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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 03/25/2017
THE FOOTPRINTS
Born 2005, F, from Chennai / tamilnadu, IndiaThe foot prints
On a shiny morning , the four sisters, bralee , rosy , lilly , and salee were in the way to home from school . suddenly , bralee stood in a place and screamed : hey !!! help !! the three sisters ran to her and asked the reason of her scream . bralee replied : oh!! I don’t know!! when I stand in this particular place , somebody is pulling me !!rosy and lilly went into laughter ! they said: oh, bralee , don’t be funny !! who is going to pull you in this silent place ! no single person pass the road then how can …. She was about to complete but salee blocked them. She claimed a idea which concluded: sisters !! we can have a test . we all can stand in this place . if we feel like bralee, then we can accept her words . if not ,it would be her imagination . as according to her plan , all stood in that place but they didn’t feel!! bralee was extremely disappointed . lilly exclaimed !: now the problem is solved ! so let’s go ahead! Bralee reached home sadly. She walked to her room and began to think about the incident . the place where bralee felt was called “MARINE”. it’s a jungle area time .it was dinner time . mom called everyone for supper. Bralee thought of telling the incident to her mom . she told everything to her but after hearing the word , “ MARINE” her mom’s eyes became red . she spoke in a loud voice . she said : bralee ! shut up ! how dare you to talk about marine . go to your room and sleep ! no supper for you today ! bralee was very much confused . she ran to her room and sat in her bed , thinking about marine . suddenly salee knocked the door asking : sister ! is your feeling true if yes , then come to marine with me . we shall go now and see the depth of marine !! bralee exclaimed : in this midnight !! I am very scared somehow both managed to jump in the street from the veranda. they reached the horror place “ MARINE” for reference , salee marked a circle with a white chalk in a particular place where bralee had felt . it was cloudy and within a blink , it started raining heavily .lightning flashed and thunderstorms were strong and loud . after sometime , the rain stopped . both were wet . they saw the circle and for a surprise the circle had not erased !! salee looked at the circle and for a sudden movement , a hand full of blood came out from the circle and pulled salee inside !!!! bralee was trembling with fear !! she stood there staring at a board which concluded: “MARINE , A TERRIBLE FOREST” it was written in blood !! the street had become dark , the lights were put off!! Bralee lay there unconscious , because she was confused and scared about the miracles of the marine forest !! suddenly , a mega lightning hit bralee and she was burnt into ashes !!!! a man passed by the road . he took the ashes of bralee in a bottle and disappeared !! he was a man of marine forest . bralee was formed into human again!! she opened her eyes slowly and found herself in the middle of the marine forest . she sat up hurriedly and saw a huge cave before her !! she slowly walked forward and reached the mouth of the cave . she went inside and saw the most beautiful and valuable gold!! it was like a palace full of gold and went ahead . she saw a beautiful and huge box that blocked her way. for a great surprise , she saw four “FOOTPRINTS” arranged in an ascending order !! she thought , “whose footprints these are” ? she didn’t care and walked ahead . of a sudden , a lady called bralee from a distance . she ran to that strange lady and asked , who are you ? the lady answered : oh ! I am very happy , I have founded you ! bralee was confused . the lady said, could you please sit in this rock , so that I can explain you ?? bralee nodded and both sat in that rock . the lady started : a century ago , you were a princess . and even this forest was a kingdom of footprints . the speciality of this kingdom is , if any creature step its foot on this soil , immediately the footprint would form and it will never erase . for example , look at the gold box . it has four footprints . those are the footprints of the four princesses. You are one among the four . bralee was surprised ; the lady continued , these footprints are very rare and powerful. If these footprints were erased, then the whole world will be burnt into ashes . please help me to protect this box . and one more thing , first we should find the remaining princesses and they should keep their foot on their footprints . if that incident happened; then the box will be protected by a shield . could you help me ? the lady asked politely . bralee thought deeply. At last , she decided to help . they began the hunt of searching the four princesses .
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THE FOOTPRINTS(v atufa mariyam)
The foot prints
On a shiny morning , the four sisters, bralee , rosy , lilly , and salee were in the way to home from school . suddenly , bralee stood in a place and screamed : hey !!! help !! the three sisters ran to her and asked the reason of her scream . bralee replied : oh!! I don’t know!! when I stand in this particular place , somebody is pulling me !!rosy and lilly went into laughter ! they said: oh, bralee , don’t be funny !! who is going to pull you in this silent place ! no single person pass the road then how can …. She was about to complete but salee blocked them. She claimed a idea which concluded: sisters !! we can have a test . we all can stand in this place . if we feel like bralee, then we can accept her words . if not ,it would be her imagination . as according to her plan , all stood in that place but they didn’t feel!! bralee was extremely disappointed . lilly exclaimed !: now the problem is solved ! so let’s go ahead! Bralee reached home sadly. She walked to her room and began to think about the incident . the place where bralee felt was called “MARINE”. it’s a jungle area time .it was dinner time . mom called everyone for supper. Bralee thought of telling the incident to her mom . she told everything to her but after hearing the word , “ MARINE” her mom’s eyes became red . she spoke in a loud voice . she said : bralee ! shut up ! how dare you to talk about marine . go to your room and sleep ! no supper for you today ! bralee was very much confused . she ran to her room and sat in her bed , thinking about marine . suddenly salee knocked the door asking : sister ! is your feeling true if yes , then come to marine with me . we shall go now and see the depth of marine !! bralee exclaimed : in this midnight !! I am very scared somehow both managed to jump in the street from the veranda. they reached the horror place “ MARINE” for reference , salee marked a circle with a white chalk in a particular place where bralee had felt . it was cloudy and within a blink , it started raining heavily .lightning flashed and thunderstorms were strong and loud . after sometime , the rain stopped . both were wet . they saw the circle and for a surprise the circle had not erased !! salee looked at the circle and for a sudden movement , a hand full of blood came out from the circle and pulled salee inside !!!! bralee was trembling with fear !! she stood there staring at a board which concluded: “MARINE , A TERRIBLE FOREST” it was written in blood !! the street had become dark , the lights were put off!! Bralee lay there unconscious , because she was confused and scared about the miracles of the marine forest !! suddenly , a mega lightning hit bralee and she was burnt into ashes !!!! a man passed by the road . he took the ashes of bralee in a bottle and disappeared !! he was a man of marine forest . bralee was formed into human again!! she opened her eyes slowly and found herself in the middle of the marine forest . she sat up hurriedly and saw a huge cave before her !! she slowly walked forward and reached the mouth of the cave . she went inside and saw the most beautiful and valuable gold!! it was like a palace full of gold and went ahead . she saw a beautiful and huge box that blocked her way. for a great surprise , she saw four “FOOTPRINTS” arranged in an ascending order !! she thought , “whose footprints these are” ? she didn’t care and walked ahead . of a sudden , a lady called bralee from a distance . she ran to that strange lady and asked , who are you ? the lady answered : oh ! I am very happy , I have founded you ! bralee was confused . the lady said, could you please sit in this rock , so that I can explain you ?? bralee nodded and both sat in that rock . the lady started : a century ago , you were a princess . and even this forest was a kingdom of footprints . the speciality of this kingdom is , if any creature step its foot on this soil , immediately the footprint would form and it will never erase . for example , look at the gold box . it has four footprints . those are the footprints of the four princesses. You are one among the four . bralee was surprised ; the lady continued , these footprints are very rare and powerful. If these footprints were erased, then the whole world will be burnt into ashes . please help me to protect this box . and one more thing , first we should find the remaining princesses and they should keep their foot on their footprints . if that incident happened; then the box will be protected by a shield . could you help me ? the lady asked politely . bralee thought deeply. At last , she decided to help . they began the hunt of searching the four princesses .
The story will continue in the same topic .
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