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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 10/22/2023
Autumn Breezes Blow
Born 1957, F, from Mesick Michigan, United StatesFrail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Brisk winds tossing them to a new height
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
Colors so radiant they cast a flaming glow
Swirling, twirling, mesmerizing our sight
Frail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Fallen leaves are lifted when the wild winds blow
Sending arrays of colors deep into flight
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
Silent breathes of wind nudge leaves so slow
Dreamy like feathers so pure and light
Frail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Currents of air transfer leaves to and fro
Winds blow gently into the night
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
Leaves dance 'round while bounding high and low
Parading in rhythm to all a delight
Frail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
Autumn Breezes Blow(Shelly Garrod)
Frail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Brisk winds tossing them to a new height
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
Colors so radiant they cast a flaming glow
Swirling, twirling, mesmerizing our sight
Frail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Fallen leaves are lifted when the wild winds blow
Sending arrays of colors deep into flight
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
Silent breathes of wind nudge leaves so slow
Dreamy like feathers so pure and light
Frail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Currents of air transfer leaves to and fro
Winds blow gently into the night
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
Leaves dance 'round while bounding high and low
Parading in rhythm to all a delight
Frail and fluttering leaves ride on breezes that flow
Like casting characters in a magnificent show
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Amy Haggerty
12/09/2023Well written I felt like I was autumn again. It was nicely done!
P.S. I just posted another story.
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Shelly Garrod
12/09/2023Thanks Amy. Glad you enjoyed the poem. I look forward to reading your new story.
Blessings Shelly
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Shelly Garrod
10/25/2023Thanks Logan for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Much appreciated.
Blessings Shelly
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Shelly Garrod
10/24/2023Thank you for your kind comments, Aleena, and taking the time to read my poem. Much appreciated.
Blessings Shelly
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Mike
10/23/2023Didn't know such a simple process of leaves falling off can inspire a poem. Nice poem.
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Shelly Garrod
10/23/2023Thank you Mike for taking the time to read my story and leave a comment. Much appreciated.
Blessings, Shelly
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Kimberly Barnhart
10/23/2023I love your imaginative, very descriptive writing of falling leaves with your description of casting characters and frail and fluttering leaves on breezes that flow. Very unique!
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Shelly Garrod
10/23/2023Thanks Kim. Your positive feedback is much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed
Blessings, Shelly
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