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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Mystery
- Published: 04/09/2014
The Mystery
Born 1989, F, from Lagos/Lagos, NigeriaRina walked into the room. The doctor was there with the edisons ghost detector machine.
"So you are ready to talk to him!?"
Just then her son and two neices walked in.
"You should get a reply now..."
"I talk to my husband everyday."
"She is insane!" Her son yelled.
"Is he silent?"
"Yes, he says nothing, this is about the tenth time I am coming here."
"Where did you bury him?" The doctor asked.
"In water. I was hoping if by a miracle he came back to life, I should give him a chance. Far away underwater maybe in the earth's cores."
"Great, so he might be alive then because there are these unitelligible sounds we hear, they are strange and meaningless.
"Might not be, get him to talk, use a good computer."
"Of course I did. He is not going to say anything we can understand."
"Good that means he is sleeping."
"Could be angry mumblings from you disturbing."
"Why would he be sleeping?" His son asked disgusted. "This are the sounds we kept hearing when we spoke for a reply, it was so infuritating, we kept hearing the same sounds."
"I wish he could say something, I am desperate for a good reply, a lot depends on it!"
"Yes you have to explain a lot!"
"Like what, did I swallow him up? Enough of your evil nature! You have grown sharp fangs to display to people, you were once a little boy, with no teeth, a little baby. Keep it down and have respect for me." She straightened up. "He died of a cold."
"Viruses?"
"Not that kind. Inability to keep warm."
He yelled back angrily. "Well it's fifteen years now, so what do you think, shouldn't you have buried him or cremated him?"
"The mystery is solved, he is in a coma, not sleeping as in normal sleep boy!"
"That must be awful"
"Not half as awful as life has become for me living with the rest of you who have no soul!"
The Mystery(Judy)
Rina walked into the room. The doctor was there with the edisons ghost detector machine.
"So you are ready to talk to him!?"
Just then her son and two neices walked in.
"You should get a reply now..."
"I talk to my husband everyday."
"She is insane!" Her son yelled.
"Is he silent?"
"Yes, he says nothing, this is about the tenth time I am coming here."
"Where did you bury him?" The doctor asked.
"In water. I was hoping if by a miracle he came back to life, I should give him a chance. Far away underwater maybe in the earth's cores."
"Great, so he might be alive then because there are these unitelligible sounds we hear, they are strange and meaningless.
"Might not be, get him to talk, use a good computer."
"Of course I did. He is not going to say anything we can understand."
"Good that means he is sleeping."
"Could be angry mumblings from you disturbing."
"Why would he be sleeping?" His son asked disgusted. "This are the sounds we kept hearing when we spoke for a reply, it was so infuritating, we kept hearing the same sounds."
"I wish he could say something, I am desperate for a good reply, a lot depends on it!"
"Yes you have to explain a lot!"
"Like what, did I swallow him up? Enough of your evil nature! You have grown sharp fangs to display to people, you were once a little boy, with no teeth, a little baby. Keep it down and have respect for me." She straightened up. "He died of a cold."
"Viruses?"
"Not that kind. Inability to keep warm."
He yelled back angrily. "Well it's fifteen years now, so what do you think, shouldn't you have buried him or cremated him?"
"The mystery is solved, he is in a coma, not sleeping as in normal sleep boy!"
"That must be awful"
"Not half as awful as life has become for me living with the rest of you who have no soul!"
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