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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Relationships
- Published: 01/18/2016
The Black Forest
Born 2002, F, from Brampton, CanadaI opened his room door and Zangen was missing. I went downstairs to see if he was there. He wasn't inside the house. The ice cream box was left out open. I put on my back coat to go look for him. As I stepped outside of the house I saw a note sticked onto the porch. "If you love me, you will follow me to where I am". I thought to myself. What is he thinking? Hes only 15 and hes outside wandering around in this pitch black. I locked the door and stepped out to look for him. I followed his tracks. It stopped midway into the deep forest. The silence scares me. The dark scares me, but right now my boyfriend needs me and I must find him. As walked through the wet muddy forest , I heard a noise coming from behind me. I turned around and fell backwards and landed into the mud. It was just a swarming pack of bats. God, that scared me. I got up again. My hair smelt like filth. Ughhh. Where did he go I wondered? I brushed my hair back and started to walk forward. I saw a glimpse of light coming from the cliff of the forest. I walked faster. There I saw him standing on cliff looking like hes trying to find his way back. "Zangen?" I called to him. He turned silently and forced a smile. He turned back and jumped off the cliff. "Zangen! No!". I quickly ran and got his leg as he was hanging downwards of the cliff. "Leave me vall!" He screeched as he said it. "Idk whats going on but stop this". I grabbed him with all my power and managed to bring him back. He sat there as he stared at me. "What are u doing!". "I-i-im sorry". Tears rolled down his cheeks. I sat beside him and hugged him.
"Pleaseeeee dont worry me like this" I said softly
He hugged me back and started to weep in tears. I didnt know wht to do. "My parents told me they wished I was dead". My eyes widened. "I thought that I wasnt needed anymore so I- "u dumb idiot!" I love you. Who cares what they say. I need you. I l forced myself out of the hug and brushed his hair gently. "Dont go thru this alone". Im here for u
The Black Forest(Artheey)
I opened his room door and Zangen was missing. I went downstairs to see if he was there. He wasn't inside the house. The ice cream box was left out open. I put on my back coat to go look for him. As I stepped outside of the house I saw a note sticked onto the porch. "If you love me, you will follow me to where I am". I thought to myself. What is he thinking? Hes only 15 and hes outside wandering around in this pitch black. I locked the door and stepped out to look for him. I followed his tracks. It stopped midway into the deep forest. The silence scares me. The dark scares me, but right now my boyfriend needs me and I must find him. As walked through the wet muddy forest , I heard a noise coming from behind me. I turned around and fell backwards and landed into the mud. It was just a swarming pack of bats. God, that scared me. I got up again. My hair smelt like filth. Ughhh. Where did he go I wondered? I brushed my hair back and started to walk forward. I saw a glimpse of light coming from the cliff of the forest. I walked faster. There I saw him standing on cliff looking like hes trying to find his way back. "Zangen?" I called to him. He turned silently and forced a smile. He turned back and jumped off the cliff. "Zangen! No!". I quickly ran and got his leg as he was hanging downwards of the cliff. "Leave me vall!" He screeched as he said it. "Idk whats going on but stop this". I grabbed him with all my power and managed to bring him back. He sat there as he stared at me. "What are u doing!". "I-i-im sorry". Tears rolled down his cheeks. I sat beside him and hugged him.
"Pleaseeeee dont worry me like this" I said softly
He hugged me back and started to weep in tears. I didnt know wht to do. "My parents told me they wished I was dead". My eyes widened. "I thought that I wasnt needed anymore so I- "u dumb idiot!" I love you. Who cares what they say. I need you. I l forced myself out of the hug and brushed his hair gently. "Dont go thru this alone". Im here for u
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