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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 02/19/2023
Deadly LoveStory
Born 2009, M, from Kerala, IndiaNagoya’s Police had witnessed the death of many people in road accidents but for the first time they saw such suicide of a person in an apartment. The police brought down 19-year-old Seiichi’s body from the the ceiling fan and after investigating the full room, they found a letter, with which a girl's photo was also attached. That letter was the suicide note of Seiichi. He had written in it that his life is in danger and whatever is happening to him is because of the girl in the photograph, Anne Von. He wrote that the girl in the photo had ruined his life. He came back to Juso as soon as he finished his college. Some strange things started happening to him. One day he was getting late for an important meeting and was going there while driving his car, but suddenly his car's brakes failed.,It was very weird because his car was running perfectly fine until the night before. Due to brake failure, he had an accident in which his one arm was fractured and he also got a deep injury on his head but in a state of unconsciousness, when he looked outside the window of his car, he saw Anne. On seeing her, he suddenly fainted. When he regained consciousness he was at hospital. He accepted that whole incident happened cause of him itself and forgot about that but after a few days one night his mom and dad woke him up from his sleep and saw that the windows of his house were broken. Someone had damaged his house by throwing stones. Even that night, he felt that the girl in the photo, Anne was standing outside his house. He came out of the house and tried to find her in the nearby streets, but she could not be found anywhere. After that nothing happened for several days but then one weekend when he was with his girlfriend Tilty at her home, something happened which made his heart tremble. He and Tilty were standing in the balcony of their bedroom talking about love and affection suddenly their apartment bell rang. He had just gone to collect dinner, when suddenly he heard the sound of Tilty shouting loudly from the balcony, He ran towards the balcony but by then it was too late she was lying lifeless on the ground floor body covered with blood. When he looked down carefully, Anne was standing near the lifeless body of Tilty looking up at him. He ran towards her but as soon as he reached her she was already gone. he had not even recovered from the shock of his girlfriend’ s death. Only after 2 days, he got the news that his house had caught fire, in which his entire house got burnt. Moreover, his mother and father also died in that fire accident. At the same time he got a call from an unknown number. When he picked up the call a girl was laughing like crazy. He understood from her voice that the girl was none other than his friend after that suddenly the call got disconnected. They loved each other very much in college but after the college was over, he had broken up with Anne and since then his life was in trouble. When he went to the Police and told them that all this was Anne's doing and she was taking revenge for the breakup with me, the police did not pay much attention to his statement. He wrote in his letter that the police was in connivance with her. The police got a doctor to prove in the court that Seiichi lost his girlfriend and parents. He have lost his mental balance and has been sent to Psychiatric hospital but even in that, Anne did not stop following him. He wrote in the letter that she used to leave insects in his room every night who used to torture him throughout the night. He was convinced after tolerating all this for a long time that someone is also found in the Psychiatric hospital. One day, seeing the opportunity, he ran away from there and came directly to Nagoya. He wrote at the end of his letter that He sees Anne every day even in Nagoya and if anything happens to him, only Anne will be responsible for it. Police finished reading the letter but after that the case became even more complicated for them because according to the forensic report, no one else but he himself had hanged there, but no signs of anyone else were found in his entire room. Police got the CCTV footage checked around his apartment. They did not see any appearance of a girl in that. After going to the Nagoya Police, when the details of Anne's house were investigated, it was found that she used to live in that house many years ago. She had also committed suicide in college due to that incident one of her boyfriend and her mother died a few days later in the same way. Gave that the best friend told the police that the boy for whom Anne had love was Seiichi. She was very good in studies. Seiichi used to get her to write his assignments and exams and hence he was faking love with her. Once Anne caught him cheating on her with another girl and that is why Anne committed suicide after college. After taking all the information from Police and after dismembering the body nearby but after checking all other documents police have understand that Anne had never committed suicide and she had killed Seiichi. The police continue their investigation and eventually gather enough evidence to prove that Anne was responsible for Seiichi's death. Anne's past actions and mental health issues are taken into account during the trial, and she is sentenced to life in prison. During her time in prison, Anne is able to reflect on her actions and seek help for her mental health issues. She realizes that taking revenge on Seiichi was not the answer and that it only caused more pain and suffering for everyone involved. Meanwhile Seiichi's loved ones are able to find closure and begin the process of healing. They hold onto the memories of Seiichi and the love he brought into their lives.
Taking someone's life can never be justified, and that seeking help for mental health issues is important for the well-being of oneself and those around them. Love should never lead to revenge or violence, and it is important to treat others with kindness and respect, even in difficult situations.
Deadly LoveStory(Achu biju)
Nagoya’s Police had witnessed the death of many people in road accidents but for the first time they saw such suicide of a person in an apartment. The police brought down 19-year-old Seiichi’s body from the the ceiling fan and after investigating the full room, they found a letter, with which a girl's photo was also attached. That letter was the suicide note of Seiichi. He had written in it that his life is in danger and whatever is happening to him is because of the girl in the photograph, Anne Von. He wrote that the girl in the photo had ruined his life. He came back to Juso as soon as he finished his college. Some strange things started happening to him. One day he was getting late for an important meeting and was going there while driving his car, but suddenly his car's brakes failed.,It was very weird because his car was running perfectly fine until the night before. Due to brake failure, he had an accident in which his one arm was fractured and he also got a deep injury on his head but in a state of unconsciousness, when he looked outside the window of his car, he saw Anne. On seeing her, he suddenly fainted. When he regained consciousness he was at hospital. He accepted that whole incident happened cause of him itself and forgot about that but after a few days one night his mom and dad woke him up from his sleep and saw that the windows of his house were broken. Someone had damaged his house by throwing stones. Even that night, he felt that the girl in the photo, Anne was standing outside his house. He came out of the house and tried to find her in the nearby streets, but she could not be found anywhere. After that nothing happened for several days but then one weekend when he was with his girlfriend Tilty at her home, something happened which made his heart tremble. He and Tilty were standing in the balcony of their bedroom talking about love and affection suddenly their apartment bell rang. He had just gone to collect dinner, when suddenly he heard the sound of Tilty shouting loudly from the balcony, He ran towards the balcony but by then it was too late she was lying lifeless on the ground floor body covered with blood. When he looked down carefully, Anne was standing near the lifeless body of Tilty looking up at him. He ran towards her but as soon as he reached her she was already gone. he had not even recovered from the shock of his girlfriend’ s death. Only after 2 days, he got the news that his house had caught fire, in which his entire house got burnt. Moreover, his mother and father also died in that fire accident. At the same time he got a call from an unknown number. When he picked up the call a girl was laughing like crazy. He understood from her voice that the girl was none other than his friend after that suddenly the call got disconnected. They loved each other very much in college but after the college was over, he had broken up with Anne and since then his life was in trouble. When he went to the Police and told them that all this was Anne's doing and she was taking revenge for the breakup with me, the police did not pay much attention to his statement. He wrote in his letter that the police was in connivance with her. The police got a doctor to prove in the court that Seiichi lost his girlfriend and parents. He have lost his mental balance and has been sent to Psychiatric hospital but even in that, Anne did not stop following him. He wrote in the letter that she used to leave insects in his room every night who used to torture him throughout the night. He was convinced after tolerating all this for a long time that someone is also found in the Psychiatric hospital. One day, seeing the opportunity, he ran away from there and came directly to Nagoya. He wrote at the end of his letter that He sees Anne every day even in Nagoya and if anything happens to him, only Anne will be responsible for it. Police finished reading the letter but after that the case became even more complicated for them because according to the forensic report, no one else but he himself had hanged there, but no signs of anyone else were found in his entire room. Police got the CCTV footage checked around his apartment. They did not see any appearance of a girl in that. After going to the Nagoya Police, when the details of Anne's house were investigated, it was found that she used to live in that house many years ago. She had also committed suicide in college due to that incident one of her boyfriend and her mother died a few days later in the same way. Gave that the best friend told the police that the boy for whom Anne had love was Seiichi. She was very good in studies. Seiichi used to get her to write his assignments and exams and hence he was faking love with her. Once Anne caught him cheating on her with another girl and that is why Anne committed suicide after college. After taking all the information from Police and after dismembering the body nearby but after checking all other documents police have understand that Anne had never committed suicide and she had killed Seiichi. The police continue their investigation and eventually gather enough evidence to prove that Anne was responsible for Seiichi's death. Anne's past actions and mental health issues are taken into account during the trial, and she is sentenced to life in prison. During her time in prison, Anne is able to reflect on her actions and seek help for her mental health issues. She realizes that taking revenge on Seiichi was not the answer and that it only caused more pain and suffering for everyone involved. Meanwhile Seiichi's loved ones are able to find closure and begin the process of healing. They hold onto the memories of Seiichi and the love he brought into their lives.
Taking someone's life can never be justified, and that seeking help for mental health issues is important for the well-being of oneself and those around them. Love should never lead to revenge or violence, and it is important to treat others with kindness and respect, even in difficult situations.
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Gail Moore
02/19/2023An extremely psycho person is alway good to stay far away from.
Your story should have been broken into more paragraphs, and a little over the top.
Great story though, well done. :-)
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