wasp followed us in. We were about to be turned into bug squash when a rock hit the wasp and smashed it into the ground. We turned around and saw a man with a long beard and a staff staring at us. “Woah.” said Kevin. “Who are you?” asked Winston. “I am Wizard Longbeard.” said the long bearded man. “Whoa.” said Kevin. “Have you seen a kid around 11 with short blond hair and likes to watch TV.” I asked. “What in the world is a TV?!” asked Wizard Longbeard. “But have you seen a boy?” asked Kevin. “Let’s check my crystal ball.” said Longbeard. “Whoa you have a crystal ball?” asked Kevin. “Want to try it? Just say the thing you want to see and it will show you it.” said Longbeard. “Show me what my sister is doing right now.” Kevin said to the crystal ball. It misted up and showed Kevin's sister dancing in her room. “Hehehe.” chuckled Kevin. “Show me where Paul is.” I said to the ball. It misted then showed Paul walking toward the cave where me, Winston and Kevin were. “PAUL! PAUL!! IN THE CAVE!” we all shouted trying to let him know we were in the cave. He turned then ran into the cave. “Oh- man. I am so glad to see you guys. I was chased by a huge wasp.” said Paul. “Can you get us out of here?” we asked Longbeard. “You are actually not even here, it's just a dream.” replied Longbeard. “Pinch me.” I told Kevin. He pinched me on the arm super hard. Then I started feeling strange. Then I saw a bright light and I woke up. “Woah!” I said as I rose from the ground. I stood up and saw all of my friends standing up too. “Whoa. That was weird.” said Paul. “That was awesome!” said Kevin. “Man, I am so tired.” said Winston. “Let’s go home.” I told them all. Suddenly another light flashed. A man appeared and then he stood up. “Well hello there,” said Longbeard. Then all four of us said “Oh-No”!
The door of dreams(Nicholas)
That one door. The door to the right of the janitor room. The door was never opened. Not one single time. No one ever goes in there. I don’t even know how the night janitor spends his time next to that room. My friend, Paul, and I were walking down the hallway chatting with some other kids. When all of us stopped we saw the door open. None of us actually believed the door was open. But yep it was. “Should we go in?” asked Kevin, one of my friends. “Maybe?” replied Winston, another one of my friends. “Should we let one of the teachers know?” asked Paul. “Nah. Then they will just close the door.” replied Kevin. “Let’s just peek in there for like a minute then we’ll head home,” said Winston. All four of us walked into the room. Suddenly the door slammed shut. “Whoa!” shouted Paul. “Hey let us out!” exclaimed Kevin. We pounded on the door for like a minute. Then I spoke up. “Why don’t we go the other way down the stairs to see if there is an exit.” “Sure!” everyone said at once. We started walking down a set of stairs. “I feel weird...” said Paul. Then everyone gasped as he disappeared in a bright flash. “Paul!” I shouted. Then the stairs started spiraling, then we were lifted into the air. “Whoa!” shouted Winston. He disappeared with a bright flash. Then Kevin disappeared. Then finally I saw a bright flash of light, then it went dark.
When I woke up I was falling. “Yaaahhh!” I screamed as I landed in a soft pile of black leaves. I stood up and looked around. I was in some sort of jungle. But all the plants were different. There were some huge ferns that had thorns. I stepped over a log and saw Kevin lying in a pile of leaves. He opened his eyes. “AHHH! Some huge aliens!!” he shouted as he kicked at me. “It’s me!” I said. “Oh.” Kevin sighed with relief. I helped him up and we started looking around for Winston and Paul. “Winston, Paul!” we both shouted. Suddenly something burst from the bushes and sprang in front of us. “Winston!” we shouted as he did some karate poses. Winston was really good at Karate and martial arts. “Oh. Hey guys.” he said as he lifted his glasses. “Where’s Paul?” I asked. “Haven’t seen him.” said Winston. We started calling his name when we heard a loud buzz behind us. We turned around and saw a huge wasp with long legs speeding at us. We all screamed. We ran toward a small cave and ducked in. The wasp followed us in. We were about to be turned into bug squash when a rock hit the wasp and smashed it into the ground. We turned around and saw a man with a long beard and a staff staring at us. “Woah.” said Kevin. “Who are you?” asked Winston. “I am Wizard Longbeard.” said the long bearded man. “Whoa.” said Kevin. “Have you seen a kid around 11 with short blond hair and likes to watch TV.” I asked. “What in the world is a TV?!” asked Wizard Longbeard. “But have you seen a boy?” asked Kevin. “Let’s check my crystal ball.” said Longbeard. “Whoa you have a crystal ball?” asked Kevin. “Want to try it? Just say the thing you want to see and it will show you it.” said Longbeard. “Show me what my sister is doing right now.” Kevin said to the crystal ball. It misted up and showed Kevin's sister dancing in her room. “Hehehe.” chuckled Kevin. “Show me where Paul is.” I said to the ball. It misted then showed Paul walking toward the cave where me, Winston and Kevin were. “PAUL! PAUL!! IN THE CAVE!” we all shouted trying to let him know we were in the cave. He turned then ran into the cave. “Oh- man. I am so glad to see you guys. I was chased by a huge wasp.” said Paul. “Can you get us out of here?” we asked Longbeard. “You are actually not even here, it's just a dream.” replied Longbeard. “Pinch me.” I told Kevin. He pinched me on the arm super hard. Then I started feeling strange. Then I saw a bright light and I woke up. “Woah!” I said as I rose from the ground. I stood up and saw all of my friends standing up too. “Whoa. That was weird.” said Paul. “That was awesome!” said Kevin. “Man, I am so tired.” said Winston. “Let’s go home.” I told them all. Suddenly another light flashed. A man appeared and then he stood up. “Well hello there,” said Longbeard. Then all four of us said “Oh-No”!
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