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- Story Listed as: True Life For Kids
- Theme: Survival / Success
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 10/28/2017
The Unknown Empire
Born 2007, M, from Ghaziabad, Uttar Pradesh, IndiaThe Unknown Empires
Introduction
(Based on real story)
Spain is divided between Christian Kingdoms to the north and Moorish Kingdom to the south. In the barren borderlands of Castille, Rodrigo Diaz, called El Cid, gains notoriety as a brilliant general and heroic crusader. The Cid is so popular among soldiers and peasants alike that the distrustful kings of Castille send him into exile. The Cid must join forces with his former enemies, the Moors, and fight against his beloved Castille. But an even greater threat waits across the sea in Africa, eager to seize what the Moors could not.
el cid
El Cid was born in 1040 and died in 1099. During this short period of life he ruled as the Prince of Valencia. Served as the Son of King Sancho. King Sancho’s brother King Alfonsohad been never satisfied with Cid. He became King Sancho’s Champion in 1065 and Sancho gave Cid the control of his army.
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1065 (scene - how it happened)
King Sancho: I will give you the control of my army, if you defeat my champion in a trial by a combat.
(El Cid enters the ring for the combat)
King Sancho: El Cid must fall on my legs.
Champion: On the order, your majesty.
(El Cid wins the trial combat)
King Sancho: You have won the trial
Combat, if you wish so you can meet my royal horse, just beneath my Castle.
(El Cid stands in the middle of the ring)
King Sancho: Ok! So you don’t want to meet my royal horse. Then you can start the next combat. You will need to kill my knight to get the control of my army.
Knight: So your majesty and El Cid, I’m ready for the combat.
El Cid: I even.
(El Cid kills the knight and wins the combat)
King Sancho: Oh great! You have stood in my challenge and won it. My army is yours to control.
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About four relics had been captured by him in a monastery. The monks and missionary had been a power of Spanish Kingdom. This brought a growth in the stock pile of gold for Cid. Newman Thompson, the conquistador, of Cid had been a very powerful gunpowder military unit. He used his one eye while aiming his target, (Usually not done by conquistador) and shoots one bullet at a time. However, he had been killed by Yusuf’s camel while protecting Cid and King Alfonso. He had spent years with Cid. Cid married in 1075.
But he had been sent out for a war, to stop the rebellions in Toledo with the help of a priest, Imam. However, he had no problem to find Imam. Imam gave him a solution to stop the rebellions. That was to recover the four relics. Cid was successful to recover them. Due to this, the rebellions resigned. When he returned after making the situation peaceful, (after two years) King Sancho had been killed. On this threat, one more threat was waiting for him-
‘King Alfonso; leave my kingdom, Castille,
and establish a new base in 6 months.’
He sent Cid with only one horse into exile.He met his wife and two daughters at the monastery. However, he was not alone. The resigned soldiers were ready to join him. He made his new army and established a new base. He destroyed one of the castle belonged to King Alfonso’s army. This forced King Alfonso to join Cid’s allies. Cid reached his former enemies base, as an ally, Moors the Motamaid. After that Cid returned to the monastery where his wife and daughters were staying.
Then, King Alfonso was in trouble and needed Cid’s help. Cid mustn’t help him, but he could not forget that he is the lord to adopt him. El Cid Campeador sent Newman Thompson to follow the knight and clear the way of King Alfonso. Newman cleared the way of King Alfonso to Cid’s army, and made his way safe. But some of the pikemen of Black Guard Army followed King Alfonso. Newman’s specialty was to kill (or shoot) the enemy at once; and he was doing that. But a Yusuf’s camel was continously attacking Newman as he was shooting the pikemen. Till Newman had killed all the pikemen, he had been graviously wounded by the camel’s attack.
And this led him to death. Cid didn’t realize that he has lost Newman, as it was the time to save King Afonso.However, King Alfonso hadn’t been harmed and reached safely to Cid’s camp. And after all, they recahed the camp of King Alfonso. Now to reach his Castille, across the sea, they had defeat the Black Guard Navy. For this, they had to defeat Black Guard Army and Yusuf too. So, they decided to break down all the Black Guard Navy’s docks. But this was not easy, because to reach till the docks, there was the Black Guard Army to defend the docks. So, this became a compulsary to defeat them. And Cid did it. But however, they did not knew that the Black Guard Army is totally defeated. But they reached Castille safely. And Cid’s family had some peaceful months, but would these stay for years? No.
Cid decided to establish a new base out of his beloved Castille. So he went to his small, weak allies to establish his base over there. But somehow, the villages were not in good condition. There was an imperial empire, named Berneuger. It was ruled by Count Berneuger. And it was the enemy of the small villages. Cid did not knew it. But Cid was so popular among them. Some of the Berneuger’s informer saw Cid, moving fastly towards the Larid village, without any gaurds with him. Seeing this they thought that- “ If we bring Cid’s head to Count Berneuger, we could have a great name in Berneuger.” So they started following Cid.Cid didn’t realize it. He reached The Larid Village. It was near the beatiful Valencia. However, there were the eyes of King Alfonso, El Cid, Count Berneuger and Yusuf on Valencia. But there was only one throne, waiting for the right and just.
For Cid, to reach there was not easy. So, the small Larid village became some hopes of Cid to rule over Valencia. But the Larid was in a way of destruction. Cid decided to defend them from Berneuger. But what he knew, that Berneuger is going to attack them with an imperial army. Still Cid fought with them. But a villager said “you must not stay here for long period. The gate be opened for you. As soon as well, you must cross it.” Listening to the villager, he looked the imperial army of Berneuger. And decided to cross the bridge.He had some villagers with him to cross the bridge. The Larid warriors thought the worst aboutCid. There was a tribe of people advanced to Imperial Age. Cid declared to build a Town Center over there, but there were some Paladins, coming fastly towards Cid. Cid said “No, stop the construction.” One of the Paladin said “The beatiful Valencia is just 20 min’ far from here, if still you wish to build a Town Center here, then its your wish.” Cid told them to show the way towards there. But in the way, some Count Berneuger’s swordsmen had been blocked the way of Cid. The paladin just formed a box in front of Cid and took him to another way. At the time, one of the Berneuger’sswordsman killed all the villagers. Cid shouted “My villagers!’’ So, the paladin said “Don’t be frightened, the villagers of Valencia will provide you a Town Center.” The way chosen by paladins was looking like – to cross the Great Wall of China.
Cid and the soldiers reached Valencia at the night time. When Cid reached there he saw The Construction of Valencia’s Wonder. The Valencia’s people were asking Cid to defend them till their Wonder is completed. And Cid decided to complete his objective. Cid’s honor defended Valencia and even gave Count Berneuger a big defeat. Due to this, The Valencia’s people and warriors, made Cid the prince of Valencia. The throne of Valencia was empty to rule. So, Cid became the heir to the throne of Valencia. But would he become the king? No. The Yusuf’s army had attacked Valencia. The allies of Cid, Moors the Motamaid, were of no use, and King Alfonso’s empire was too far to give up a backup for Cid. The Black Guard Army had raised once more. Even in this most difficult situation, Cid assembled his army to defend itself.
Cid prayed for his empire’s peace and they were to win over theYusuf’s army, that a mishabitant thing happened .............. …………… a very sharp, arbalest’s arrow directly came in Cid’s heart! The Valencia defended itself, but cannot accept Cid’s death. King Alfonso reached Valencia. He gave Cid’s wife a hope that Valencia will not fall. Was Cid going to R.I.P? No, he could get rest, but not in peace. The reason of it was the Black Guard Army and Yusuf. The Cid’s dead body was to be burried in front of the holy church. The way to it from Valencia was blocked by ambush of Black Guard Army, and army camps of Yusuf . Even the Black Guard Navy raised once more. Valencia was covered with enemies all around.
The army of Valencia became an imperial army and was ready to attack on Yusuf and the Black Guard Army. But there was certain attacks by the Black Guard Navy, which sank hundreds of Valencia’s ship. The army took decisions on its own till the throne was empty. Valencia attacked on Yusuf and the Black Guard Army. They had totally erased the name of Yusuf, the Black Guard Army and the Black Guard Navy. This type of battle was never ever fought by Valencia. Thousands of people died during this war. Even a single human being was not left by Valencia. At last, the Cid could get peace in hell or heaven. His dead body was finally burried near the holy church. But there stood a question, who will rule it, Count Berneuger or King Alfonso? No, Cid’s wife stood in between. She was to rule over Valencia and will be she to maintain the army if someone attack it back.Valencia became peaceful.
The Cid was the first Christian king to rule over Valencia……………………………..
THE END
The Unknown Empire(F. Shiefer Melbert)
The Unknown Empires
Introduction
(Based on real story)
Spain is divided between Christian Kingdoms to the north and Moorish Kingdom to the south. In the barren borderlands of Castille, Rodrigo Diaz, called El Cid, gains notoriety as a brilliant general and heroic crusader. The Cid is so popular among soldiers and peasants alike that the distrustful kings of Castille send him into exile. The Cid must join forces with his former enemies, the Moors, and fight against his beloved Castille. But an even greater threat waits across the sea in Africa, eager to seize what the Moors could not.
el cid
El Cid was born in 1040 and died in 1099. During this short period of life he ruled as the Prince of Valencia. Served as the Son of King Sancho. King Sancho’s brother King Alfonsohad been never satisfied with Cid. He became King Sancho’s Champion in 1065 and Sancho gave Cid the control of his army.
………………………………………………………………………………………………………
1065 (scene - how it happened)
King Sancho: I will give you the control of my army, if you defeat my champion in a trial by a combat.
(El Cid enters the ring for the combat)
King Sancho: El Cid must fall on my legs.
Champion: On the order, your majesty.
(El Cid wins the trial combat)
King Sancho: You have won the trial
Combat, if you wish so you can meet my royal horse, just beneath my Castle.
(El Cid stands in the middle of the ring)
King Sancho: Ok! So you don’t want to meet my royal horse. Then you can start the next combat. You will need to kill my knight to get the control of my army.
Knight: So your majesty and El Cid, I’m ready for the combat.
El Cid: I even.
(El Cid kills the knight and wins the combat)
King Sancho: Oh great! You have stood in my challenge and won it. My army is yours to control.
………………………………………………………………………………………………………
About four relics had been captured by him in a monastery. The monks and missionary had been a power of Spanish Kingdom. This brought a growth in the stock pile of gold for Cid. Newman Thompson, the conquistador, of Cid had been a very powerful gunpowder military unit. He used his one eye while aiming his target, (Usually not done by conquistador) and shoots one bullet at a time. However, he had been killed by Yusuf’s camel while protecting Cid and King Alfonso. He had spent years with Cid. Cid married in 1075.
But he had been sent out for a war, to stop the rebellions in Toledo with the help of a priest, Imam. However, he had no problem to find Imam. Imam gave him a solution to stop the rebellions. That was to recover the four relics. Cid was successful to recover them. Due to this, the rebellions resigned. When he returned after making the situation peaceful, (after two years) King Sancho had been killed. On this threat, one more threat was waiting for him-
‘King Alfonso; leave my kingdom, Castille,
and establish a new base in 6 months.’
He sent Cid with only one horse into exile.He met his wife and two daughters at the monastery. However, he was not alone. The resigned soldiers were ready to join him. He made his new army and established a new base. He destroyed one of the castle belonged to King Alfonso’s army. This forced King Alfonso to join Cid’s allies. Cid reached his former enemies base, as an ally, Moors the Motamaid. After that Cid returned to the monastery where his wife and daughters were staying.
Then, King Alfonso was in trouble and needed Cid’s help. Cid mustn’t help him, but he could not forget that he is the lord to adopt him. El Cid Campeador sent Newman Thompson to follow the knight and clear the way of King Alfonso. Newman cleared the way of King Alfonso to Cid’s army, and made his way safe. But some of the pikemen of Black Guard Army followed King Alfonso. Newman’s specialty was to kill (or shoot) the enemy at once; and he was doing that. But a Yusuf’s camel was continously attacking Newman as he was shooting the pikemen. Till Newman had killed all the pikemen, he had been graviously wounded by the camel’s attack.
And this led him to death. Cid didn’t realize that he has lost Newman, as it was the time to save King Afonso.However, King Alfonso hadn’t been harmed and reached safely to Cid’s camp. And after all, they recahed the camp of King Alfonso. Now to reach his Castille, across the sea, they had defeat the Black Guard Navy. For this, they had to defeat Black Guard Army and Yusuf too. So, they decided to break down all the Black Guard Navy’s docks. But this was not easy, because to reach till the docks, there was the Black Guard Army to defend the docks. So, this became a compulsary to defeat them. And Cid did it. But however, they did not knew that the Black Guard Army is totally defeated. But they reached Castille safely. And Cid’s family had some peaceful months, but would these stay for years? No.
Cid decided to establish a new base out of his beloved Castille. So he went to his small, weak allies to establish his base over there. But somehow, the villages were not in good condition. There was an imperial empire, named Berneuger. It was ruled by Count Berneuger. And it was the enemy of the small villages. Cid did not knew it. But Cid was so popular among them. Some of the Berneuger’s informer saw Cid, moving fastly towards the Larid village, without any gaurds with him. Seeing this they thought that- “ If we bring Cid’s head to Count Berneuger, we could have a great name in Berneuger.” So they started following Cid.Cid didn’t realize it. He reached The Larid Village. It was near the beatiful Valencia. However, there were the eyes of King Alfonso, El Cid, Count Berneuger and Yusuf on Valencia. But there was only one throne, waiting for the right and just.
For Cid, to reach there was not easy. So, the small Larid village became some hopes of Cid to rule over Valencia. But the Larid was in a way of destruction. Cid decided to defend them from Berneuger. But what he knew, that Berneuger is going to attack them with an imperial army. Still Cid fought with them. But a villager said “you must not stay here for long period. The gate be opened for you. As soon as well, you must cross it.” Listening to the villager, he looked the imperial army of Berneuger. And decided to cross the bridge.He had some villagers with him to cross the bridge. The Larid warriors thought the worst aboutCid. There was a tribe of people advanced to Imperial Age. Cid declared to build a Town Center over there, but there were some Paladins, coming fastly towards Cid. Cid said “No, stop the construction.” One of the Paladin said “The beatiful Valencia is just 20 min’ far from here, if still you wish to build a Town Center here, then its your wish.” Cid told them to show the way towards there. But in the way, some Count Berneuger’s swordsmen had been blocked the way of Cid. The paladin just formed a box in front of Cid and took him to another way. At the time, one of the Berneuger’sswordsman killed all the villagers. Cid shouted “My villagers!’’ So, the paladin said “Don’t be frightened, the villagers of Valencia will provide you a Town Center.” The way chosen by paladins was looking like – to cross the Great Wall of China.
Cid and the soldiers reached Valencia at the night time. When Cid reached there he saw The Construction of Valencia’s Wonder. The Valencia’s people were asking Cid to defend them till their Wonder is completed. And Cid decided to complete his objective. Cid’s honor defended Valencia and even gave Count Berneuger a big defeat. Due to this, The Valencia’s people and warriors, made Cid the prince of Valencia. The throne of Valencia was empty to rule. So, Cid became the heir to the throne of Valencia. But would he become the king? No. The Yusuf’s army had attacked Valencia. The allies of Cid, Moors the Motamaid, were of no use, and King Alfonso’s empire was too far to give up a backup for Cid. The Black Guard Army had raised once more. Even in this most difficult situation, Cid assembled his army to defend itself.
Cid prayed for his empire’s peace and they were to win over theYusuf’s army, that a mishabitant thing happened .............. …………… a very sharp, arbalest’s arrow directly came in Cid’s heart! The Valencia defended itself, but cannot accept Cid’s death. King Alfonso reached Valencia. He gave Cid’s wife a hope that Valencia will not fall. Was Cid going to R.I.P? No, he could get rest, but not in peace. The reason of it was the Black Guard Army and Yusuf. The Cid’s dead body was to be burried in front of the holy church. The way to it from Valencia was blocked by ambush of Black Guard Army, and army camps of Yusuf . Even the Black Guard Navy raised once more. Valencia was covered with enemies all around.
The army of Valencia became an imperial army and was ready to attack on Yusuf and the Black Guard Army. But there was certain attacks by the Black Guard Navy, which sank hundreds of Valencia’s ship. The army took decisions on its own till the throne was empty. Valencia attacked on Yusuf and the Black Guard Army. They had totally erased the name of Yusuf, the Black Guard Army and the Black Guard Navy. This type of battle was never ever fought by Valencia. Thousands of people died during this war. Even a single human being was not left by Valencia. At last, the Cid could get peace in hell or heaven. His dead body was finally burried near the holy church. But there stood a question, who will rule it, Count Berneuger or King Alfonso? No, Cid’s wife stood in between. She was to rule over Valencia and will be she to maintain the army if someone attack it back.Valencia became peaceful.
The Cid was the first Christian king to rule over Valencia……………………………..
THE END
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