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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Family
- Published: 03/25/2024
Descriptive Writing
Born 2014, M, from Lahore, PakistanTwo years ago, I went to Swat Kalam. On my way the view was stunning. Where ever I go, I saw trees ,mountain's, sheep's. It was my dream to see a water-fall and in the way we say a ravishing water-fall when I saw it I shouted and said there is a water-fall please stop there Dad. So my dad stopped the car and it was extraordinary. After that on my way I saw 3 to 4 minuscule villages across the river. When went little bit close towards the river, I noticed that the color of the water is light green. I almost started crying because it was gorgeous. When we went to our hotel the view from my room was dazzling. I want to stay their rest of my life but I have only 4 days left.
Descriptive Writing(Muhammad Musa) Two years ago, I went to Swat Kalam. On my way the view was stunning. Where ever I go, I saw trees ,mountain's, sheep's. It was my dream to see a water-fall and in the way we say a ravishing water-fall when I saw it I shouted and said there is a water-fall please stop there Dad. So my dad stopped the car and it was extraordinary. After that on my way I saw 3 to 4 minuscule villages across the river. When went little bit close towards the river, I noticed that the color of the water is light green. I almost started crying because it was gorgeous. When we went to our hotel the view from my room was dazzling. I want to stay their rest of my life but I have only 4 days left.
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Joel Kiula
03/31/2024Great to see you had such an amazing experience. Some places stays in our hearts forever.
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