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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 12/15/2023
How the world has changed
Born 2008, M, from Wentzville, United StatesThis is planet zanus for decades the leaders forcing the humanes to fight each other killing millions of lives and destroying the landscape to almost unusable. Know only the strong survive using their magic to start bringing the planet back to life. This war of destruction all happened because of one greedy leader so this leader. In this world the stronger the magic the more respect you have and you also have more benefits than others of lower magic. So this leader when he was young his family was a poor family with very weak magic livin on a farm on the hill side. As his 12th birthday was approaching he would pray everyday to the gods under this oak tree, the wind whipping his hair around as he prays to be blessed with strong magic to help his family out of poverty. Then the day hits ts his 12 june 12 2037 he hit 12 years old in the morning he wakes up and there is a massive bubble of clouds around him swirling around then a loud click noise is heard throught out the house. He realized that he can feel the magic running through his veins so deep down inside he knows what he must do to change this country. When his parents found out about his magic level they were ecstatic dreaming of how their lives would be changed forever little did they know what was to come from it. After years and years of waiting the time finally came when he turned 21 and could take rule over the kingdom. After spending the last 10 years training his magic it was time for him to rule. On that day there was a big ceremony taking place. The day started with a party then partaking in the transfer of control of the kingdom. After all this time the spell was casted giving this Jacob the 3rd control over the kingdom. After he had control of the kingdom everything was fine for a few months till the power got to Jacob the 3rd and he decided to start his rampage of destruction. So it's October 9 2046 when Jacob the 3rd starts his rampage he starts by forming his army to take out the other kingdom, After weeks and weeks of gathering supplies making tactics and getting everything ready they start their journey of world domination. So the planet zanus before the war was a thriving planet filled with luscious fields and plenty of magic in the air but that all changed in october. When jacob started the marge they started destroying everything in their path on the way to the rival kingdoms ruled by Amara the two sides met in the middle of the field and the first spell was casted. After days of going back and forth losing ground then gaining it back Jacob the 3rd realized this was gonna be a long deadly war. It's Now 2052 feb 3 and both sides have lost millions of their people nearly all of their magic power were gone, only very few still remained across the planet. But finally Amara Surrendered to jacob the 3rd releasing there was really nothing left to fight for anymore. After amara surender jacob the 3rd realized what he had done to the planet in every direction you looked; you just saw destruction for miles. He thinks back to why he started this war and how is he gonna revive this planet from what he has done to it.Then he realized there really isn't anyone powerful enough to fix the mess he had caused, So he went back to his destroyed home and cried for days before realizing he ruined the planet and everyone living on it so he decided to end it all by using all of his power to blow up the planet and just like that the planet had disappeared from the universe.
How the world has changed(Lucas tudor) This is planet zanus for decades the leaders forcing the humanes to fight each other killing millions of lives and destroying the landscape to almost unusable. Know only the strong survive using their magic to start bringing the planet back to life. This war of destruction all happened because of one greedy leader so this leader. In this world the stronger the magic the more respect you have and you also have more benefits than others of lower magic. So this leader when he was young his family was a poor family with very weak magic livin on a farm on the hill side. As his 12th birthday was approaching he would pray everyday to the gods under this oak tree, the wind whipping his hair around as he prays to be blessed with strong magic to help his family out of poverty. Then the day hits ts his 12 june 12 2037 he hit 12 years old in the morning he wakes up and there is a massive bubble of clouds around him swirling around then a loud click noise is heard throught out the house. He realized that he can feel the magic running through his veins so deep down inside he knows what he must do to change this country. When his parents found out about his magic level they were ecstatic dreaming of how their lives would be changed forever little did they know what was to come from it. After years and years of waiting the time finally came when he turned 21 and could take rule over the kingdom. After spending the last 10 years training his magic it was time for him to rule. On that day there was a big ceremony taking place. The day started with a party then partaking in the transfer of control of the kingdom. After all this time the spell was casted giving this Jacob the 3rd control over the kingdom. After he had control of the kingdom everything was fine for a few months till the power got to Jacob the 3rd and he decided to start his rampage of destruction. So it's October 9 2046 when Jacob the 3rd starts his rampage he starts by forming his army to take out the other kingdom, After weeks and weeks of gathering supplies making tactics and getting everything ready they start their journey of world domination. So the planet zanus before the war was a thriving planet filled with luscious fields and plenty of magic in the air but that all changed in october. When jacob started the marge they started destroying everything in their path on the way to the rival kingdoms ruled by Amara the two sides met in the middle of the field and the first spell was casted. After days of going back and forth losing ground then gaining it back Jacob the 3rd realized this was gonna be a long deadly war. It's Now 2052 feb 3 and both sides have lost millions of their people nearly all of their magic power were gone, only very few still remained across the planet. But finally Amara Surrendered to jacob the 3rd releasing there was really nothing left to fight for anymore. After amara surender jacob the 3rd realized what he had done to the planet in every direction you looked; you just saw destruction for miles. He thinks back to why he started this war and how is he gonna revive this planet from what he has done to it.Then he realized there really isn't anyone powerful enough to fix the mess he had caused, So he went back to his destroyed home and cried for days before realizing he ruined the planet and everyone living on it so he decided to end it all by using all of his power to blow up the planet and just like that the planet had disappeared from the universe.
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Saraha Niles
12/15/2023The story itself is great. You have to take time to edit your story. Make sure there are no run on sentences, check spelling, and approppriate punctuation. Then your story will be easier to read and follow
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