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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Ghost Stories / Paranormal
- Published: 05/27/2020
Spooky!
Born 2009, M, from Beaverton OR, United StatesOn a dark October night lighting flashed as I walked through the rain. It was October 1, Saturday. I walked past houses and cars. Suddenly I stopped right in front of a house. The house was made with wooden planks and it looked like the house was about to collapse. “HUH?” I said. I started walking towards the house. I opened the door with a creak. I walked in and every step I made the floor creaked. I walked towards a door. All of a sudden the lights went out. I took a match from my pocket and lit it. I walked into the door and saw a candle lit in the middle of the room. Suddenly the windows started banging and the door slammed closed and locked. Then I thought, am I going to be stuck in here forever? Suddenly a gust of wind blew out my match. Lightning flashed outside the house. I thought I saw something standing in the corner. I thought Are my eyes tricking me? The second flash he was gone. I blinked and he was still not there. The third flash I saw him standing a few feet in front of me. On the fourth flash I felt something behind me. I turned around slowly and screamed. The person also screamed. But then I said “AA..AA..lll...ll.eee..xx?” “ how did you get in here?” I asked. He shrugged. When suddenly the door slammed shut. We screamed again. We ran around the room screaming as the lights flickered on and off. Suddenly we saw a Bright object in front of us. He was all glowy. I thought he was a ghost. I opened my mouth so wide it hurt my mouth. “I know I’m a ghost,” he said. “Ghosts are real?” I stammered. “Yep and I will help you get out of this house. Follow me” he said. We followed him to a trapdoor in the opposite side of the room. he held the door open as we climbed out….
We crawled out of the pet slab. We were free from the house. Alex and I started walking home and we invited the ghost to come with us but he said he had to stay. The next day the house got knocked down. The ghost escaped quickly and came to my house. When I saw him I let him stay at my house and never told my mom or dad. We had no more troubles after that.
Spooky!(Nicholas)
On a dark October night lighting flashed as I walked through the rain. It was October 1, Saturday. I walked past houses and cars. Suddenly I stopped right in front of a house. The house was made with wooden planks and it looked like the house was about to collapse. “HUH?” I said. I started walking towards the house. I opened the door with a creak. I walked in and every step I made the floor creaked. I walked towards a door. All of a sudden the lights went out. I took a match from my pocket and lit it. I walked into the door and saw a candle lit in the middle of the room. Suddenly the windows started banging and the door slammed closed and locked. Then I thought, am I going to be stuck in here forever? Suddenly a gust of wind blew out my match. Lightning flashed outside the house. I thought I saw something standing in the corner. I thought Are my eyes tricking me? The second flash he was gone. I blinked and he was still not there. The third flash I saw him standing a few feet in front of me. On the fourth flash I felt something behind me. I turned around slowly and screamed. The person also screamed. But then I said “AA..AA..lll...ll.eee..xx?” “ how did you get in here?” I asked. He shrugged. When suddenly the door slammed shut. We screamed again. We ran around the room screaming as the lights flickered on and off. Suddenly we saw a Bright object in front of us. He was all glowy. I thought he was a ghost. I opened my mouth so wide it hurt my mouth. “I know I’m a ghost,” he said. “Ghosts are real?” I stammered. “Yep and I will help you get out of this house. Follow me” he said. We followed him to a trapdoor in the opposite side of the room. he held the door open as we climbed out….
We crawled out of the pet slab. We were free from the house. Alex and I started walking home and we invited the ghost to come with us but he said he had to stay. The next day the house got knocked down. The ghost escaped quickly and came to my house. When I saw him I let him stay at my house and never told my mom or dad. We had no more troubles after that.
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JD
05/27/2020With the picture you chose, I think it might have been better to wait till October to post this story, but I'm sure there are those who like Halloween related stories all year long, so maybe I'm wrong about that. It was a fun story for kids, but I couldn't help but wonder how things could be so trouble free after you let a ghost move into your house! That sounds spooky to me! : )
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