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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 12/21/2018
Hansel and Gretel
Born 2010, M, from Portland, Oregon, United StatesI was taking a long nap, a very very long nap when I heard the voices of two foul children, “those chatty little children.” I grumbled. I heard them say: “ I did make a trail!” “Of what!?” “ Of bread crumbs!” “Of bread crumbs! OF BREAD CRUMBS! The birds could have eaten them!” Then they left chattering away. Then I went back to sleep. A few hours later who was disturbing me but the same greedy children! They said: “This candy tastes good!” “ In other words, this house tastes good!” Then they laughed. They laughed! “Who dares to laugh at my house.” I said. So I decided to get my revenge. Some minutes later I went to the porch and said: “you must be hungry come inside!” My plan was to fatten them up and then cook them (“P.S. don’t tell them”).
For the first meal I let them eat it happily, then I caged the boy and made a servant out of the girl. Next I fed the boy to fatten him up each time I checked his arm to see if he was fat enough but every time I checked he was still to skinny so either he was going to starve or get eaten. The second day he still did not eat. The second day, the third, the forth, the fifth day he still did not eat. “How can he survive this long?” I grumbled. So I decided that I was hungry enough to eat them both then I thought, if I make the boy starve enough then he will have to eat the food. After all, basically everything starves and the few thing that don’t starve or need food do not include smelly boys!
So I kept giving him food instead of eating him. The next day something hard got banged on my head. “Owwwww!” I screamed. I was sure that the chocolate planks that made the roof were secure enough that they wouldn't fall from the ceiling. The next day some stinky bird poop fell on my head. So it was the chocolate plank. “I knew that builder wasn’t trustworthy.” I said. On the eighth day my stool broke and I fell down. “I knew I should not have bought that stool from that yard sale.” I grumbled. The ninth day passed without any problems. Then on the tenth day problems came. The boy wasn’t eating! “Well let him starve.” I said.
On the eleventh day he did not eat. The twelfth day, the thirteenth, the fourteenth, and on the fifthteenth day he still did not eat. On the sixteenth day I decided that I was hungry enough to each both of the chatty and untrustworthy children. So I said to the girl: “ servant, go make the fire hot!” Next I grabbed the cage that held the treacherous, and naughty boy and brought it close to the fire. “How do you make sure the fire is hot?” The girl asked. See I told you children are vile and useless! “This better be the last time I show you how! And if you get how to do it you won’t know how very long!” So I demonstrated.
Then hot. Red. Orange. Then nothing.
Hansel and Gretel(Lucas)
I was taking a long nap, a very very long nap when I heard the voices of two foul children, “those chatty little children.” I grumbled. I heard them say: “ I did make a trail!” “Of what!?” “ Of bread crumbs!” “Of bread crumbs! OF BREAD CRUMBS! The birds could have eaten them!” Then they left chattering away. Then I went back to sleep. A few hours later who was disturbing me but the same greedy children! They said: “This candy tastes good!” “ In other words, this house tastes good!” Then they laughed. They laughed! “Who dares to laugh at my house.” I said. So I decided to get my revenge. Some minutes later I went to the porch and said: “you must be hungry come inside!” My plan was to fatten them up and then cook them (“P.S. don’t tell them”).
For the first meal I let them eat it happily, then I caged the boy and made a servant out of the girl. Next I fed the boy to fatten him up each time I checked his arm to see if he was fat enough but every time I checked he was still to skinny so either he was going to starve or get eaten. The second day he still did not eat. The second day, the third, the forth, the fifth day he still did not eat. “How can he survive this long?” I grumbled. So I decided that I was hungry enough to eat them both then I thought, if I make the boy starve enough then he will have to eat the food. After all, basically everything starves and the few thing that don’t starve or need food do not include smelly boys!
So I kept giving him food instead of eating him. The next day something hard got banged on my head. “Owwwww!” I screamed. I was sure that the chocolate planks that made the roof were secure enough that they wouldn't fall from the ceiling. The next day some stinky bird poop fell on my head. So it was the chocolate plank. “I knew that builder wasn’t trustworthy.” I said. On the eighth day my stool broke and I fell down. “I knew I should not have bought that stool from that yard sale.” I grumbled. The ninth day passed without any problems. Then on the tenth day problems came. The boy wasn’t eating! “Well let him starve.” I said.
On the eleventh day he did not eat. The twelfth day, the thirteenth, the fourteenth, and on the fifthteenth day he still did not eat. On the sixteenth day I decided that I was hungry enough to each both of the chatty and untrustworthy children. So I said to the girl: “ servant, go make the fire hot!” Next I grabbed the cage that held the treacherous, and naughty boy and brought it close to the fire. “How do you make sure the fire is hot?” The girl asked. See I told you children are vile and useless! “This better be the last time I show you how! And if you get how to do it you won’t know how very long!” So I demonstrated.
Then hot. Red. Orange. Then nothing.
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