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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 01/02/2023
"Fate of an Orphan"
Six year old Mohsin was playing with his class fellow in the backyard. His fateer entered into the house. Riaz brought the toys for his son. As his son Mohsin saw him, he started running towards him. His father kissed him and gave him all the toys. Rimsha’s Mohsin’s mother was cooking meal in the kitchen. She called both of them to come and eat the meal. It was a very prosper family.
Mohsin was very good in studies. He always gets first position in the class. One day Riaz’s family a news that Riaz met an accident returning back to home from office. He was taken to a hospital bu he could not survive.
Rimsha and her son were alone at home. A few months later she sold her house ad her brother visited her in order to take her to his house. She along with her son went to her brother’s house. Rimsha’s brother Moez was a very nice guy but he was not financially stable. Moez’s wife Maheen was a rude lady.
After a couple of days, Maheen asked her to take part in the house chores. Rimsha used to have servants in her house. She never did any work at her own home. But now she starts doing work in the house. Maheen used to tease her a lot.
Maheen’s son Hashir was studied in the prestigious school of the city having extremely high fee charges.
But Mohhenn was admitted in the government school. Once Maheen put oney in an open place intentionally so that Mohsin took them and she would succeeded in her plan. Maheen starting screaming as she lost her money and she had doubt in Mohsen and wanted to search him. When he searched for monay, she recovered the amount from him. Rimsha hit him a lot and while crying that he was not like that before.
Once a proposal come for Rimsha. The guy’s wife was died leaving a son behind. Moez did not know what to do. Rimsha kept own insisting to accept the proposal for her son’s better future.
After the maerriage, Rimsha looks angry . Allthough Moneeb cares for Rimsha a lot. He brings gift for Rimsha everyday. But Rimsha was missing his son and was sad. But Muneeb finds out that Rimsha is sad because of her son. He allow Rimsha’s son to come to her house.
Mohsin came to Muneeb house. At first, he treats him well but gradually shows discrimination between Zaviyan and Mohsin. He brings two things for his son but not for Mohsin. If Mohsin plays along with his toy then Zaviyan complain to his father, Muneeb would abuse h im infront of his mother.
Ten years later, now Mohsin and Zaviyan had grown up. Mohsin was very intelligent and wanted to be admitted in a good university. Rimsha also recommended her husband fo her son Mohsen admission,butt he refused. He admitted his son Zaviyan to the top university of the city. On the other hand Mohsin used to take part in sports and other activities and he won any gold medals.
But the abuse and discrimination in his throughout life left an impression on Mohsin mind that how much his father had wronged hi
Whenever he saw his stepfather all the bad memories came to his mind and he start hitting all the things around him. Now his cousin came to his house whose name is Bushra. She is very intelligent. She came from the village. She came here in order to studied in the university.
Bushra and Mhsin were inteillegent and both helped each other in the studies. While Zavyan an incompetent in the studies and ppalyed games all the time and was mostly resent outside the house. That’s why Bushra nd Zaviyan were not talking too much.
Rimsha come to know that Mohsin and Bushra ae growing up. One day she goes to Bushra while she was busy with srudies, she says her that she want to talk to her on some matter. She said that her son listen her very carefully and he likes her very much so please marry his son. She said that she need some time to think about it. After a while she said that she is ready and accepted the proposal.
Then Rimsha call Mohsin’ son to listen to me carefully. She said him that Bushra is very good girl and will take care of you. He said that he would not married but later on he agrees.
Now Zaviyan thinks that she should not married to Mohsin. One day Bushra was workig in the kitchen, Zaviyan goes to her and says her that why are are you marrying to my brother? He has mentalproblems. At first she was silent the she speak up and laugh and said that you are telling the truth and I should not marry him.
Then Bushra said to Mhsin that she is not ready to marry him. The he start going to hs room. He broken all he things in his room.Her mother hear the noise, she rushes to his son room. His son tpld him everything.
After that Mohsin goes abroad. Initially he was an employee but latter he becomes a big businessman and invites his mother along with him. Now he strat living happily.
"Fate of an orphan"(Ruqia Farid)
"Fate of an Orphan"
Six year old Mohsin was playing with his class fellow in the backyard. His fateer entered into the house. Riaz brought the toys for his son. As his son Mohsin saw him, he started running towards him. His father kissed him and gave him all the toys. Rimsha’s Mohsin’s mother was cooking meal in the kitchen. She called both of them to come and eat the meal. It was a very prosper family.
Mohsin was very good in studies. He always gets first position in the class. One day Riaz’s family a news that Riaz met an accident returning back to home from office. He was taken to a hospital bu he could not survive.
Rimsha and her son were alone at home. A few months later she sold her house ad her brother visited her in order to take her to his house. She along with her son went to her brother’s house. Rimsha’s brother Moez was a very nice guy but he was not financially stable. Moez’s wife Maheen was a rude lady.
After a couple of days, Maheen asked her to take part in the house chores. Rimsha used to have servants in her house. She never did any work at her own home. But now she starts doing work in the house. Maheen used to tease her a lot.
Maheen’s son Hashir was studied in the prestigious school of the city having extremely high fee charges.
But Mohhenn was admitted in the government school. Once Maheen put oney in an open place intentionally so that Mohsin took them and she would succeeded in her plan. Maheen starting screaming as she lost her money and she had doubt in Mohsen and wanted to search him. When he searched for monay, she recovered the amount from him. Rimsha hit him a lot and while crying that he was not like that before.
Once a proposal come for Rimsha. The guy’s wife was died leaving a son behind. Moez did not know what to do. Rimsha kept own insisting to accept the proposal for her son’s better future.
After the maerriage, Rimsha looks angry . Allthough Moneeb cares for Rimsha a lot. He brings gift for Rimsha everyday. But Rimsha was missing his son and was sad. But Muneeb finds out that Rimsha is sad because of her son. He allow Rimsha’s son to come to her house.
Mohsin came to Muneeb house. At first, he treats him well but gradually shows discrimination between Zaviyan and Mohsin. He brings two things for his son but not for Mohsin. If Mohsin plays along with his toy then Zaviyan complain to his father, Muneeb would abuse h im infront of his mother.
Ten years later, now Mohsin and Zaviyan had grown up. Mohsin was very intelligent and wanted to be admitted in a good university. Rimsha also recommended her husband fo her son Mohsen admission,butt he refused. He admitted his son Zaviyan to the top university of the city. On the other hand Mohsin used to take part in sports and other activities and he won any gold medals.
But the abuse and discrimination in his throughout life left an impression on Mohsin mind that how much his father had wronged hi
Whenever he saw his stepfather all the bad memories came to his mind and he start hitting all the things around him. Now his cousin came to his house whose name is Bushra. She is very intelligent. She came from the village. She came here in order to studied in the university.
Bushra and Mhsin were inteillegent and both helped each other in the studies. While Zavyan an incompetent in the studies and ppalyed games all the time and was mostly resent outside the house. That’s why Bushra nd Zaviyan were not talking too much.
Rimsha come to know that Mohsin and Bushra ae growing up. One day she goes to Bushra while she was busy with srudies, she says her that she want to talk to her on some matter. She said that her son listen her very carefully and he likes her very much so please marry his son. She said that she need some time to think about it. After a while she said that she is ready and accepted the proposal.
Then Rimsha call Mohsin’ son to listen to me carefully. She said him that Bushra is very good girl and will take care of you. He said that he would not married but later on he agrees.
Now Zaviyan thinks that she should not married to Mohsin. One day Bushra was workig in the kitchen, Zaviyan goes to her and says her that why are are you marrying to my brother? He has mentalproblems. At first she was silent the she speak up and laugh and said that you are telling the truth and I should not marry him.
Then Bushra said to Mhsin that she is not ready to marry him. The he start going to hs room. He broken all he things in his room.Her mother hear the noise, she rushes to his son room. His son tpld him everything.
After that Mohsin goes abroad. Initially he was an employee but latter he becomes a big businessman and invites his mother along with him. Now he strat living happily.
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