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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Friends / Friendship
- Published: 08/14/2020
that one last hug
Born 2006, F, from JESSORE ROAD, IndiaTHAT ONE LAST HUG
There was a boy and a girl who lives together in a small city. The name of the girl is preeti and the boy is jack. They both are good friends and they had the relationship of more than friends. One day when preeti was sitting beside a window looking to a very beautiful sky ,small birds were flying like aeroplanes the weather was so romantic. Suddenly an aeroplane passes she thought that if she could go up in the sky like the birds and aeroplane .Jack came inside quietly and gave a bunch of roses to her .Preeti shocked and said “ why do you make such things that makes me scared as well as happy”(smiling with joy) .Jack replied “preeti don’t be sad by the way why were you looking to the sky so seriously”. Preeti said “nothing more actually I want to go somewhere alone, please don’t mind jack but I need some real personal space”. Jack replied “ oh you will not take me but after you will go there. I will be so lonely and I will miss you so much. preeti was thinking how much jack loves her .Next morning preeti woke up she saw a letter with a rose that jack left for her. In that letter jack wrote preeti “ I love you more than myself and I want you to always be happy this a small trip to goa which I arranged for you this are the flight tickets and I hope you will love the place. So go and enjoy and I have not booked your returning ticket whenever you want me to book it I will do so. So almost if you are happy I also became happier .below is your ticket .Enjoy yourself and call me if you get time”. preeti was really so shocked her eyes wetted reading the letter she took the tickets and moved to goa . There she made a friend named kartik at their first meeting .preeti said “ hi can i take the seat” kartik replied “ why not” then preeti and kartik started talking. Soon they became friends. One day when preeti and kartik was walking to the beach side. Suddenly kartik holds her hand and pushed herself to him preeti said “ kartik what happened why are you looking to me like this”. kartik replied “oh preeti I don’t know but I am feeling very special when i am with you. They both hug each other .Now it seems that they were starting to love each other. Preeti went to the cottage she thought maybe it was wrong as she was committed to jack and she does not have the right to love someone else. kartik came to her house and said “preeti please I am sorry. I don’t know but after spending 2 days with you i think maybe i love you”. preeti replied “ kartik its not your fault but i forgot to tell you that i am committed. kartik gave a look and went to his own cottage .Then she called jack saying “Jack i want to come back .please book my returning tickets” .jack replied “ wait preeti what happend why are you in so hurry visit that place properly its only 2 days and, you want to go there, so what is the problem now.preeti explained the whole matter to him.jack replied listen “ preeti i don’t know that whether you are right or not and i don’t know what to do but i want you to come back, i know its difficult for you to come back.i will not force you to do anything .Do whatever you think is right and i hope you r decision will going to be good.
Preeti was so confused she packed her bag and went to home without telling kartik anything .she have also a soft corner towards kartik but she was committed to jack also its her responsibility to keep the commitment .she knew she will never meet kartik again but still she spend the most beautiful time with him.
that one last hug(kaushambika samanta)
THAT ONE LAST HUG
There was a boy and a girl who lives together in a small city. The name of the girl is preeti and the boy is jack. They both are good friends and they had the relationship of more than friends. One day when preeti was sitting beside a window looking to a very beautiful sky ,small birds were flying like aeroplanes the weather was so romantic. Suddenly an aeroplane passes she thought that if she could go up in the sky like the birds and aeroplane .Jack came inside quietly and gave a bunch of roses to her .Preeti shocked and said “ why do you make such things that makes me scared as well as happy”(smiling with joy) .Jack replied “preeti don’t be sad by the way why were you looking to the sky so seriously”. Preeti said “nothing more actually I want to go somewhere alone, please don’t mind jack but I need some real personal space”. Jack replied “ oh you will not take me but after you will go there. I will be so lonely and I will miss you so much. preeti was thinking how much jack loves her .Next morning preeti woke up she saw a letter with a rose that jack left for her. In that letter jack wrote preeti “ I love you more than myself and I want you to always be happy this a small trip to goa which I arranged for you this are the flight tickets and I hope you will love the place. So go and enjoy and I have not booked your returning ticket whenever you want me to book it I will do so. So almost if you are happy I also became happier .below is your ticket .Enjoy yourself and call me if you get time”. preeti was really so shocked her eyes wetted reading the letter she took the tickets and moved to goa . There she made a friend named kartik at their first meeting .preeti said “ hi can i take the seat” kartik replied “ why not” then preeti and kartik started talking. Soon they became friends. One day when preeti and kartik was walking to the beach side. Suddenly kartik holds her hand and pushed herself to him preeti said “ kartik what happened why are you looking to me like this”. kartik replied “oh preeti I don’t know but I am feeling very special when i am with you. They both hug each other .Now it seems that they were starting to love each other. Preeti went to the cottage she thought maybe it was wrong as she was committed to jack and she does not have the right to love someone else. kartik came to her house and said “preeti please I am sorry. I don’t know but after spending 2 days with you i think maybe i love you”. preeti replied “ kartik its not your fault but i forgot to tell you that i am committed. kartik gave a look and went to his own cottage .Then she called jack saying “Jack i want to come back .please book my returning tickets” .jack replied “ wait preeti what happend why are you in so hurry visit that place properly its only 2 days and, you want to go there, so what is the problem now.preeti explained the whole matter to him.jack replied listen “ preeti i don’t know that whether you are right or not and i don’t know what to do but i want you to come back, i know its difficult for you to come back.i will not force you to do anything .Do whatever you think is right and i hope you r decision will going to be good.
Preeti was so confused she packed her bag and went to home without telling kartik anything .she have also a soft corner towards kartik but she was committed to jack also its her responsibility to keep the commitment .she knew she will never meet kartik again but still she spend the most beautiful time with him.
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