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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 09/19/2016
Darkness Part 3
Born 2000, F, from Dallas,Texas, United StatesChapter 3...
I stare in shock as the darkness smiles at me. It had very sharp teeth and a ridiculously long tongue. It. Looked. Nasty. I couldn't take my eyes off of it. I wanted to but i just couldn't. "GO AWAY!" I yell knowing it wouldn't listen to me even if I screamed at the top of my lungs. The darkness stopped smiling and put its head down. "HEY, I know you here me talkin to you" I say while I tap on the window. "Daawwnn."I hear in a low raspy voice. "Who's there?" I say "Oh Dawn. How could you forget you old childhood friend" The voice sounds not raspy this time but sad like. As soon as she said that all I could think about is that one day. That one day that I tried so hard to forget. Then voices of her laughing started to play in my head "No..NO!" I yell holding my ears with both of my hands. "Come on now Dawn.You know you remember me. Dont deny it" The voice says. "You remember her hair" "stop..." "You remember style" "STop" "You even remember her smile" " I. Sid. STOP!" I yell. "Dawn!" I look to my side and see Jordyn, looking at me with worried eyes. "Are you okay? I saw that you looked like something was wrong an-." " DAWN yo-your.. cr-crying" I raise my hand to my warm soft check which was now wet from tears. "C-Carmen" I say. "Who;s Carmen?"
To Be Continued..
Darkness Part 3(LexiTay)
Chapter 3...
I stare in shock as the darkness smiles at me. It had very sharp teeth and a ridiculously long tongue. It. Looked. Nasty. I couldn't take my eyes off of it. I wanted to but i just couldn't. "GO AWAY!" I yell knowing it wouldn't listen to me even if I screamed at the top of my lungs. The darkness stopped smiling and put its head down. "HEY, I know you here me talkin to you" I say while I tap on the window. "Daawwnn."I hear in a low raspy voice. "Who's there?" I say "Oh Dawn. How could you forget you old childhood friend" The voice sounds not raspy this time but sad like. As soon as she said that all I could think about is that one day. That one day that I tried so hard to forget. Then voices of her laughing started to play in my head "No..NO!" I yell holding my ears with both of my hands. "Come on now Dawn.You know you remember me. Dont deny it" The voice says. "You remember her hair" "stop..." "You remember style" "STop" "You even remember her smile" " I. Sid. STOP!" I yell. "Dawn!" I look to my side and see Jordyn, looking at me with worried eyes. "Are you okay? I saw that you looked like something was wrong an-." " DAWN yo-your.. cr-crying" I raise my hand to my warm soft check which was now wet from tears. "C-Carmen" I say. "Who;s Carmen?"
To Be Continued..
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