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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Friends / Friendship
- Published: 05/30/2020
cherry bloosm
Born 2004, F, from Ajmer / rajasthan, Indiai was basically a quite child , until get a buddy to converse on. i was not good in making conversations or making new friends. my school days were absurd until my 7th grade ,then i found a same girl as me , we were totally same in every kind we didn't realise this this that year , but when we were in same grade "9 th " . we became best buddies.
best in the sense like talking ,bout k dama and kpop . we only opened up at social media very well . we have sent countless "I OWE YOU " texts to each other. but in real both of us has that some kind of hate towards each other . we were close just in saying , all our teachers and students observed us as "best friends". but only we knew we had that hate.
that hate grew when we were seperated in grade "11th". when only "watsapp" was the way to communicate .after constant quarrels we seperated for almost a year . after sometime ,i don't know how we started to talk again countless "i owe you " texts the first day.
[she had a family problem , her dad was not well] i wished her regards and told you can ask me anytime 'bout your studies .
[ we could not meet because its lockdown due to a pendemic ] and only thing i could offer was helping her to cope stress and do some help in studies.
first day we loved each other
second day we were cozy
third day we both were back on our real sides
and from next time she only showed when she needed help .
i got to know she has some other friends from different countries .i had really no problem with that i swear, we did not talk about us , she was only sending me her talks with her friend . i was obviously annoyed .
when we fought before , it was me who begged to lets get started again . guess what? thousands of messages i typed of sorry , begging , to return and what i got? just a plain ok!
every time she mainly used to say " we are not met for each other , lets forget each other . but both of our hearts ached because we in deep inside we dwell love for each other.
the last time she did messaged me herself. i returned back immediately .
but as i told above we shattered in six days
everytime i thought why cant we be like my other friends .talk normally ,not like poets in pain ,make fun of others and of each other .why not achieve our goals togather . but sadly we cant .
maybe i lacked it , maybe she does , in real we both did . i'll accept you as you are .
"BUT THIS TIME ,I NOW TELL YOU SWEETIE WE ARE REALLY NOT MADE FOR EACH OTHER , WE JUST FIGHT AND DO NOTHING ELSE . ITS DIFFERENT WITH A FRIEND YOU SEE REGULARLY AND THE ONE WHOM YOU ONLY TALK VIRTUALLY IN MIND WE . WE KNOW WE LOVE EACH OTHER , BUT DONT KNOW WHAT SPECIAL FACTOR WE LACK .WHY GOD CHOSE US . I WILL ALWAYS HAVE YOUR MEMORIES AND WISH YOU WOULD TOO"
{ILL ALWAYS BE READY AGAIN TO BE WITH YOU }
i will always pray for you and your family , may you all be always healthy and pray to god to be fair with you , if he will not be there , ill always will---- with tears LOVE
cherry bloosm 's petals shed themselves in grace and beauty ,
"MAY THE PETAL TEACH ME THE ART OF LEETING GO"
cherry bloosm(Chaitali)
i was basically a quite child , until get a buddy to converse on. i was not good in making conversations or making new friends. my school days were absurd until my 7th grade ,then i found a same girl as me , we were totally same in every kind we didn't realise this this that year , but when we were in same grade "9 th " . we became best buddies.
best in the sense like talking ,bout k dama and kpop . we only opened up at social media very well . we have sent countless "I OWE YOU " texts to each other. but in real both of us has that some kind of hate towards each other . we were close just in saying , all our teachers and students observed us as "best friends". but only we knew we had that hate.
that hate grew when we were seperated in grade "11th". when only "watsapp" was the way to communicate .after constant quarrels we seperated for almost a year . after sometime ,i don't know how we started to talk again countless "i owe you " texts the first day.
[she had a family problem , her dad was not well] i wished her regards and told you can ask me anytime 'bout your studies .
[ we could not meet because its lockdown due to a pendemic ] and only thing i could offer was helping her to cope stress and do some help in studies.
first day we loved each other
second day we were cozy
third day we both were back on our real sides
and from next time she only showed when she needed help .
i got to know she has some other friends from different countries .i had really no problem with that i swear, we did not talk about us , she was only sending me her talks with her friend . i was obviously annoyed .
when we fought before , it was me who begged to lets get started again . guess what? thousands of messages i typed of sorry , begging , to return and what i got? just a plain ok!
every time she mainly used to say " we are not met for each other , lets forget each other . but both of our hearts ached because we in deep inside we dwell love for each other.
the last time she did messaged me herself. i returned back immediately .
but as i told above we shattered in six days
everytime i thought why cant we be like my other friends .talk normally ,not like poets in pain ,make fun of others and of each other .why not achieve our goals togather . but sadly we cant .
maybe i lacked it , maybe she does , in real we both did . i'll accept you as you are .
"BUT THIS TIME ,I NOW TELL YOU SWEETIE WE ARE REALLY NOT MADE FOR EACH OTHER , WE JUST FIGHT AND DO NOTHING ELSE . ITS DIFFERENT WITH A FRIEND YOU SEE REGULARLY AND THE ONE WHOM YOU ONLY TALK VIRTUALLY IN MIND WE . WE KNOW WE LOVE EACH OTHER , BUT DONT KNOW WHAT SPECIAL FACTOR WE LACK .WHY GOD CHOSE US . I WILL ALWAYS HAVE YOUR MEMORIES AND WISH YOU WOULD TOO"
{ILL ALWAYS BE READY AGAIN TO BE WITH YOU }
i will always pray for you and your family , may you all be always healthy and pray to god to be fair with you , if he will not be there , ill always will---- with tears LOVE
cherry bloosm 's petals shed themselves in grace and beauty ,
"MAY THE PETAL TEACH ME THE ART OF LEETING GO"
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Pratik
06/01/2020The idea behind your story is amazing, Chaitali. The way you've describe everything is beautiful. The only problem here is grammatical mistakes. This problem can easily be cured. You need to start every sentence with a capital letter, prevent unwanted spaces and avoid spelling mistakes. First, type the stories in MS Word and then paste it here. MS Word shows you your grammatical errors. In short, don't write a story just for the sake of writing.
You can't edit the story once you upload it. So check it at least 2-3 times before uploading. Please don't get offended by what I said. I believe you will get 5 stars if you stop making grammatical errors.
Keep writing Chaitali!
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