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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 06/05/2020
DEAR MUMMA...,
I'm always in solitude at my hostel room…
It's your Mellifluous words which keeps me happy!
You are my eternity of Felicity!
Your advices are the elixir which keeps my soul pristine!
The halcyon days i spent with you was a lovable cine!
You are a ethereal Angel in the real…
The pain you tackled for me are manifold…
But you never failed to keep me hold!
Your Each and every scars deserves the Oscars!
And the epic smile to hide your pain was astonishing!
I'm always grateful to the love you showed me…
And i remember you once again…
You are the idyllic memories of your idiot!
Words by,
-S.Surya Prabu
Dear Mumma...,(Surya)
DEAR MUMMA...,
I'm always in solitude at my hostel room…
It's your Mellifluous words which keeps me happy!
You are my eternity of Felicity!
Your advices are the elixir which keeps my soul pristine!
The halcyon days i spent with you was a lovable cine!
You are a ethereal Angel in the real…
The pain you tackled for me are manifold…
But you never failed to keep me hold!
Your Each and every scars deserves the Oscars!
And the epic smile to hide your pain was astonishing!
I'm always grateful to the love you showed me…
And i remember you once again…
You are the idyllic memories of your idiot!
Words by,
-S.Surya Prabu
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Gail Moore
06/06/2020Your poem is lovely but then I got to the end and didn’t really understand what you were trying to say?
All the same a great piece :-)
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Darlington Chukwunyere
06/05/2020My mum lives many miles away in Florida, while I reside here in West Africa. Before she travelled years ago, we were so close. But then we fought every now and then. (Agreeing to disagree). Most times I just wanted to go away from her troubles, and get some fresh air. Well, it happened, she migrated. Now I miss her every passing second.
You brought me back good memories with this poem. Thank you so much, Surya.
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Surya
06/05/2020Your comment melted my heart...
Misunderstanding always leads to regrets... So be careful...
Thank you!
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