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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 05/05/2024
The Visit
Born 1972, F, from Ontario, Canada![The Visit](/storage/story/AAD2E21B-7DCE-6ED0-4A8A-4C8DFE6A5BB4_1714944416-image(412x285-crop).jpeg)
The Visit
The blue - green hues play gently
against the absence of fair springtime skies,
While the cardinal arrives and sings its melodic songs as he softly sits
on the brawny limb of the pink blossoming crab apple tree.
Your welcome presence, however fleeting, breathes only
a harmonious tranquility completing my souls longing.
A celebration of reflective thoughts fills every space
as our acquainting spirits intertwine.
The brilliance of your luminous light conquers my very being
as my heart feels the ubiquity of your ephemeral visit.
I have seen you in my dreams and listened intently as the sweet serenity
of your voice appears with calming words.
And, then, with a wink and a smile,
your wings peacefully carry you away to the white cotton sky
and leaves me in blessed contentment.
Until we meet again.
CNK
The Visit(Connie Nye-Kaley)
The Visit
The blue - green hues play gently
against the absence of fair springtime skies,
While the cardinal arrives and sings its melodic songs as he softly sits
on the brawny limb of the pink blossoming crab apple tree.
Your welcome presence, however fleeting, breathes only
a harmonious tranquility completing my souls longing.
A celebration of reflective thoughts fills every space
as our acquainting spirits intertwine.
The brilliance of your luminous light conquers my very being
as my heart feels the ubiquity of your ephemeral visit.
I have seen you in my dreams and listened intently as the sweet serenity
of your voice appears with calming words.
And, then, with a wink and a smile,
your wings peacefully carry you away to the white cotton sky
and leaves me in blessed contentment.
Until we meet again.
CNK
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Lillian Kazmierczak
05/13/2024Connie, a beautiful poem. I love your choice of words that don't get used much anymore. It only made the poem more unique! A melodic short story star of the day!
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Joel Kiula
05/13/2024A very good story. I hope someday i can be able to pour my thoughts into written words so that people can learn.
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Shirley Smothers
05/13/2024Beautuful! Mature Cardinals are so lovely. Enjoyed reading this. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Connie Nye-Kaley
05/13/2024Thank you! I also love how they can represent loved ones who have passed on.
Cheers,
Connie
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Cheryl Ryan
05/13/2024The visit story is so relatable with unfiltered honesty blurts. I wish I could also write about my encounter with all the wonderful visits of nature singing birds.
Thank you for sharing!
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Connie Nye-Kaley
05/13/2024Love how the red cardinal also represents loved ones who have passed on.
Cheers,
Connie
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