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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 05/03/2015
the last minute
Born 1999, F, from Kolkata, IndiaTHE FRENETIC RAYS OF THE SUN SNEAKED IN THROUGH THE DEFORMED WINDOW.I WOKE UP IN AN DEVASTATING,FERVOR STATE.MY MIND WAS STILL IN HIS BIZARRE THOUGHTS,IT WAS STILL CRAVING FOR HIM TO COME BACK,IT WAS DESIRING FOR HIS SMILE,IT WAS...
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” EXCLAIMED MY MOTHER
“THANK YOU” I REPLIED
YES,IT WAS MY BIRTHDAY,IT WAS A DAY WHEN I SHOULD BE HAPPY,I SHOULD SMILE...IN A FEW WORDS,I SHOULD STOP THINKING ABOUT HIM,AND ENROBE MY FACE WITH GLITTERING SMILES.
SUDDENLY, MY CONSCIENCE RAISED ITS OPTIMISTIC FACE AND DECLARED,”IT’S A NEW DAY, A NEW BEGINNING FOR YOU, FORGET EVERYTHING, DIG THE PAST AND BURY THE SADNESS, FEEL ALIVE, FEEL FREE, AND DO NOT SULK...HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR!”
The phone beside me vibrated for the millionth time, I guess,”happy birthday!”..well that’s exactly what people said every time i raised the phone close to my ears.
There were around twenty-five calls and fifteen texts...but still there was a crave of disappointment when i didn't find “HIS” name on the list.
For the rest of the day, whenever the phone rang, an excited, omniscient soul urged herself to receive the call thinking it would be him,but it wasn't him. And then the unsatisfied,broken,melancholic soul returned back to the world where she used to show her fake, perverse smiles and demeanor.
“I HAVE EVERY REASON TO BE HAPPY,BUT WHY CAN’T I SMILE? I HAVE MY PARENTS WHO CARE FOR ME SO MUCH,I HAVE FRIENDS WHO CAN DO ANYTHING TO ENLIGHTEN MY MOOD.ALL OF MY CLOSE ACQUAINTANCES KNOW WHAT MAKES ME SMILE,BUT STILL THE UNFATHOMABLE SADNESS OF MY HEART DOES NOT DIMINISH ITSELF INTO NOTHING...WHY WHY WHY?”
HOWEVER,EVEN THESE THOUGHTS DIDN'T MAKE ME FORGET MY MELANCHOLIA.PERHAPS MY PESSIMISTIC SOUL RAISED ITS VILLAINY TOO HIGH WHICH COULD NOT BE RESIDED DOWN.
ALL DAY LONG,I THOUGHT ABOUT “HIM”...I WISHED THAT HE WOULD CALL ME AND TELL ME.”HAPPY BIRTHDAY”...BUT MY WISH REMAINED A WISH....YET MY “HOPE” STILL DID NOT RESIDE DOWN.
“A VERY TIRING DAY FOR YOU,LOTS OF FUN AND EXCITEMENT BUT ITS TIME TO SLEEP,SO GOODNIGHT.”MY MOTHER SAID
I JUST NODDED MY HEAD AND PRETENDED AS IF THE DAY HAD ENDED FOR ME...
IT WAS 11:00 PM,AN HOUR LEFT FOR MY BIRTHDAY TO END...
“CAN HE CALL ME NOW?”
MY CONSCIENCE SAID,”DON’T LOSE HOPE!”
MY FIEND REPLIED,”ARE YOU MAD? STOP THINKING ABOUT HIM AND SLEEP”
I THOUGHT THAT MY FIEND WAS RIGHT,BUT AT THE END I LISTENED TO MY CONSCIENCE...I WAITED WAITED AND WAITED.........
IT WAS 11:30 PM....
11:38 PM....
11:49 PM...
11:59 PM....A MINUTE LEFT...
“NO,HE WONT...I SHOULD SLEEP,MY HOPE DIED....”
SUDDENLY,MY PHONE VIBRATES,I PICK IT UP,AND A DELIGHTED SOUL FLICKS A SMILE IN MY FACE...IT WAS HIM,YES,HE DID CALL...
“HELLO”HE SAID
“...UM..HI!”
“WHEN DO WE HAVE CLASS TOMORROW?”
“10:00 AM”
“THANKS”
“YOU'RE WELCOME”
I HUNG MY PHONE,HE CALLS ME,YES HE DID,HE DIDN'T CALL ANY OF HIS FRIENDS,BUT ME...
I WAS AT THE TOP OF THE WORLD,EVERYTHING WAS SO BEAUTIFUL,EVERYTHING WAS SO SPLENDID AND LAVISHING.FINALLY,MY HOPE DID WIN,AND FINALLY THE DAY DID END.......
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY!’...I WISHED MY SELF FOR THE FIRST TIME AT THE LATE MINUTE....
it was 12:00 am and a new day..a new beginning!....
the last minute(srijeeta saha)
THE FRENETIC RAYS OF THE SUN SNEAKED IN THROUGH THE DEFORMED WINDOW.I WOKE UP IN AN DEVASTATING,FERVOR STATE.MY MIND WAS STILL IN HIS BIZARRE THOUGHTS,IT WAS STILL CRAVING FOR HIM TO COME BACK,IT WAS DESIRING FOR HIS SMILE,IT WAS...
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” EXCLAIMED MY MOTHER
“THANK YOU” I REPLIED
YES,IT WAS MY BIRTHDAY,IT WAS A DAY WHEN I SHOULD BE HAPPY,I SHOULD SMILE...IN A FEW WORDS,I SHOULD STOP THINKING ABOUT HIM,AND ENROBE MY FACE WITH GLITTERING SMILES.
SUDDENLY, MY CONSCIENCE RAISED ITS OPTIMISTIC FACE AND DECLARED,”IT’S A NEW DAY, A NEW BEGINNING FOR YOU, FORGET EVERYTHING, DIG THE PAST AND BURY THE SADNESS, FEEL ALIVE, FEEL FREE, AND DO NOT SULK...HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR!”
The phone beside me vibrated for the millionth time, I guess,”happy birthday!”..well that’s exactly what people said every time i raised the phone close to my ears.
There were around twenty-five calls and fifteen texts...but still there was a crave of disappointment when i didn't find “HIS” name on the list.
For the rest of the day, whenever the phone rang, an excited, omniscient soul urged herself to receive the call thinking it would be him,but it wasn't him. And then the unsatisfied,broken,melancholic soul returned back to the world where she used to show her fake, perverse smiles and demeanor.
“I HAVE EVERY REASON TO BE HAPPY,BUT WHY CAN’T I SMILE? I HAVE MY PARENTS WHO CARE FOR ME SO MUCH,I HAVE FRIENDS WHO CAN DO ANYTHING TO ENLIGHTEN MY MOOD.ALL OF MY CLOSE ACQUAINTANCES KNOW WHAT MAKES ME SMILE,BUT STILL THE UNFATHOMABLE SADNESS OF MY HEART DOES NOT DIMINISH ITSELF INTO NOTHING...WHY WHY WHY?”
HOWEVER,EVEN THESE THOUGHTS DIDN'T MAKE ME FORGET MY MELANCHOLIA.PERHAPS MY PESSIMISTIC SOUL RAISED ITS VILLAINY TOO HIGH WHICH COULD NOT BE RESIDED DOWN.
ALL DAY LONG,I THOUGHT ABOUT “HIM”...I WISHED THAT HE WOULD CALL ME AND TELL ME.”HAPPY BIRTHDAY”...BUT MY WISH REMAINED A WISH....YET MY “HOPE” STILL DID NOT RESIDE DOWN.
“A VERY TIRING DAY FOR YOU,LOTS OF FUN AND EXCITEMENT BUT ITS TIME TO SLEEP,SO GOODNIGHT.”MY MOTHER SAID
I JUST NODDED MY HEAD AND PRETENDED AS IF THE DAY HAD ENDED FOR ME...
IT WAS 11:00 PM,AN HOUR LEFT FOR MY BIRTHDAY TO END...
“CAN HE CALL ME NOW?”
MY CONSCIENCE SAID,”DON’T LOSE HOPE!”
MY FIEND REPLIED,”ARE YOU MAD? STOP THINKING ABOUT HIM AND SLEEP”
I THOUGHT THAT MY FIEND WAS RIGHT,BUT AT THE END I LISTENED TO MY CONSCIENCE...I WAITED WAITED AND WAITED.........
IT WAS 11:30 PM....
11:38 PM....
11:49 PM...
11:59 PM....A MINUTE LEFT...
“NO,HE WONT...I SHOULD SLEEP,MY HOPE DIED....”
SUDDENLY,MY PHONE VIBRATES,I PICK IT UP,AND A DELIGHTED SOUL FLICKS A SMILE IN MY FACE...IT WAS HIM,YES,HE DID CALL...
“HELLO”HE SAID
“...UM..HI!”
“WHEN DO WE HAVE CLASS TOMORROW?”
“10:00 AM”
“THANKS”
“YOU'RE WELCOME”
I HUNG MY PHONE,HE CALLS ME,YES HE DID,HE DIDN'T CALL ANY OF HIS FRIENDS,BUT ME...
I WAS AT THE TOP OF THE WORLD,EVERYTHING WAS SO BEAUTIFUL,EVERYTHING WAS SO SPLENDID AND LAVISHING.FINALLY,MY HOPE DID WIN,AND FINALLY THE DAY DID END.......
“HAPPY BIRTHDAY!’...I WISHED MY SELF FOR THE FIRST TIME AT THE LATE MINUTE....
it was 12:00 am and a new day..a new beginning!....
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