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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 05/28/2020
Snowball fight with dad
Born 2009, M, from Beaverton OR, United StatesThe cold wind brushed against my face as if it were a icy hand. I was standing in front of my house waiting for my dad. He was getting some big buckets and two shovels from the garage. I could see my breath in front of me. “Dad!” I called into the garage. “Yes?” replied my dad. “Can I go get my snow mask?” I called back. “Sure” replied my dad. I dashed back into the house and grabbed my snow mask. I ran back outside and put it on. I looked like a knight going out to battle in the snow. “Let’s have a snowball fight.” said my dad. “Yeah!” I said in an excited voice. He gave me a shovel and said “I shall destroy your kingdom!” I ignored him and I started to fill a bucket with snow.
I am the knight of the snowy kingdom and I must defend it from Yrneh, the snow blowing dragon...I must build my walls strong and thick to protect it from Yrneh. I gathered the villagers and said “People of the Snowy kingdom we must protect ourselves from Yrneh the snow dragon. Please help me build this wall to protect us. Please arm yourself with cannons to fight against Yrneh.” Elyakim, the village chief, took the villagers and started to help. The sun was about to set and Yrneh was on his way. Lyakim led the villagers behind the wall and we waited.
The shadow of Yrneh against the falling sun made him look even bigger. The villagers started trembling as Yrneh got closer. “People of the snowy kingdom prepare to meet doom!” Yrneh said laughing. The villagers started trembling even more. “Don’t worry!” Lyakim said to the crowd. “The knight will destroy Yrneh and we will have peace again!” I started loading the cannons with cannonballs. I started firing at Yrneh. He got very angry and started shooting ice balls at me. I ducked like a ninja dodging an arrow. I fired at his nose and it started burning away. He roared in pain and fired five ice balls at me! I ducked again but they crashed into a guard tower. Some parts of the tower froze. Finally, I got an idea. I shoved ten cannonballs into the cannon and fired. They hit him right in the face. he fell to the ground with a thud. I jumped off the guard tower and ran to Yrneh’s kingdom and started throwing snow on Yrneh. Once Yrneh was covered with snow I started jumping on the snow covered Yrneh celebrating. “I destroyed Yrneh” I exclaimed.
The sun started to rise and the snow started to melt. Once all the snow on Yrneh melted. Yrneh got up and ran back home yelling “I will get revenge!” Everyone in the village ran out of the kingdom and threw me in the air. They keep on doing that until sunset. I can’t wait to battle another monster.
Snowball fight with dad(Nicholas)
The cold wind brushed against my face as if it were a icy hand. I was standing in front of my house waiting for my dad. He was getting some big buckets and two shovels from the garage. I could see my breath in front of me. “Dad!” I called into the garage. “Yes?” replied my dad. “Can I go get my snow mask?” I called back. “Sure” replied my dad. I dashed back into the house and grabbed my snow mask. I ran back outside and put it on. I looked like a knight going out to battle in the snow. “Let’s have a snowball fight.” said my dad. “Yeah!” I said in an excited voice. He gave me a shovel and said “I shall destroy your kingdom!” I ignored him and I started to fill a bucket with snow.
I am the knight of the snowy kingdom and I must defend it from Yrneh, the snow blowing dragon...I must build my walls strong and thick to protect it from Yrneh. I gathered the villagers and said “People of the Snowy kingdom we must protect ourselves from Yrneh the snow dragon. Please help me build this wall to protect us. Please arm yourself with cannons to fight against Yrneh.” Elyakim, the village chief, took the villagers and started to help. The sun was about to set and Yrneh was on his way. Lyakim led the villagers behind the wall and we waited.
The shadow of Yrneh against the falling sun made him look even bigger. The villagers started trembling as Yrneh got closer. “People of the snowy kingdom prepare to meet doom!” Yrneh said laughing. The villagers started trembling even more. “Don’t worry!” Lyakim said to the crowd. “The knight will destroy Yrneh and we will have peace again!” I started loading the cannons with cannonballs. I started firing at Yrneh. He got very angry and started shooting ice balls at me. I ducked like a ninja dodging an arrow. I fired at his nose and it started burning away. He roared in pain and fired five ice balls at me! I ducked again but they crashed into a guard tower. Some parts of the tower froze. Finally, I got an idea. I shoved ten cannonballs into the cannon and fired. They hit him right in the face. he fell to the ground with a thud. I jumped off the guard tower and ran to Yrneh’s kingdom and started throwing snow on Yrneh. Once Yrneh was covered with snow I started jumping on the snow covered Yrneh celebrating. “I destroyed Yrneh” I exclaimed.
The sun started to rise and the snow started to melt. Once all the snow on Yrneh melted. Yrneh got up and ran back home yelling “I will get revenge!” Everyone in the village ran out of the kingdom and threw me in the air. They keep on doing that until sunset. I can’t wait to battle another monster.
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Kanishka Roy
05/28/2020Very vivid imagination salohcin!
If I may suggest something as a reader, do not disclose in your description that you have written the names backwards. I assume you are a MCU fan, and most MCU movies have fun hidden meanings in the character's names. We call it 'easter eggs'!
Similarly, this fun thing, naming characters backwards, can be your story's Easter eggs.
Good job!
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