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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Family
- Published: 05/06/2024
Narrative Writing
Born 2014, M, from Lahore, PakistanMy father and mother were getting ready for their flight to Dubai on Wednesday morning. My siblings were going to my mother's mom's house. After some time my cousins were here. So first we watch some TV. After that, my maternal aunt gave us each 100 rs, so we went to the nearest shop. I bought a Coca-Cola and my favorite chocolate beans and my cousin bought candies, chocolates and lays. Then we went back home. What we, ate was junk food. Then we saw a big mouse. It was stuck under a bunch of wood. First, we hit sticks but then we started taking off the woods one by one, from the last one the mouse came out it started running here and there I tried to kill him with a wiper but he ran past me. My other cousin ran into the house and my other cousin killed it we were so happy that we tuned in to the song and started dancing. It was fun. When they went back to their house, we watched some cartoons. After an hour we went to buy a sharma. It was delicious. I enjoyed it a lot. After some time I went to sleep.
It was morning I was getting ready for the office. When I was ready I ate my breakfast and went to the office. There I worked hard. At 6:30 pm I came back home so first, I watched some TV. I finished my movie and then I ate some fruit. I was getting bored so I went to sleep.
The same was going on for two days I had fun with my friends and cousins but I still missed them a lot. When they came back I was really happy I could not wait to see them when I met them I hugged them tight. I was over the moon.
This was the worst weekend of my life.
Narrative Writing(Muhammad Musa)
My father and mother were getting ready for their flight to Dubai on Wednesday morning. My siblings were going to my mother's mom's house. After some time my cousins were here. So first we watch some TV. After that, my maternal aunt gave us each 100 rs, so we went to the nearest shop. I bought a Coca-Cola and my favorite chocolate beans and my cousin bought candies, chocolates and lays. Then we went back home. What we, ate was junk food. Then we saw a big mouse. It was stuck under a bunch of wood. First, we hit sticks but then we started taking off the woods one by one, from the last one the mouse came out it started running here and there I tried to kill him with a wiper but he ran past me. My other cousin ran into the house and my other cousin killed it we were so happy that we tuned in to the song and started dancing. It was fun. When they went back to their house, we watched some cartoons. After an hour we went to buy a sharma. It was delicious. I enjoyed it a lot. After some time I went to sleep.
It was morning I was getting ready for the office. When I was ready I ate my breakfast and went to the office. There I worked hard. At 6:30 pm I came back home so first, I watched some TV. I finished my movie and then I ate some fruit. I was getting bored so I went to sleep.
The same was going on for two days I had fun with my friends and cousins but I still missed them a lot. When they came back I was really happy I could not wait to see them when I met them I hugged them tight. I was over the moon.
This was the worst weekend of my life.
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Joel Kiula
05/07/2024This is wonderful. Always cherish the moments you share with your parents.
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