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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Drama
- Published: 12/16/2015
The days were cold
I can't believe it. How she felt that happy .Looking at the garden where she lived .The place I considered home for many years .
Rose used always to sit on that chair . Wearing her beautiful shawl on her shoulder . I alawys wanted to run and hug her . Living between the flowers was so lonely ,but I felt in love with her .
I was afraid that if she sees me she will run away because of how I looked before she turned me into a human that day.
Rose always waited for someone holding a picture between her hands . She sat facing the street . And every now and then she looked at the picture and again to the street . I could hear her heart beat every time she looked at the picture. I closed my eyes and imagined the picture depending on her heartbeats . So calm and pure yet it made me blush . I tried to imagin ,but my heart stopped . How a human felt . A human had lived , fell in love and got hurt . What had they kept in their unstopable beating hearts . All those feelings seemed forbidden to alonelh soul for a child . Left to die between flowers . That child died of cold .
She sat down and hold the picture tighter . At that moment she seemed like she is going to cry . I thought for a moment that I had a heart . Beated and stoped for a second for her . That made me remeber that first time I heard her name . She whisperd to the flowers < I was named Rose > her eyes fell with tears ,but her lips carried the most beautiful smile I will ever see .
Rose standed . Her hands were shivering . She looked at a man and then he just left . After a few years she came crying . At someow I lived inside her . And grew up to bacome her daughter . I think that's why I felt so warm and safe with her.
When she died she left a letter to me . It said < dear Rose . I wanted to tell you something along time ago about your name . I am not the one who gave you your name . It was my first love . He fell for my first and contiuoued to ask for my name . He told me that he will just calls me Rose because I like flowers . I was so happy that he named me by this beautiful name . I had a memory problems . It was so hard to remember things and I stated to forget things . I told him it was alright . It's true dear everything and the hardest were alright when he was there . He was the best I could have . And I felt haven with him . The sickness get worse and I couldn't remember most of the important things I shouldn't forget ,but his sound , how he looked and his name . I was them holding very hard . I musn't forget . Your dad offered to marry me . He was rich . So he can offers my treatment . Him . He knew that . He told me to marry that rich gentleman ,but I wanted to share everything with him even the last memory . I thought that he wouldn't leave me ,but he had only turned his back when I looked into his eyes . At that moment I knew for sure it was the end of a beautiful part of my life . I knew I looved him because of the thing I couldn't forget . I never wanted to forget that's why I named you Rose . Dear never forget it > .
I remembered everything . Even the coldness of the day he left.
The End thank you for reading
the days were cold(dania jamal)
The days were cold
I can't believe it. How she felt that happy .Looking at the garden where she lived .The place I considered home for many years .
Rose used always to sit on that chair . Wearing her beautiful shawl on her shoulder . I alawys wanted to run and hug her . Living between the flowers was so lonely ,but I felt in love with her .
I was afraid that if she sees me she will run away because of how I looked before she turned me into a human that day.
Rose always waited for someone holding a picture between her hands . She sat facing the street . And every now and then she looked at the picture and again to the street . I could hear her heart beat every time she looked at the picture. I closed my eyes and imagined the picture depending on her heartbeats . So calm and pure yet it made me blush . I tried to imagin ,but my heart stopped . How a human felt . A human had lived , fell in love and got hurt . What had they kept in their unstopable beating hearts . All those feelings seemed forbidden to alonelh soul for a child . Left to die between flowers . That child died of cold .
She sat down and hold the picture tighter . At that moment she seemed like she is going to cry . I thought for a moment that I had a heart . Beated and stoped for a second for her . That made me remeber that first time I heard her name . She whisperd to the flowers < I was named Rose > her eyes fell with tears ,but her lips carried the most beautiful smile I will ever see .
Rose standed . Her hands were shivering . She looked at a man and then he just left . After a few years she came crying . At someow I lived inside her . And grew up to bacome her daughter . I think that's why I felt so warm and safe with her.
When she died she left a letter to me . It said < dear Rose . I wanted to tell you something along time ago about your name . I am not the one who gave you your name . It was my first love . He fell for my first and contiuoued to ask for my name . He told me that he will just calls me Rose because I like flowers . I was so happy that he named me by this beautiful name . I had a memory problems . It was so hard to remember things and I stated to forget things . I told him it was alright . It's true dear everything and the hardest were alright when he was there . He was the best I could have . And I felt haven with him . The sickness get worse and I couldn't remember most of the important things I shouldn't forget ,but his sound , how he looked and his name . I was them holding very hard . I musn't forget . Your dad offered to marry me . He was rich . So he can offers my treatment . Him . He knew that . He told me to marry that rich gentleman ,but I wanted to share everything with him even the last memory . I thought that he wouldn't leave me ,but he had only turned his back when I looked into his eyes . At that moment I knew for sure it was the end of a beautiful part of my life . I knew I looved him because of the thing I couldn't forget . I never wanted to forget that's why I named you Rose . Dear never forget it > .
I remembered everything . Even the coldness of the day he left.
The End thank you for reading
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