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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 03/09/2023
LivelyHood
Born 2011, F, from Rajasthan, Udaipur, IndiaLively Hood
CHAPTER 1
New Times
It was a normal day for the people of Panama in Latin America, people were busy with their own work. But a girl named Aura was happy in her own world.
She was a gray eyed girl with white skin, and a mind of great knowledge. Curly hair that fell on her beautiful shoulders that were burdened with a sick mother and a drunkard father’s worries. Still she was happy with what she had.
While a young gentleman of twenty was to be going to London for higher studies. His name was Lucian.
He was a tall lad. Never had he seen poverty in his entire life. He was the son of the owner of the United Local Dairy, it was an important part of the whole town. He was very rich but very kind hearted.
“I hope I could see father” sighed Lucian one hot afternoon, while getting ready for going to visit the nearby dairy. While he was waking on the narrow road. Suddenly he banged into a girl carrying a basket of dry grass to feed the cows in the farm.
“Oh! I beg your pardon!” said Lucian picking up the grass on the road that had fallen. “It’s ok. I am so so sorry for banging in you. I am very sorry” said Aura hastily picking up the grass. “Please take care of yourself miss!” said Lucian. “I will” said Aura.
On her way she said to herself, ‘How clumsy I am. I made the son of Mr. Grant Willow Roberts pick up the grasses’
When she reached home, that poor little girl saw that all her newly planted crops of rice had dried. She hastily picked up the hose to try and rescue all the hard work she had done to plant those. But it all had been vain for it already was too late.
While, at home Lucian was buried deep in the thoughts of the girl he banged into on his way to the dairy. He thought to himself, ‘That girl was MAGIC. How beautiful was her eyes, like a fairy in the fairy land’.
“In whose thoughts do you seem engaged?” said his mother. “Nothing mother” sighed Lucian. “Isn’t it a girl? It is written on your face. And do NOT dare to lie!” exclaimed his mother. “Not at all mother!” said Lucian trying to hide his blushed up cheeks.
“Come on!! Spit it out!” said his mother. “Well, you already know it” blushed Lucian. “Come on tell how you met her” said his excited mother. “I will tell you everything but only if you give me the pancakes you used to make before!” said Lucian.
“DEAL!!!” said his mother. Then he stated explaining everything in detail.
Chapter 2
Betrayed or Not?
Not knowing what the other person was thinking she went to his house or you can call ‘Palace’ to apologize. When she got of the carriage and saw Lucian gardening. She thought of him to be the gardener.
“Mister, do you know where Mr. Grant Willow Robert’s son is?” said Aura. “He is… It’s me” said Lucian while he recognized Aura.
While he was talking to her, he felt, he was flying in the sky. Everything seemed black only THAT girl was colorful.
“Oh! I beg your pardon!” said Aura bowing down to apologies. “No need for that I am happy you are here!” said Lucian. “What do you mean!” said Aura. “I am so sorry, I didn’t mean it at all. By the way, could you tell your name” said Lucian. “Oh! It’s ok, my name is Aura” said Aura. With a blush on his face Lucian said “What a beautiful name! Aura… I… Could we talk for now?”. “Sure…” said Aura recognizing the meaning but she kept it in her heart and not let it burst out.
Then the two kept chit-chatting for a quiet of long time. Aura knew that Mr. Grant won’t let her and Lucian keep a relationship between them. Not even friendship. They were very rich and would get their son married to a princess or a very rich family’s girl. Not to some roadside girl who struggles to survive and doesn’t even have a proper house to live in. In those times, most of the rich families used to take a lot, a LOT of dowry. While she didn’t even have enough money to even buy groceries. They had to farm rice to even have food. And also they were in huge debts. How could they even think about their daughter’s marriage? They even forgot that they had to get their daughter married.
His mother kept looking at them chit-chatting and giggled and went to do her work.
It already had been a lot of days but Lucian, kept thinking about their meeting and sat on the easy chair. He only had a fortnight to stay in Panama, after it he had to leave for London.
He sent her a letter to her to inform her about his departure. In the letter it was written:
Dear Aura,
I have sent this letter to inform you about my departure to London. I have got only a fortnight in Panama. If… If we could meet… I will wait for you in the Dumpy Woods.
Yours Sincerely
Lucian
Aura was shocked when she saw this letter she could not believe her eyes. She went to his house and hugged him as she saw him and said Aura with tears in her eyes “I won’t be able to live without you, I am in love with you, please don’t leave now, not now!!” “I will have to go now… I hate to say goodbye! I will miss you a lot, I too had the same feelings!” said Lucian.
“Why didn’t you propose me before when you had the same feelings!!” cried Aura. “I was not sure if you liked me!” said Lucian. While Aura didn’t know all that he said was the truth or not.
Chapter 3
Long Time
It had been a long time since Lucian had left, while he was busy in studies, Aura was still thinking about him, about their time together and missed him terribly and cried that if he was with her. But her ‘Detective Spirit’ had not vanished, and she went to his friend’s house, and asked what he said to him about her. He was totally shocked and could not understand when it happened. Did he not tell it to him about them? Was he betrayed by his own friend? Maybe.
But Aura forgot everything and soon came to know that Lucian was coming in the next week. She was so happy and made some Cocadas Blancas and went to his house to give it to him. He said “It has been a long time” “Yes, it has” “I missed you terribly” “Me too! I am so happy you are here” “Me too!” “I… Love… You” “I… Love you… Too!”
And they came close and kissed each other. Aww how cute! [TILL NOW] But she did not know what he was about to do.
Suddenly he fell on the floor and his mother saw it and some foam came out of his mouth. “Someone call a doctor!! Hurry up!!!!” cried Aura. Now what would happen to this beautiful love story? Well the doctor said that he was food poisoned and asked him if he had any food 4 hours back, and he said “I… went… to nowhere,… but… Aura fed me some Cocadas Blancas…” said Lucian in his trembling voice. Isn’t it shocking he lied she didn’t feed him any Cocadas Blancas. It was unfair and now what happened was terrible with that poor girl.
Chapter 4
Revenge
Soon, when Aura came to her house all stressed, she saw blood drops on the floor and called “Mother! What happ” – and saw that horrifying scene of her mother and father dead on the floor!!!
“Mother!!!” Aura said and started crying. She understood it was all Mr. Grant’s doing. A rule was made in Panama that whoever had a daughter, after her parents died, the village chief would take it, and the village chief was Mr. Grant. Unfair right?
“I… Shall get revenge… I shall, he… he shall say sorry and will lose, he tries to get!” said Aura and wiped her tears. She was so angry that she went to his house in the night and went into Mr. Grant’s room and as soon as he saw her he said “What are you doing here? You witch!!” said Mr. Grant. “Mr. Grant you don’t understand your son just wants your property, I think you should come with me. Please believe me!!! I insist!!” exclaimed Aura. “My son could never” – and as he turned his head he saw his son with a knife and Lucian said “Ha-ha! Even you are waiting to die from my hands, but I won’t kill you because, otherwise you will kill me right? Ha-ha!” and the knife swiftly came out of Mr. Grant’s neck. “Now it’” – and as he turned to try and kill Aura he saw that Aura was not there and said “That Witch!!” with anger. Now everything will be Lucian’s, anyone who came in his way was killed. In the same way he killed his friend and all his caretakers and his own mother who loved him more than his father who came to know about this work of him.
“I have to do something, I can’t Lucian kill anybody else!!” said Aura the next day she went to his house in the night and came near his bed. She had a cloth that had chlorine and soon he fainted, she took him and tied him with rope.
“Huh! Where am I?” said Lucian, “In the house you wanted” said a voice, “Oh! Aura! Ha-ha, would you really kill me Huh!! Would you commit such a messy crime?” said Lucian. “I would, I saw how you killed your father, your mother. They loved you more than they loved each other! Why did you do this?” said Aura. “I had to because… she came to know about it. What would you do if you were in my place?” said Lucian, “I wouldn’t have ever committed such a crime in the first place!!” said Aura. “I had to, wou”- “No, you just wanted your father’s land and money, am I not right?” interrogated Aura, “Now you came on the point! Correct!” said Lucian. “Say your last words” said Aura with a knife in her hand. “You don’t have any proof that I am guilty! Oh! Shame- shame how can you commit a crime like this. Would you?” said Lucian. “I do have a proof, and it is in front of you!” said Aura. There was a Camera Device that had captured how Lucian had murdered his father. “You Wit” – and poof, Lucian was now in hell that he deserved. Even in the ‘Courte’ she was not found guilty and now she had gotten her revenge she wanted to take. Maybe, some person in this world in a corner is doing something wrong and some people like Aura, were born to teach them a lesson. Maybe?
Written By
Amy Nath
LivelyHood(Amy)
Lively Hood
CHAPTER 1
New Times
It was a normal day for the people of Panama in Latin America, people were busy with their own work. But a girl named Aura was happy in her own world.
She was a gray eyed girl with white skin, and a mind of great knowledge. Curly hair that fell on her beautiful shoulders that were burdened with a sick mother and a drunkard father’s worries. Still she was happy with what she had.
While a young gentleman of twenty was to be going to London for higher studies. His name was Lucian.
He was a tall lad. Never had he seen poverty in his entire life. He was the son of the owner of the United Local Dairy, it was an important part of the whole town. He was very rich but very kind hearted.
“I hope I could see father” sighed Lucian one hot afternoon, while getting ready for going to visit the nearby dairy. While he was waking on the narrow road. Suddenly he banged into a girl carrying a basket of dry grass to feed the cows in the farm.
“Oh! I beg your pardon!” said Lucian picking up the grass on the road that had fallen. “It’s ok. I am so so sorry for banging in you. I am very sorry” said Aura hastily picking up the grass. “Please take care of yourself miss!” said Lucian. “I will” said Aura.
On her way she said to herself, ‘How clumsy I am. I made the son of Mr. Grant Willow Roberts pick up the grasses’
When she reached home, that poor little girl saw that all her newly planted crops of rice had dried. She hastily picked up the hose to try and rescue all the hard work she had done to plant those. But it all had been vain for it already was too late.
While, at home Lucian was buried deep in the thoughts of the girl he banged into on his way to the dairy. He thought to himself, ‘That girl was MAGIC. How beautiful was her eyes, like a fairy in the fairy land’.
“In whose thoughts do you seem engaged?” said his mother. “Nothing mother” sighed Lucian. “Isn’t it a girl? It is written on your face. And do NOT dare to lie!” exclaimed his mother. “Not at all mother!” said Lucian trying to hide his blushed up cheeks.
“Come on!! Spit it out!” said his mother. “Well, you already know it” blushed Lucian. “Come on tell how you met her” said his excited mother. “I will tell you everything but only if you give me the pancakes you used to make before!” said Lucian.
“DEAL!!!” said his mother. Then he stated explaining everything in detail.
Chapter 2
Betrayed or Not?
Not knowing what the other person was thinking she went to his house or you can call ‘Palace’ to apologize. When she got of the carriage and saw Lucian gardening. She thought of him to be the gardener.
“Mister, do you know where Mr. Grant Willow Robert’s son is?” said Aura. “He is… It’s me” said Lucian while he recognized Aura.
While he was talking to her, he felt, he was flying in the sky. Everything seemed black only THAT girl was colorful.
“Oh! I beg your pardon!” said Aura bowing down to apologies. “No need for that I am happy you are here!” said Lucian. “What do you mean!” said Aura. “I am so sorry, I didn’t mean it at all. By the way, could you tell your name” said Lucian. “Oh! It’s ok, my name is Aura” said Aura. With a blush on his face Lucian said “What a beautiful name! Aura… I… Could we talk for now?”. “Sure…” said Aura recognizing the meaning but she kept it in her heart and not let it burst out.
Then the two kept chit-chatting for a quiet of long time. Aura knew that Mr. Grant won’t let her and Lucian keep a relationship between them. Not even friendship. They were very rich and would get their son married to a princess or a very rich family’s girl. Not to some roadside girl who struggles to survive and doesn’t even have a proper house to live in. In those times, most of the rich families used to take a lot, a LOT of dowry. While she didn’t even have enough money to even buy groceries. They had to farm rice to even have food. And also they were in huge debts. How could they even think about their daughter’s marriage? They even forgot that they had to get their daughter married.
His mother kept looking at them chit-chatting and giggled and went to do her work.
It already had been a lot of days but Lucian, kept thinking about their meeting and sat on the easy chair. He only had a fortnight to stay in Panama, after it he had to leave for London.
He sent her a letter to her to inform her about his departure. In the letter it was written:
Dear Aura,
I have sent this letter to inform you about my departure to London. I have got only a fortnight in Panama. If… If we could meet… I will wait for you in the Dumpy Woods.
Yours Sincerely
Lucian
Aura was shocked when she saw this letter she could not believe her eyes. She went to his house and hugged him as she saw him and said Aura with tears in her eyes “I won’t be able to live without you, I am in love with you, please don’t leave now, not now!!” “I will have to go now… I hate to say goodbye! I will miss you a lot, I too had the same feelings!” said Lucian.
“Why didn’t you propose me before when you had the same feelings!!” cried Aura. “I was not sure if you liked me!” said Lucian. While Aura didn’t know all that he said was the truth or not.
Chapter 3
Long Time
It had been a long time since Lucian had left, while he was busy in studies, Aura was still thinking about him, about their time together and missed him terribly and cried that if he was with her. But her ‘Detective Spirit’ had not vanished, and she went to his friend’s house, and asked what he said to him about her. He was totally shocked and could not understand when it happened. Did he not tell it to him about them? Was he betrayed by his own friend? Maybe.
But Aura forgot everything and soon came to know that Lucian was coming in the next week. She was so happy and made some Cocadas Blancas and went to his house to give it to him. He said “It has been a long time” “Yes, it has” “I missed you terribly” “Me too! I am so happy you are here” “Me too!” “I… Love… You” “I… Love you… Too!”
And they came close and kissed each other. Aww how cute! [TILL NOW] But she did not know what he was about to do.
Suddenly he fell on the floor and his mother saw it and some foam came out of his mouth. “Someone call a doctor!! Hurry up!!!!” cried Aura. Now what would happen to this beautiful love story? Well the doctor said that he was food poisoned and asked him if he had any food 4 hours back, and he said “I… went… to nowhere,… but… Aura fed me some Cocadas Blancas…” said Lucian in his trembling voice. Isn’t it shocking he lied she didn’t feed him any Cocadas Blancas. It was unfair and now what happened was terrible with that poor girl.
Chapter 4
Revenge
Soon, when Aura came to her house all stressed, she saw blood drops on the floor and called “Mother! What happ” – and saw that horrifying scene of her mother and father dead on the floor!!!
“Mother!!!” Aura said and started crying. She understood it was all Mr. Grant’s doing. A rule was made in Panama that whoever had a daughter, after her parents died, the village chief would take it, and the village chief was Mr. Grant. Unfair right?
“I… Shall get revenge… I shall, he… he shall say sorry and will lose, he tries to get!” said Aura and wiped her tears. She was so angry that she went to his house in the night and went into Mr. Grant’s room and as soon as he saw her he said “What are you doing here? You witch!!” said Mr. Grant. “Mr. Grant you don’t understand your son just wants your property, I think you should come with me. Please believe me!!! I insist!!” exclaimed Aura. “My son could never” – and as he turned his head he saw his son with a knife and Lucian said “Ha-ha! Even you are waiting to die from my hands, but I won’t kill you because, otherwise you will kill me right? Ha-ha!” and the knife swiftly came out of Mr. Grant’s neck. “Now it’” – and as he turned to try and kill Aura he saw that Aura was not there and said “That Witch!!” with anger. Now everything will be Lucian’s, anyone who came in his way was killed. In the same way he killed his friend and all his caretakers and his own mother who loved him more than his father who came to know about this work of him.
“I have to do something, I can’t Lucian kill anybody else!!” said Aura the next day she went to his house in the night and came near his bed. She had a cloth that had chlorine and soon he fainted, she took him and tied him with rope.
“Huh! Where am I?” said Lucian, “In the house you wanted” said a voice, “Oh! Aura! Ha-ha, would you really kill me Huh!! Would you commit such a messy crime?” said Lucian. “I would, I saw how you killed your father, your mother. They loved you more than they loved each other! Why did you do this?” said Aura. “I had to because… she came to know about it. What would you do if you were in my place?” said Lucian, “I wouldn’t have ever committed such a crime in the first place!!” said Aura. “I had to, wou”- “No, you just wanted your father’s land and money, am I not right?” interrogated Aura, “Now you came on the point! Correct!” said Lucian. “Say your last words” said Aura with a knife in her hand. “You don’t have any proof that I am guilty! Oh! Shame- shame how can you commit a crime like this. Would you?” said Lucian. “I do have a proof, and it is in front of you!” said Aura. There was a Camera Device that had captured how Lucian had murdered his father. “You Wit” – and poof, Lucian was now in hell that he deserved. Even in the ‘Courte’ she was not found guilty and now she had gotten her revenge she wanted to take. Maybe, some person in this world in a corner is doing something wrong and some people like Aura, were born to teach them a lesson. Maybe?
Written By
Amy Nath
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