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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 04/12/2019
Years of depression
Born 1994, F, from Mexico city, MexicoDepression is something that I have been struggling with for a couple of years now. And I wanted to try and put into words some of the things I feel some days. This might be a trigger, please take these words lightly and seek help if you think you might be going through the same thing.
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sometimes i look into the past
take hours looking at pictures
confusion clouds my eyes
i can´t remember these feelings
you used to be so happy
just look at that smile on your face
i wonder what changed this
feel like there´s nothing left
the days get darker and darker
can´t remember the light
i sink lower and faster
this is out of my hands
i´ve been like this for years
it might not end well
but time keeps on ticking
maybe i should seek help
it´s tiring being like this
seeing everything gray
i sometimes dream to disappear
wish all this would end
i´ll keep holding on
barely and not dearly
won´t deny that I´m wrong
please stay here don´t leave me
Years of depression(Andy)
Depression is something that I have been struggling with for a couple of years now. And I wanted to try and put into words some of the things I feel some days. This might be a trigger, please take these words lightly and seek help if you think you might be going through the same thing.
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sometimes i look into the past
take hours looking at pictures
confusion clouds my eyes
i can´t remember these feelings
you used to be so happy
just look at that smile on your face
i wonder what changed this
feel like there´s nothing left
the days get darker and darker
can´t remember the light
i sink lower and faster
this is out of my hands
i´ve been like this for years
it might not end well
but time keeps on ticking
maybe i should seek help
it´s tiring being like this
seeing everything gray
i sometimes dream to disappear
wish all this would end
i´ll keep holding on
barely and not dearly
won´t deny that I´m wrong
please stay here don´t leave me
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04/13/2019This is a beautiful poem and I am so very sorry that you personally have to go through life feeling this way.
I genuinely hope that you can find some more hope to grab onto that will help you keep fighting.
Keep writing! I think this is beautiful and represents true emotion and that's what makes writing good, when it has an impact on the reader and actually makes them feel.
Thank you for sharing your poem! I look forward to seeing more from you!
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