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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Art / Music / Theater / Dance
- Published: 08/06/2018
The Storming of the Stage: A Poem
Born 2004, M, from Solihull, United KingdomHypnotically, the bedazzling lights permeated the raven hall,
Abruptly, raucous music blasted from the speakers brawl.
Like a glistening jewel, obsidian transformed into snow,
Unexpectedly, deep bass emanated from below.
Phosphorescent floodlights poured deep into their soul,
Daffodil in flames, yet blinded by coal.
Cacophonic cries (of euphoria) hurtle through space,
Swiftly shadows rushed onto the stage; it was a disgrace!
Intrusive and ambitious, these satanic silhouettes raced against the beat,
As soon enough as it had started, this confrontation concluded in defeat!
“Get down, now!” security aggressively hollered,
Threatening to strike and storm like a bollard.
Returning to the rhythm, eyes worshipped the stage,
As fatigued figures began to disengage.
The Storming of the Stage: A Poem(StablestToast40)
Hypnotically, the bedazzling lights permeated the raven hall,
Abruptly, raucous music blasted from the speakers brawl.
Like a glistening jewel, obsidian transformed into snow,
Unexpectedly, deep bass emanated from below.
Phosphorescent floodlights poured deep into their soul,
Daffodil in flames, yet blinded by coal.
Cacophonic cries (of euphoria) hurtle through space,
Swiftly shadows rushed onto the stage; it was a disgrace!
Intrusive and ambitious, these satanic silhouettes raced against the beat,
As soon enough as it had started, this confrontation concluded in defeat!
“Get down, now!” security aggressively hollered,
Threatening to strike and storm like a bollard.
Returning to the rhythm, eyes worshipped the stage,
As fatigued figures began to disengage.
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JD
08/07/2018I agree that you have written an amazing poem, worthy of 5 stars, and with good use of alliteration. Great use of vocabulary and truly indicative of a high level of intelligence and sensitivity, too! Thank you for sharing your poetry on Storystar! :-)
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