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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 10/02/2016
Darkness Part 4
Born 2000, F, from Dallas,Texas, United StatesChapter 4...
"Um, helloo. Earth to Dawnnn." Carmen... Carmen.. "Mm, are you going to tell me or not?" Jordyn said. "Oh um yeah.." "Me and Carmen where best friends since Preschool we always played together, laughed together, basically did everything together. We never left each others side, she was like a sister to me. She had this really beautiful, long dark brown hair and these big brown hazel eyes. She was just so perfect to me.But then.." I say as a hot tear goes down my face. "Its okay Dawn, you can tell m-"Jordyn was soon cut off by the sounds of people blowing their cars horns at us. "HEY! F**K OFF WILL YA?!" "YOUR ASS CAN GO AROUND!" Jordyn shouted even though we were completely in the wrong she still acted like THEY did something wrong. "Sorry, Im listening." She said. "Whenever we got in High-school, about our Sophomore year she got really depressed after her dad died. She stopped eating like she was supposed to and...everything. So one day I thought that we could have this road trip ya know,just me and her.... But whenever we were almost at the hotel she started to get a fever and then she started throwing up, I just thought it was just a cold cause it was winter anyway. Then she had a seizure...I couldn't stop it.. Our phones were out of service and we were too far from a hospital.Then I remembered that if you cant treat a seizure immediately they would die...But before she died she whispered and said "Why did you let me die?".......
To Be Continued
Darkness Part 4(LexiTay)
Chapter 4...
"Um, helloo. Earth to Dawnnn." Carmen... Carmen.. "Mm, are you going to tell me or not?" Jordyn said. "Oh um yeah.." "Me and Carmen where best friends since Preschool we always played together, laughed together, basically did everything together. We never left each others side, she was like a sister to me. She had this really beautiful, long dark brown hair and these big brown hazel eyes. She was just so perfect to me.But then.." I say as a hot tear goes down my face. "Its okay Dawn, you can tell m-"Jordyn was soon cut off by the sounds of people blowing their cars horns at us. "HEY! F**K OFF WILL YA?!" "YOUR ASS CAN GO AROUND!" Jordyn shouted even though we were completely in the wrong she still acted like THEY did something wrong. "Sorry, Im listening." She said. "Whenever we got in High-school, about our Sophomore year she got really depressed after her dad died. She stopped eating like she was supposed to and...everything. So one day I thought that we could have this road trip ya know,just me and her.... But whenever we were almost at the hotel she started to get a fever and then she started throwing up, I just thought it was just a cold cause it was winter anyway. Then she had a seizure...I couldn't stop it.. Our phones were out of service and we were too far from a hospital.Then I remembered that if you cant treat a seizure immediately they would die...But before she died she whispered and said "Why did you let me die?".......
To Be Continued
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