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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Friends / Friendship
- Published: 03/30/2019
My Eternal Twin
Born 1974, M, from Rabat, MoroccoIt was my best friend's birthday and I had been unable to find the suitable gift that could value his precious person. In truth, I hadn't found anything yet. I needed something immaterial and spiritual whose effect could last in his memory for a long time.
I asked my mom and she said nothing could do the job better than deep, true, and meaningful words from the bottom of heart. I got it. A poem to his excellency:
How can I ignore your magic touch? and you made me climb the highest mountains of despair!
Don't forget that I do breathe air from your faithful soul
You have always stood as a giver and I never found you a taker
You shared my ups and downs, together we ride the waves of my fate, we cross the oceans of darkness
You never pretended a role in a deceitful world of actors
You are my shade in a hot burning day. You are a plant in a deserted desert
If you weren't my blood, I wouldn't live a day alone
If you weren't my eye, I would be blind
If you weren't my ear, I would be deaf.
If you weren't my heart, I wouldn't be human
If you weren't my inspiration, I wouldn't be humane
If you weren’t here, I would be lost
Bless you The best of all friends
My Eternal Twin(Aziz)
It was my best friend's birthday and I had been unable to find the suitable gift that could value his precious person. In truth, I hadn't found anything yet. I needed something immaterial and spiritual whose effect could last in his memory for a long time.
I asked my mom and she said nothing could do the job better than deep, true, and meaningful words from the bottom of heart. I got it. A poem to his excellency:
How can I ignore your magic touch? and you made me climb the highest mountains of despair!
Don't forget that I do breathe air from your faithful soul
You have always stood as a giver and I never found you a taker
You shared my ups and downs, together we ride the waves of my fate, we cross the oceans of darkness
You never pretended a role in a deceitful world of actors
You are my shade in a hot burning day. You are a plant in a deserted desert
If you weren't my blood, I wouldn't live a day alone
If you weren't my eye, I would be blind
If you weren't my ear, I would be deaf.
If you weren't my heart, I wouldn't be human
If you weren't my inspiration, I wouldn't be humane
If you weren’t here, I would be lost
Bless you The best of all friends
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Lillian Kazmierczak
04/08/2022What a heartfelt tribute to your dear friend. How blessed you are to have someone you love that much in your life!
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Aziz
04/09/2022Yes Lillian, I am. I hope you have some of the same profile. Grateful for your time.
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Kevin Hughes
04/04/2019Aziz,
I have two friends like that (my wife makes three!). Everything you say is true. My Dad said that if you can count on one hand, the number of people who you can count on- God had blessed you beyond belief. I know families that can use all ten fingers, but I have never met anyone who could use all the fingers on one hand to count their best friends- who stayed friend their whole lives. In fact, the usual number is...one!
I am glad you have that kind of friend, and they have you! Smiles, Kevin
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Aziz
04/04/2019Touched by your meaningful and wise statements. Whenever I read your stories or feedback I sense your strong repertoire of values. Thank you so much. Cordially
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