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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Creatures & Monsters
- Published: 02/24/2017
THE HORRIBLE PARK
Born 2005, F, from Chennai / tamilnadu, IndiaONCE THERE WERE TWO SISTERS . . . THE ELDER ONE BEING PREETI AND YOUNGER MARY. THEIR FAMILY SHIFTED TO A HOUSE NEAR A PARK. THE PARK WAS INDEED VERY BEAUTIFUL . MARY WAS VERY EXCITED TO SEE SUCH A WIDE PARK. EVEN PREETI WHO IS VERY SERIOUS RAN TO THE PARK AND STARTED PLAYING . DAYS PASSED LIKE THIS. AND NOW IT WAS THE TIME FOR TERMINAL EXAMS. THEY COULD NOT PAY ATTENTION TO STUDIES. THE PARK WAS BOTHERING THEM A LOT. THEY COULDN’T DO THEIR EXAMS WELL. RESULTS HAD COME AND FOR SURE THE MARKS OF PREETI AND MARY WERE POOR . THEIR MOM ADVICED THEM A LOT , BUT THEY DIDN’T PAY ATTENTION . THE ONLY WORK OF THEM WAS TO PLAY IN THE PARK . ONE NIGHT MOM CALLED PREETI SEPERATLY TO HER ROOM . PREETI YAWNED SAYING : OHH!!! AGAIN THE SAME BORING ADVICE !! I AM VERY EXHAUSTED WITH U MOM !!! I CANT LISTEN U . BUT HER MOM TIED HER IN A CHAIR AND SCREAMED, HAHHAHHAHAHHAHA!!!!!! . AND WITHIN A BLINK SHE BECAME A MONSTER !!!!!!! HER BODY WAS FULL OF BLOOD AND SMELLY!!!! . SUDDENLY TWO FIGURES CAME OUT OF HER BODY AND DASHED IN THE WALL . ONE WAS A BLACK FIGURE FULL OF BLOOD AND DISEASES AND THE OTHER WAS A ALIEN . PREETI WAS VERY SCARED . HER HEART BEAT RAN FAST . HER MOM HAD BECOME A MONSTER . SHE ASKED : OHH PREETI !! U WILL LISTEN TO ME OR NOT ? PREETI MURMERED : I WILL LISTEN . ARE YOU MY MOM . THE MONSTER REPLIED : YES !! I AM YOUR MOM . WHO IS A MONSTER . I WANTED TO ADVICE U IN HUMAN FORM , BUT U DIDN’T LISTEN , SO I HAD BECOME A MONSTER !!! LISTEN CAREFULLY AND DO WHAT I SAY . SAYING THIS SHE STARTED : THE PARK WHICH U LIKE THE MOST WAS MY HOME . WHEN I WAS A TINY GIRL , THE EMPTY PARK WAS A PALACE . MY PARENTS WERE IN THE HIGHEST POSITION OF THIS CONTRY AND SO I WAS VERY RICH . WHEN I GO TO SCHOOL MY FRIENDS ENVIED ON ME BECAUSE OF MY WEALTH . THIS CHANGED MY LIFE FOREVER . ONE DAY WHEN I CAME TO HOME FROM SCHOOL , I WAS SHOCKED TO SEE MY MOM LAYING BENEATH THE SOFA , HALF HEADED !!!!!! MY MOM HAD BEEN KILLED !!!!!! I SCREAMED AND WEPT A LOT . AT THE SAME TIME MY DAD CAME RUNNING . HE SAW ME AND MY DEAD MOM. HE PUSHED ME TO A CORNER AND MURMERD SOMETHING . SUDDENLY MY MOM WAS FLYING AND BECAME ALIVE !!! I WAS SURPRISED . I HUGGED MY DAD . I ASKED HOW HE DID IT . HE REPLIED: “OHH MY LOVELY DAUGHTER ! THIS IS SIMPLE . WE HAVE MAGICAL POWERS. IT IS OUR FAMILY SECRET. WHEN U GROW UP , U SHOULD USE THESE POWERS FOR GOOD WORKS . U SHOULDN’T GIVE IT TO WICKED PEOPLE . EVEN YOUR MOM WAS KILLED BY SOME WICKED PERSONS . THEY WANT THESE POWERS . AND SO DON’T BE CARELESS ABOUT THESE POWERS . I DON’T THINK , I CAN SAFEGUARD IT AND SO I GIVE THIS RESPONSIBILITY UPON U . I KNOW U CAN DO IT !! “ I AM GOING TO DIE SOON . SO TAKE CARE OF THE FAMILY POWERS . SAYING THIS HE DISAPPEARED MIRACOLOUSLY !!! YEARS PASSED AND I WAS PROTECTING MY MOM AND THE FAMILY POWERS . ONE DAY , MY DAD APPEARED IN MY DREAM. HE SAID: MY DAUGHTER !! I WANT TO TELL YOU A SECRET , ALL THE FAMILY POWERS ARE IN A BOOK . YOU CAN FIND IT IN THE GARDEN . ONCE IF YOU FIND THE BOOK THEN PROBLEMS WILL AROSE . IT WILL COME CONTINOUSLY AND DESTROY YOU . SO BE CAREFUL AND PROTECT THAT BOOK . AND DON’T WORRY ABOUT ME AND YOUR MOM , YOU JUST CARE YOURSELF. THEN I WOKE UP . IT WAS A SHINY MORNING . I WAS CONFUSED . I WAS THINKING , SHOULD TAKE THAT BOOK OR NOT !! THEN I DECIDED TO TAKE THE BOOK AND WAS READY TO FACE ANY PROBLEM . I STARTED SEARCHING FOR THE BOOK IN THE GARDEN . THE MOON AROSE AND IT WAS THE TIME OF SUNSET . STILL I DIDN’T FIND THE BOOK . SUDDENLY WIND WAS BLOWING RAPIDLY . IT WAS A STORM! I RAN TO THIS HOUSE WHICH IS STICKED TO THE PARK . I CLOSED THE DOOR AND WAITED UNTIL THE STORM BECOME COOL . DAYS PASSED LIKE THIS AND STILL THE STORM DIDN’T STOP !!!! I WAS VERY HUNGRY . AT THAT PERIOD , THIS HOUSE WAS QUIET DARK .AFTER A WEEK, THE STORM STOPPED!! I WENT TO MY PALACE . IT WAS QUIET DARK AND NOBODY WERE SEEN . I WAS SCARED . I KEPT EVERY FOOT WITH GREAT FEAR . SUDDENLY , SOMEBODY TIED MY EYES AND CLOSED MY MOUTH . I WAS KIDNAPPED!! I WAS UNCONSIOUS . WHEN I OPENED MY EYES , I WAS IN THIS HOUSE WHERE WE ARE TALKING NOW . THEY WERE THE ROBBERS . THEY THREATENED ME AND ASKED THE BOOK OF POWERS . BUT STILL I DIDN’T FOUND IT SO I SAID I DON’T HAVE . BUT THE ROBBERS DIDN’T BELIEVE ME .WITH SOME POWERS , THE GROUP OF ROBBERS MADE ME A MONSTER LIKE THIS !!! I WAS VERY ANGRY AND DECIDED NOT TO LOOK FOR THE BOOK. AS PER MY DECISION , I GAVE AWAY MY WEALTH TO THE POOR AND SHIFTED MY LIFE TO THIS HOUSE . I WAS ALSO SAD OF NOT OBEYING MY DAD . BUT I CANT FACE THE TOUGH ROBBERS . SO I MARRIED A NORMAL MAN AND GOT YOU AND YOUR SISTER . PREETI`S MOM ENDED . SHE EXCLAIMED : PREETI !! NOW U HAVE LISTENED MY PAST , ADVICE IT TO YOUR SISTER . PREETI RAN TO THE PARK AND PULLED MARY AND DRAGGED HER TO THE ROOM . PREETI KNEW THAT IF SHE ADVICE , MARY WONT LISTEN . SO SHE SHOWED THEIR MONSTROUS MOM AND MADE MARY TO BELIEVE . MOM WAS VERY HAPPY . SHE BECAME A NORMAL WOMAN NOW . WHEN MARY TORTURED HER MOM , SHE USED TO BECOME A MONSTER AND MAKE MARY TO FEAR !!!! THE FAMILY WAS FREE FROM THE RESPONSIBILITY AND LED A HAPPY LIFE!!!!! THE MONSTER MOM WAS THE HORRIBLE AS WELL AS SWEET MOM FOR PREETI AND MARY!!!!
THE HORRIBLE PARK(v atufa mariyam) ONCE THERE WERE TWO SISTERS . . . THE ELDER ONE BEING PREETI AND YOUNGER MARY. THEIR FAMILY SHIFTED TO A HOUSE NEAR A PARK. THE PARK WAS INDEED VERY BEAUTIFUL . MARY WAS VERY EXCITED TO SEE SUCH A WIDE PARK. EVEN PREETI WHO IS VERY SERIOUS RAN TO THE PARK AND STARTED PLAYING . DAYS PASSED LIKE THIS. AND NOW IT WAS THE TIME FOR TERMINAL EXAMS. THEY COULD NOT PAY ATTENTION TO STUDIES. THE PARK WAS BOTHERING THEM A LOT. THEY COULDN’T DO THEIR EXAMS WELL. RESULTS HAD COME AND FOR SURE THE MARKS OF PREETI AND MARY WERE POOR . THEIR MOM ADVICED THEM A LOT , BUT THEY DIDN’T PAY ATTENTION . THE ONLY WORK OF THEM WAS TO PLAY IN THE PARK . ONE NIGHT MOM CALLED PREETI SEPERATLY TO HER ROOM . PREETI YAWNED SAYING : OHH!!! AGAIN THE SAME BORING ADVICE !! I AM VERY EXHAUSTED WITH U MOM !!! I CANT LISTEN U . BUT HER MOM TIED HER IN A CHAIR AND SCREAMED, HAHHAHHAHAHHAHA!!!!!! . AND WITHIN A BLINK SHE BECAME A MONSTER !!!!!!! HER BODY WAS FULL OF BLOOD AND SMELLY!!!! . SUDDENLY TWO FIGURES CAME OUT OF HER BODY AND DASHED IN THE WALL . ONE WAS A BLACK FIGURE FULL OF BLOOD AND DISEASES AND THE OTHER WAS A ALIEN . PREETI WAS VERY SCARED . HER HEART BEAT RAN FAST . HER MOM HAD BECOME A MONSTER . SHE ASKED : OHH PREETI !! U WILL LISTEN TO ME OR NOT ? PREETI MURMERED : I WILL LISTEN . ARE YOU MY MOM . THE MONSTER REPLIED : YES !! I AM YOUR MOM . WHO IS A MONSTER . I WANTED TO ADVICE U IN HUMAN FORM , BUT U DIDN’T LISTEN , SO I HAD BECOME A MONSTER !!! LISTEN CAREFULLY AND DO WHAT I SAY . SAYING THIS SHE STARTED : THE PARK WHICH U LIKE THE MOST WAS MY HOME . WHEN I WAS A TINY GIRL , THE EMPTY PARK WAS A PALACE . MY PARENTS WERE IN THE HIGHEST POSITION OF THIS CONTRY AND SO I WAS VERY RICH . WHEN I GO TO SCHOOL MY FRIENDS ENVIED ON ME BECAUSE OF MY WEALTH . THIS CHANGED MY LIFE FOREVER . ONE DAY WHEN I CAME TO HOME FROM SCHOOL , I WAS SHOCKED TO SEE MY MOM LAYING BENEATH THE SOFA , HALF HEADED !!!!!! MY MOM HAD BEEN KILLED !!!!!! I SCREAMED AND WEPT A LOT . AT THE SAME TIME MY DAD CAME RUNNING . HE SAW ME AND MY DEAD MOM. HE PUSHED ME TO A CORNER AND MURMERD SOMETHING . SUDDENLY MY MOM WAS FLYING AND BECAME ALIVE !!! I WAS SURPRISED . I HUGGED MY DAD . I ASKED HOW HE DID IT . HE REPLIED: “OHH MY LOVELY DAUGHTER ! THIS IS SIMPLE . WE HAVE MAGICAL POWERS. IT IS OUR FAMILY SECRET. WHEN U GROW UP , U SHOULD USE THESE POWERS FOR GOOD WORKS . U SHOULDN’T GIVE IT TO WICKED PEOPLE . EVEN YOUR MOM WAS KILLED BY SOME WICKED PERSONS . THEY WANT THESE POWERS . AND SO DON’T BE CARELESS ABOUT THESE POWERS . I DON’T THINK , I CAN SAFEGUARD IT AND SO I GIVE THIS RESPONSIBILITY UPON U . I KNOW U CAN DO IT !! “ I AM GOING TO DIE SOON . SO TAKE CARE OF THE FAMILY POWERS . SAYING THIS HE DISAPPEARED MIRACOLOUSLY !!! YEARS PASSED AND I WAS PROTECTING MY MOM AND THE FAMILY POWERS . ONE DAY , MY DAD APPEARED IN MY DREAM. HE SAID: MY DAUGHTER !! I WANT TO TELL YOU A SECRET , ALL THE FAMILY POWERS ARE IN A BOOK . YOU CAN FIND IT IN THE GARDEN . ONCE IF YOU FIND THE BOOK THEN PROBLEMS WILL AROSE . IT WILL COME CONTINOUSLY AND DESTROY YOU . SO BE CAREFUL AND PROTECT THAT BOOK . AND DON’T WORRY ABOUT ME AND YOUR MOM , YOU JUST CARE YOURSELF. THEN I WOKE UP . IT WAS A SHINY MORNING . I WAS CONFUSED . I WAS THINKING , SHOULD TAKE THAT BOOK OR NOT !! THEN I DECIDED TO TAKE THE BOOK AND WAS READY TO FACE ANY PROBLEM . I STARTED SEARCHING FOR THE BOOK IN THE GARDEN . THE MOON AROSE AND IT WAS THE TIME OF SUNSET . STILL I DIDN’T FIND THE BOOK . SUDDENLY WIND WAS BLOWING RAPIDLY . IT WAS A STORM! I RAN TO THIS HOUSE WHICH IS STICKED TO THE PARK . I CLOSED THE DOOR AND WAITED UNTIL THE STORM BECOME COOL . DAYS PASSED LIKE THIS AND STILL THE STORM DIDN’T STOP !!!! I WAS VERY HUNGRY . AT THAT PERIOD , THIS HOUSE WAS QUIET DARK .AFTER A WEEK, THE STORM STOPPED!! I WENT TO MY PALACE . IT WAS QUIET DARK AND NOBODY WERE SEEN . I WAS SCARED . I KEPT EVERY FOOT WITH GREAT FEAR . SUDDENLY , SOMEBODY TIED MY EYES AND CLOSED MY MOUTH . I WAS KIDNAPPED!! I WAS UNCONSIOUS . WHEN I OPENED MY EYES , I WAS IN THIS HOUSE WHERE WE ARE TALKING NOW . THEY WERE THE ROBBERS . THEY THREATENED ME AND ASKED THE BOOK OF POWERS . BUT STILL I DIDN’T FOUND IT SO I SAID I DON’T HAVE . BUT THE ROBBERS DIDN’T BELIEVE ME .WITH SOME POWERS , THE GROUP OF ROBBERS MADE ME A MONSTER LIKE THIS !!! I WAS VERY ANGRY AND DECIDED NOT TO LOOK FOR THE BOOK. AS PER MY DECISION , I GAVE AWAY MY WEALTH TO THE POOR AND SHIFTED MY LIFE TO THIS HOUSE . I WAS ALSO SAD OF NOT OBEYING MY DAD . BUT I CANT FACE THE TOUGH ROBBERS . SO I MARRIED A NORMAL MAN AND GOT YOU AND YOUR SISTER . PREETI`S MOM ENDED . SHE EXCLAIMED : PREETI !! NOW U HAVE LISTENED MY PAST , ADVICE IT TO YOUR SISTER . PREETI RAN TO THE PARK AND PULLED MARY AND DRAGGED HER TO THE ROOM . PREETI KNEW THAT IF SHE ADVICE , MARY WONT LISTEN . SO SHE SHOWED THEIR MONSTROUS MOM AND MADE MARY TO BELIEVE . MOM WAS VERY HAPPY . SHE BECAME A NORMAL WOMAN NOW . WHEN MARY TORTURED HER MOM , SHE USED TO BECOME A MONSTER AND MAKE MARY TO FEAR !!!! THE FAMILY WAS FREE FROM THE RESPONSIBILITY AND LED A HAPPY LIFE!!!!! THE MONSTER MOM WAS THE HORRIBLE AS WELL AS SWEET MOM FOR PREETI AND MARY!!!!
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