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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 07/09/2024
The Tangles within
Born 1989, F, from Patiala, India![The Tangles within](/storage/story/A4399F47-10AE-DD95-B2DE-CCCCA5FE16AA_1720510333-image(285x285-crop).jpeg)
Do I overthink, ponder so deep?
Upset by minutiae, they declare
Thoughts are swift, want to sleep
Drama Queen, they mock me, unaware
Restless nights, haven't slept a wink
Overacting they say, to petty things
"Act your age" pretending a teen they think,
Trying to be mature, eating binge
I give abundantly, expecting the same,
Lost in the tangles, they opine
A small girl , acting lame
Fragile and sensitive, they define.
The lady so grave, was full of life, once
I don’t deserve these people's objections
How much love do I need? One ounce
What my soul deprive, is His connections
The Tangles within(DivyaAttri)
Do I overthink, ponder so deep?
Upset by minutiae, they declare
Thoughts are swift, want to sleep
Drama Queen, they mock me, unaware
Restless nights, haven't slept a wink
Overacting they say, to petty things
"Act your age" pretending a teen they think,
Trying to be mature, eating binge
I give abundantly, expecting the same,
Lost in the tangles, they opine
A small girl , acting lame
Fragile and sensitive, they define.
The lady so grave, was full of life, once
I don’t deserve these people's objections
How much love do I need? One ounce
What my soul deprive, is His connections
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Joel Kiula
07/09/2024Amazinga poem, being able to write one's thoughts in moments of reflections ia a gift.Well done.
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DivyaAttri
07/09/2024Thank you.This poem is dedicated to every sensitive and overthinker woman who is always blamed for her emotional reaction.
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