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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 05/14/2024
![The Intercom!](/storage/story/78D95901-0C6E-49BD-FBC4-D2A19304E453_1715698545-image(368x285-crop).jpeg)
The Intercorn.
Hello everyone! Im Liam, This is my first book ever, so I hope you enjoy it, if you like it dont forget to give me a star, and please write down some feedback!! Thank you so much and have a nice time reading this!:
Scarlett, a resident at the law university In California had just arrived at the house.
She needed a part job to gain money, as she had to pay the university. So there she was, she had decided to be a babysitter for that Saturday, nothing wrong can happen, she told herself.
She was in charge of taking care of two kids, Leon, who was 6 years old and Emily, who was 10. Their parents had to go to an urgent work trip to Germany. She quietly opened the door to the inside of the house, The kids were nearby the living room.
“Hello kids, Im Scar” She said kindly with a grand smile.
“ Hey Scar!”…
And so the night kept going, they ate cookies, played games and laughed until it was 9pm, the kids bedtime.
“Good night Scar” Leon said
“Bye kids, if you need something call me by the intercon” she said as closing the door, walking downstair.
“Where is the room?”…
*She saw a little house, outside the mansion, you could get there crossing a path behind the cristal doors on the kitchen. Oh right, its there, creepy…
She went outside, entered the house (that was a basement), and went downstairs to faceCall her bestfriends. The time went by, until it was late 3am in the morning.
“So, Carl how is your mother lately?”
“Idk Scar, she is still in the hospital, I’ve been busy all week along..”
“huh? Wait a second Carl,”
The Intercon was ringing, she climbed the ladder stair to pick it up.
“Scar, I heard something in the kitchen.” Leon said, frightened.
“ Oh, don’t worry Leon, I closed the door with a safe key, just get back to bed and don’t worry darling”
“Mhm” He hang up the intercom and went back to their room.
Scarlett went to the basement, and continued the FaceCall.
“So, as we were saying…” “ring ring… ring ring…”
Oh my, whats up now.
“She picks up the intercorn again”
“Yes, Leon? Don’t be scared, there isn’t anyone home.”
Scarlett didn’t expect this, instead of hearing Leon responde, she heard a hard, hard breathing.
“Hello?” The breath came harder.
Then, she looked at the window outside and saw in one of the windows of the mansion the shadow of a big, tall man holding a knife.
“AAAHHH!!!” She screamed loudly
“ Listen, whoever it is on the other side of the intercon, Im going to call the police right now!”
The intercon hang up and suddenly, through the curtain, Scarlett could see that the man from the window was now outside the house, still a shadow. So she tried to go downstair using the ladder stair, the man managed to break the window and get inside, he was about to jump and stab Scarlett to death..
“WAAAHH..” Scarlett yelled.
As it seems she had fallen asleep while face calling Carl. It was now 4am in the morning, she went upstairs and saw everything was right. Everything except the window, it was broken, so she siently went to check if there was anything behind the window, she sighed, everything was allright. But then someone drawned her with some earphones. So sad for her.
“Woah, that ending was crazy”
“She should have called the police the instant she saw the window broken”
“Yeah, well lets just go to sleep Maria”
“Have you checked on the kids?”
“No, but they are asleep for sure.”
Ding dong… ding dong…
“ Oop the intercon is ringing. Lemme check”
Hello kids?
And a hard breathing started again.
THE END.
The Intercom!(HuTao)
The Intercorn.
Hello everyone! Im Liam, This is my first book ever, so I hope you enjoy it, if you like it dont forget to give me a star, and please write down some feedback!! Thank you so much and have a nice time reading this!:
Scarlett, a resident at the law university In California had just arrived at the house.
She needed a part job to gain money, as she had to pay the university. So there she was, she had decided to be a babysitter for that Saturday, nothing wrong can happen, she told herself.
She was in charge of taking care of two kids, Leon, who was 6 years old and Emily, who was 10. Their parents had to go to an urgent work trip to Germany. She quietly opened the door to the inside of the house, The kids were nearby the living room.
“Hello kids, Im Scar” She said kindly with a grand smile.
“ Hey Scar!”…
And so the night kept going, they ate cookies, played games and laughed until it was 9pm, the kids bedtime.
“Good night Scar” Leon said
“Bye kids, if you need something call me by the intercon” she said as closing the door, walking downstair.
“Where is the room?”…
*She saw a little house, outside the mansion, you could get there crossing a path behind the cristal doors on the kitchen. Oh right, its there, creepy…
She went outside, entered the house (that was a basement), and went downstairs to faceCall her bestfriends. The time went by, until it was late 3am in the morning.
“So, Carl how is your mother lately?”
“Idk Scar, she is still in the hospital, I’ve been busy all week along..”
“huh? Wait a second Carl,”
The Intercon was ringing, she climbed the ladder stair to pick it up.
“Scar, I heard something in the kitchen.” Leon said, frightened.
“ Oh, don’t worry Leon, I closed the door with a safe key, just get back to bed and don’t worry darling”
“Mhm” He hang up the intercom and went back to their room.
Scarlett went to the basement, and continued the FaceCall.
“So, as we were saying…” “ring ring… ring ring…”
Oh my, whats up now.
“She picks up the intercorn again”
“Yes, Leon? Don’t be scared, there isn’t anyone home.”
Scarlett didn’t expect this, instead of hearing Leon responde, she heard a hard, hard breathing.
“Hello?” The breath came harder.
Then, she looked at the window outside and saw in one of the windows of the mansion the shadow of a big, tall man holding a knife.
“AAAHHH!!!” She screamed loudly
“ Listen, whoever it is on the other side of the intercon, Im going to call the police right now!”
The intercon hang up and suddenly, through the curtain, Scarlett could see that the man from the window was now outside the house, still a shadow. So she tried to go downstair using the ladder stair, the man managed to break the window and get inside, he was about to jump and stab Scarlett to death..
“WAAAHH..” Scarlett yelled.
As it seems she had fallen asleep while face calling Carl. It was now 4am in the morning, she went upstairs and saw everything was right. Everything except the window, it was broken, so she siently went to check if there was anything behind the window, she sighed, everything was allright. But then someone drawned her with some earphones. So sad for her.
“Woah, that ending was crazy”
“She should have called the police the instant she saw the window broken”
“Yeah, well lets just go to sleep Maria”
“Have you checked on the kids?”
“No, but they are asleep for sure.”
Ding dong… ding dong…
“ Oop the intercon is ringing. Lemme check”
Hello kids?
And a hard breathing started again.
THE END.
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